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Hey Friends...Here is the KR version of one of my SwaRon OS ...i am posting it for my Kriyanshian friends...hope you will like this OS... plz bear me with the mistakes ...


This is dedicated to all my Kriyanshian friends and readers😊...I am posting this for KriYansh week..😃

This is dedicated to Harshita...get well soon sweetheart🤗

Thanks Snigdha,Asma,Deetha,Vaish,Upasna,Anky for being so sweet and supportive to me 😳🤗

Yogini,Payal(my smarty ),Kuhu,Shenz,Jas ,Sneha ,esha for being such sweet hearts 😊🤗


HAPPY BIRTHDAY KONPAL😳🤗




P.S- Thanx Himani for this Awesome Siggy ..Luv u baby🤗



Moon was peeping through the window...he was trying hard to get the view inside...an angel was lying on her bed...resting on her stomach...her baby pink satin night dress ended just below her thighs...she was moving her legs in a carefree manner and as a result of which her anklets were adding a beautiful melody to the deep silence of the night...


She was wearing a confused yet serious expression on her beautiful face...as if she was trying hard to think something...holding her pen in between her lips...pressing it with her lips...she wrote something...and blushed a deep shade of red...biting her lower lip..

She kept writing with a sweet expression on her beautiful face...her each and every words were reminding her about HIM...his angelic face...sharp features...deep brown eyes...perfect nose...beautifully carved lips...perfectly shaped cheek bones...he was just perfect ..a perfect Greek god...

The naughty glint in those brown orbs...that angelic smile which enlightens her day...his silky stylish hair ...they make him look even more attractive...only if that's possible...she always felt an uncontrollable desire of moving her finger in those hair...whenever she did so ..the pout on his handsome face...trying hard to give an angry expression but failing...he always looked oh-so-adorable that very moment..

She was lost in the thoughts of that handsome hunk ..the love of her life..His mere thought always made her go weak on her knees...she felt his warm breath on her bare shoulder...it made her dizzy...her eyes were already closed...in the darkness...only his angelic face was shining...She felt his soft lips on her bare creamy skin...her breaths became heavier with each passing moment...

Ohh Rey...look...what have you done to me...i can't even stay away from you for two days...i keep hallucinating about you...she muttered under her breath...breathing heavily ..someone smirked listening to her words...

His lips traveled all over the bare part of her back...and he pulled down the strip of her night dress...to get more access to her creamy silky sensuous skin...

She was completely out of her senses by that time...and kept on moaning his name...she was lost in her own dream land...where she was in his embrace...and nothing else mattered...she kept moaning his name and turned around...now she was lying on her back...her diary was lying a bit far from her...on the bed...unprotected...

She felt his wet lips on hers...she smiled against his lips...and gave in completely ...he bite her lower lip gently and sucked all the sweetness stored in it...she parted her lips slightly giving him access to enter her mouth...he smirked against her lips...

And she heard his voice...

You lost the bet wifey...

Score 1-0


He whispered in a husky tone...near her ear...she felt his warm breath on her nape...shiver ran through her frame...

Here it is...in my hands...i got your Diary ...finally ...now I can read it.he said with a smirk on his oh-so-perfect face...

She jerked hearing his voice...and opened her eye...he was sitting in front her...on the bed...and in his hands ...she found her "Dear Diary"..

Re...Rey...tum...tum sach me yahan...tum toh Delhi me the...u lier...tum ne...tumne mujhe kaha ki tum tum kal aaoge...she was astonished ...to find him standing in front of her...he was still looking like a dream to her...or someone who just came out of her dreams...

You have to save your Diary Kria...or else...she bite her lower lip...in anticipation...and a slight blush tip toed to her cheeks..turning her face into crimson red...she was still lost in her dream world...she shook her head wildly to shoo away his thoughts...

Give me my diary back...NOW...she shouted...it helped her to come out of his trance...


Sach me matlab...tumhe kya laga princess..me koi sapna hu...awww...my baby...was dreaming about me...haaa...kya dekha sapne me...tell na...


