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Posted: 11 years ago
so sweet that he took blessings just to please her

afraid of what he will do when he finds out why they were separated
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsomee update...!!!
Suprb..!!!!
Arnav is very upset on khushis parents..
I hope their misunderstanding will be clear soon after they return..
Arnav care a lot for khushi..only for her he took blessing frm her parents..
Wowww!! Nw they going on honeymoon..!!!!
Waiting for their first night ;-) 😉 😛 😳
Edited by sana27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
tune bataya nai aur unres kr dia
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
khushi parents part is emotional
i also want to know how will arnav react when he find out that khuhi parents blame khushi for his parents death
now they arr going to honeymoon
i am waiting for next part
updt soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
N seriously a big fan of urs...love ur work
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg!!
i m in love wid ur work yaar😳
truely superb..
very emotion, every thing was perfect in the place..
arnav's desperateness, khushi's teasing..
and the yelling because he simply cant keep
his desires in control😆
but the shashi khushi part was damn emotional..
that was simply looking like a true bidai and i know that was..
because u had shown every rasam again
but the bidai was not simple like others bcuz there were so
much sorrows, questions and pain..
and i m damn scared from arnav's reaction wen he will
know that they made khushi seperated from him
bcuz of some
bakwaas kundali dosh!!
but the update so beautiful that i was having
goosebumps when he kissed her in the flight
gosh!! i just cant wait for their first night..
finally wo din aa hi gaya jiska hume tha intezaar!!
wo ghadi aa gayi aa gayi,
first night ko hume padhna hai baar baar..
🤣
damn!!
update soon otherwise i will go
mad singing and dreaming abt their first night☺️
fabulous update..
and beatifully written yr👏
loved it to the bits❤️
Edited by flutterlashes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
this update was emotional+ light hearted
shashi and garima got very emotional seeing khushi so happy as they failed to her the happiness she deserves
i can understand why arnav doesnt like guptas as he has seen khushi breaking down
he is such a possessive and loving husband so he wont give in so easily
but he realized that khushi is torn between him and her father. so give in to khushi's wish and took their blessings
loved that part

"tell him to stop his monstrous acts " 🤣 this cracked me up. and shashi widened his eyes. and khushi was embarrased

and happy that arnav decided tp give a second chance to shashi
i dont think he will stop until he gets his answers

loved the way arnav teased khushi while she was crying
khushi was a confused soul when she arrived the airport
but soon enough she grasped the reason behind their arrival to the airport

"Away from people, away from work, to your favorite place, for 7 days, just you, me a.n.d...m.a.y. be a duvet."

loved that line ☺️

when they entered the jet the lovesick arnav changed into asr
khushi was amazed
loved the jet.

"You got amazing taste."
"Which is why I chose YOU!"

loved that!!!
he really knows how to make khushi feel special

" Look away for now. You will be given plenty more chances to explore it" ☺️

ahem. ahem. arnav becomes extremely naughty when he is grumpy and couldnt do anything witj khushi. 😆
His rants made me laugh 🤣
he is just too cute sometimes just like khushi said

arnav asked khushi to change quick as he was unable control himself seeing her in that saree
khushi didnt get it at first why he was behaving that way. but finally shr did

bunny teeth!!! 🤣

Khushi got angry and upset when arnav talked to her rudely

" Dont you guys have anything better than to discuss my moves on bed?" 🤣 🤣

loved the way arnav made her understand about her priorities
and he wont give up looking for answers until he gets them
he will be angry at himself and will hate himself when he comes to know about all
one thing i am very sure about is he can never hate khushi

will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just love it. thank u for the update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the update. Love the way Arnav cares n protects Khushi..

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