An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED)

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#311

wow it seems they know each other somehow

what happened to him?

this story makes me want to read on and on and on

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tvbuf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#312

What a fantastic chapter 1 - LOVED it. Gad to see a good interaction between Arnav and Khushi, right from the get go, Recently read a FF that left me wanting - it always left the reader hanging to complete the scene. This is AWESOME !!!

Thanks for the PM

Waiting for next ch 😛

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#313

I still don't quite understand what exactly it is that pulls them to one another - but then I guess thats the thrill. I'm sure you'll reveal something later in the story that will shock the living daylights out of me 😛

Now who is the seducer and who is the victim ? They both seem to be absolutely bewitched by each other. But it does appear that it is Arnav who has fallen into this deeper than her.. doing so many things so uncharacteristic of him. Khushi, on the other hand, shows no signs of bashfulness or coyness - she is at her confident best, talking to him with such ease.. telling him that he is the most remarkable man she has met as effortlessly as talking about the weather!

They have both been underground for sometime now. What happened to Arnav a year back ? Why does he insist on staying at the housekeeper's inn ? Why has Khushi locked herself up away from the rest of the world before this. Why do they both feel that this is the time - for him to restore Sheesh Mahal and for her to finally break her self imposed restrictions ?

Oh and Aman. I'm already liking the relationship he shares with Arnav.. they also share a connection, don't they ?

Oooh Juhi, how am I to work when so many kostins are playing around in my Seduced mind ? 😕

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Maya

@What_the

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Posted: 11 years ago

#314

Loved it...the palpable tension...all this from just a ;glimpse...loved your detailed writing...

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#315

Well that was an amazing start
Oh dear
So Arnav has lived abroad and now is restoring Sheesh Mahal
Khushi is helping
This is getting interesting
I can't wait for more

Your stories are amazing

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Cute6

@Cute6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#316

expel jii how do yoou come up with this impacting and dhamakedaar update everytym...the relationship that arnav khushi share and the attraction automatically comes up just lyk that.. but this story is keeping me hooked to it...

i know there is lots more to come along with your cliifis as well..vaiting for next one...

P.S: about your s connection il give you a title of ekta kapoor of fan fictions forum😆( but not in terms of stories though you are no where compared to all those horrifying serials she produces im just linking it to the k factor😆)

and then im missing your khushi in red dress i guess that will be wen a expel ji vala passionate kiss will happen😆

Edited by Cute6 - 11 years ago

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#317

Loved the introduction of the characters and how you have twisted and shaped up their personalities. Mystrious aura around Khushi is interesting and confusing at the same time. I always loved khushi's cheerful attitude, will this khushi be like that?
Waiting for the next one,
Thankz fir the PM

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#318

wonderful start...an confident khushi i like that

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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#319

Awesome story. Already seduced by it. Looking forward to next part.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#320

I have one word...for this chapter...Completely..Mesmerizing...if this was chapter one...and I'm like...what is happening...then what more's in store...Juhi..you have once again outdone yourself...Brilliant writing and just flawless!

So much mystery...it's an art you have...just to keep one craving...I just love Arnav and Khushi...here...seems like two ends of a pole...in every aspect...awesome!

I love the that you fancy the S..titles...seems so uniquely..meant for you!