KR OS : The Diary - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
It was such a bliss to have got the chance to review this. Though I never knew this was an old SwaRon Version.
Anyways who cares. until and unless its good, I don't at least.

I just loved this entire running behind for the diary though.
You know how much the score thing makes it working? Well A lot.. Its like one is chasing for the goal and the other is trying to do the same but with this common motive they have their personal goals to beat the other 😉

Finally its their love which wins.!! KR love 😳

Poems, remind me of you. Don't you write one. well whose the other one chasing for score then? 😛 Kidding!! 😃

Amazing job, as always. You are marvelous as a writer.
And thanks for mentioning me as a sweet heart but I doubt if I am one 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Unres'd on 1st page :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
such a beautiful OS di ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
res
unres

okay
deepika di your first ever kriyaansh work was amazing
that's why i read the KR instead of SS... 😆😆
it was beautiful di..
simply amazing..
kriya writing about rey in the diary
and the following hallucinations..
amazing di.. truly wow !!

thanks for the PM
do write more...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
very cute os
loved it
thnxx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Amazing os
starting was beautiful
kria is in pink night wear writing her diary nd thinking abt rey
haye! Loved it
nd her hallucination was written nicely nd rey's presence shocked her
then rey's teasing nd der chasing game
mindblowing!
Loved d u penned d scene when rey was reading kria's diary
poem was very nice
loved it
nd i loved d way u used d words nd described all d things
u r an amazing writer
I'm very impressed with ur work
plz do write more on kriyansh
dil se request h
plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
From d starting of d os.. I loved it..
Amazing os..
Beautifully written...
Loved d poem
do write more on kriyaansh..😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
hayeee...
it was so so so cute
i so loved it
mazza aa gya padh kr
plz. write more such works
really fabulous
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Oh my god! Wat shud I say!!! Totally amazing update...loved the way u described everyting! 👏 dis one highlighted the their sweet romance nd the love for each other!the emotions wer put up so beautifully!rey bohut naughty h, nd kria lost in her linecutter's dreamland!!i luvd the update nd keep writing such great things! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Its to much awesome os
Loved it so much
Ekdum mast tha
And
The poem is too awesome heart touching
Thanku so much for writing such a beautifull os

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