He was laughing his heart out...teasing her...

He was standing in front her and moved the diary in front of her eyes...challenging her ...to catch it...

She tried to touch it...he kept his hand little higher ...and it was out of her reach...he being stronger between both ..kept on juggling her Diary from one hand to another...she hated her delicate frame that moment and cursed god for making him so muscular ...

She always loved his chiseled chest ...whenever he used to take her petite frame in his embrace..his touch made her melt in his arms...Being in his embrace ...she could hear his melodious heart beats...which chanted her name...passionately...

She finally patted her foot on the ground out of frustration and stood still...he again got the dairy to her level and teased her...

Tell me naa baby...kya dekha sapne me...my naughty baat-cutter...he said again...with a naughty breath taking smile on his face...

How the hell do you know that I was dreaming about you...koi aur bhi toh ho sakta he...she tried to take revenge...not accepting her defeat...

Haha...its written on ur crimson red cheeks that you were dreaming about me sweet heart...and my dear...you were moaning my name...so seductively...he teased her...

Score 2 - 0

She counted in her mind...you cant loose it Kria...Kria Ghai...correction...Kria Reyansh Singhania ne harna nhi sikha...she told herself...

She was busy giving the inspiring speech to herself and when she remembered his presence and the reason behind their tom and jerry chasing sequence...she recalled her Diary...her Dear Diary...

Mr Reyansh Singhania ...u have to pay for this ...give me my diary back...she roared at him...


I am too fast for you...catch me if you can...Mrs Kria Reyansh Singhania ...he ran for his life ...holding her diary in his hand...


They were running across the room like maniacs ...finally Rey stopped for a moment and turned around ...Kria who was running behind him ...unable to control herself ...fell on him...she was lying on him... her head was on his chest ...his face was covered with her silky tangles ...their hearts were beating in unison ...Rey tried to get up...but she was on him... he gave a quick peck on her lips and his fingers traveled her creamy silky bare back...her full lips seemed so inviting to him...he was drowning in her black orbs...when he recalled the reason behind their bet...Her Dear Diary...


He quickly rolled over her and sat on the bed...she sat on the bed and kept looking at her diary...her beautiful blackish eyes were requesting him not to open it...


He smirked and opened the diary...the page where she kept the bookmark...

She went stiff...her face was pale...as if she got caught red handed while doing some crime...

He stared at her face once and a naughty smile crept on his perfectly carved lips...she was giving him death glares...not to read her dairy...


You...you cant read it...its my personal diary...she said...


What personal wifey...i am your husband...no personal thingy with me...he teased her...


You cant read it...she shouted..


I am reading it sweetheart..he mocked her...


He started reading in a dramatic tone...to tease her ..


Intezar ki wo pehli pehli raaten

sard raaton ki wo mulaqatein


He looked up...she blushed to a deep shade of red...and lowered her gaze...she hide her face with her hands and peeped through the gap of her fingers...looking at him...


wo uljhi saanse kuch baatein karti thi

jab meri julfen tujhse lipat ti thi

wo kampte hothon ka chuna

wo dil me kasak sa uthna


He read the line and stared at her...she looked up...and found him staring at her...with glint of naughtiness in his deep brown eyes..


aapke naam ka jadoo sa chalta tha

sare gamon se dur hume le jata the


He smiled at the beautiful lines written by her...stretched his arms towards her and took her into his embrace...she quickly buried her head in his chest...


wo raatein ab akeli si lagti he

pehchane chahre ab paheli se lagte he


He caressed her hair and kissed them... She adjusted herself in his arms into a comfortable position...


aaj bhi intezar he dil ko

un haathon ka chune ka

un saason ka mehkna ka

dilon ke fir se chehkene ka


His fingers started moving on her bare creamy skin... she started unbuttoning his shirt and kissed his bare chest...


intezar ki wo pehli pehli raaten

Dilon me dabi huyi kuch ankahee battein...


He lifted her chin and made her look into his eyes...his deep brown eyes were full of love...love for her...


