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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanku so much for the pm deep
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wifey nd hubby bth were too cute
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsum os..
loved it..
sry for late was inactive due to examz..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dii 🤗

I dunno from where I should start. Its difficult to actually express it , you know ❤️

When I read my name in A/N i literally wanted to jump at your place and give you a tight hug!

Thank you so much Di! You are a real sweet heart ! ❤️ 🤗


And I am sorry for not commenting here earlier. But I wanted to give a achcha sa comment, not a 2 liner :*


Di this OS was so GOOD!

I mean, Here I can say that I could actually visualize everything, connect to every emotion you have added :D

She writing poems in his absence for him and Rey trying to get a view of his Love:D

And that intense part when she realizes that it is not her dream.. Awww :D

And and when naughty rey snatched her Diary and made her run behind him..This was so cute!

Those lines which kria have written were WOW! So effin good, deep, meaningful.

My KriYaansh :'D


Thank You so much Di!

It was a real treat to read it, It was flawless, so beautifully written ! ❤️


Love you Di 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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freaking awesome os...
loved it like anything...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome... loved it.. from d point of u describing kria's dress n d way she s lost in rey's memories.. awww kria thinks she s hallucinating...n here rey s smirking thinking abt it.. smirk which s dangerous n now he s having d diary n he won.. loved poem a lot.. awesome.. d last line abt wind charm n their moans was awesome.. u always make me amaze with ur works..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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resss😊

unres
sorry for being late
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Wowww what an amazing story yaar...i totally enjoyed reading it
and that score thing u added in between was really cool...moi likey...
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And the lines kria wrote in that diary were so pure and wonderful...
No wonder u write amazing poems...that talent reflects here too
Mahn...diary was the star of this os
but see the faith end me bechari star piss gayi dono ko beech me
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So i would say...it was a tie in the end!rite?😆

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deepika u are really a brilliant writer
itne simple and sweet concept ko itne beautiful way me execute kiya hai...thats what need a pure talent...and you totally have it in you girl
way to go

happy to reach this amazing piece of work...
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thanx deepika for the link
and thanx shenz for the pm yaar

and deepika me batarai hu
ise warning samaj ya kuch aur...🤣 Khabardaar nxt time muje inbox/scrap/pm nai kiya toh...😆
i cnt afford to miss reading such great stories

HAPPY DIWALI...
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
awww this was totally mindblowinggg👏
beautifully penned👏

and d poem was amazinggg👍🏼

good job⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lolzz ... Finally m here... