An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED)

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Amanram

@Amanram

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Awesome but very very mysterious. Are we getting glimpses of what it could be like between ARSHI or are we getting glimpses of their past too. Hmm... me think a bit of both. I love the way you describe that inevitable pull between the two protagonists of this story. there seems to have been so much that has happened to Arnav and Khushi in their recent past - wonder if they are linked in any way or is it just two random people who were eventually meant to be soulmates through an unforgettable journey of Seduction...

PS - So you are the 'On the Go author' and 'Most Versatile Author' on the forum. Not Bad! Congrats on these wins

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sindhu

@misscrazyfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

omg that was amazing amazing update...

just loved the narration of the situations...

its like we r in the world os arshi in sheeshmahal with incomplete workouts,,,,

what an seducing thoughts which r incomplete in the mind of complete awareness...

waiitng waiitng

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#333

I am intrigued by the all pervasive air of mystery in this story. I am imagining that there is some history that connects Arnav and Knushi and sheesh Mahal. May be it's my over active imagination but there is a connection.

What has happened to him in huge last year and who is the woman who called him...

Why do I feel like Khushi knows more than he does...she has an agenda...

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arshi21

@arshi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Bhai. App genius ho.

I caught up with prologue and chapter 1...and i LOVED it.

How interesting the tale is! :D Loving it! :)

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Marvelous update...Totally loved the way u started by describing the once magnificent mahal which is now in ruins...n then arnav gets the first glimpse of khushi n the multitude of emotions that he feels...wow ...d way u portray their feelings it makes reading all the more magical..why I feel that there is a connection betn Arnav n khushi...like there's something with their past...There's an air of mystery surrounding them...n its very intriguing...I'm already in love with this story...Will be waiting for the next one...thanks a lot for updating.

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#336

fantabulous opening

dr fst glimpses of each othr vr awsum

lukng fwd

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#337

That was great. So much mystery. Eagerly waiting to read more.

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nnhk

@nnhk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#338

I can now say for sure that the queen of cliffhangers is also THE QUEEN OF INTRICATE DETAILING.

I love the way you have written all the detailed description of the work on the pillars and the walls and then the mention of zardozi, kaamdani, gotta work and all.

There is the pull between the two of them and am now itching to read the next update

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#339

Yes another one of your masterpieces!

I just hated how sheesh mahal was never used in the show! I swear that's what drew me to this epic show

I love the start already! Waiting for more