His deep dark brown orbs were fixed on her angelic face ...her beauty was beyond words to explain ...her glowing complexion was enhanced with the moonlight falling on her through the window ... Her face was glowing with the cool silver light on it ... his pure and perfect moon was giving tough competition to the one outside with many imperfections ...that moon was seriously jealous with this divine beauty in front of him...a heartfelt smile was painted on her pretty face.. giving his heart the reason to beat harder...and... harder ...


Her big beautiful black eyes...he was drowning in those ...they were his personal brand of alcohol...they made him loose his senses whenever he looked into them...her tiny perfect nose...her beautifully carved lips...her smudged lip-gloss due to the kiss they shared few minutes earlier...they were so inviting...


In no time he placed his lips on her soft lips ...he kissed her gently...the kiss went on to be passionate one...he bite her lower lip...she moaned his name...it excited him ...she moved her fingers in his hair ...he was holding her tiny waist ...his hands started moving on her bare back...she parted her lips slightly and he entered her mouth enjoying the sweetness...the sweetness of their love...

Score 2-2 ...it was a tie...finally...

After few minutes he broke the kiss as she was out of breath...he planted a trail of feather kisses on her shoulder...her neck...her jaw line...

So my princess missed me...hmmm...he said...stll kissing her jaw line...

She was completely in his trance...under the effect of the kiss they just shared...unable to find any words...she kept quite...

That was so beautiful baby...why were you hiding that poem from me...he inquired ...with a pout on his face...

She smiled at his adorableness...


I thought...she took a pause...


Ummm...he asked moving his brows


I thought ...you will make fun of me...i can't write like you...you write so beautifully...she answered with a cute expression on her beautiful face...


I won't...you poem was far better than the ones I write...love you princess..


Love you too baby...she placed her soft lips on his...next moment they were lost in their world of dreams..where no-one existed except the two of them...

Only moans kept ringing in the deep silence of the night creating beautiful melody along with the sweet music of the wind charm hanging in the window...

Moon was still peeping through the window...may be he was trying to locate the central character of that night...

The Diary...

Which was getting crushed under the weight of two angels ...busy making love to each other...




❤️❤️❤️



hey guys how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment ... i will wait for your comments and feedback ...



Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Link to the SWARON VERSION 😊


The Diary (swaRonOS)

Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 years ago
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Please add this ID to your buddy list for further PMs😳
Edited by deepffpm - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reserve.

==Unreserved==

Hmm...from where shud I start? ;)

I loved d way u described Kria in dat pink satin dress...

Kria writing the diary thinking abt reyaansh...

n the way she was blushing during that...

Her hallucinations of her handsome hunk...😛

N their game of seducements...

I loved d way u portrayed rey's presence n his feelings...

N their romance...*blush*

The poem was beautiful...

The way u penned down Rey n Kria's feelings as he reads the stanza's were brilliant...

And it ended with a tie...

"Only moans kept ringing in the deep silence of the night creating beautiful melody alongwith the sweet music of the wind charm hanging in the window"..

I am always in awww with this type of descriptions in ur write-ups!👏

A perfect OneShot...

Cute n Romantic❤️

Thanks for posting the KR Version Deeps😃🤗
Edited by snigdha_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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niether bad.. nor very bad... nor boring...

it is simply superb and mindblowing...👏😊

each and every emotions was described nycly...😊
awsome os dear...🤗
loved it..🤗🤗

thnks a lot for the pm
Edited by sumimita - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reserved!!!!!!
Unreserving..
Deep I cant Tell you how beautiful Your story is..
I loved the way each emotion of love was protrayed..
You are one fine writer who can explain emotions very well..
But that does not mean This surpasses your poems..Your poems still remain a top priority in my list of favs.
The game that occurred was cute and Kriya's thoughs penned up in the Diary made it special :)
Edited by asmaju - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i have already read it.. ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow di awesome update😊
loed it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely os
it was so sweet
love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum OS...👏..
Loved it...👍🏼
D poem was so beautiful...
Do write more such OS's...
U r truly an amazing writer...

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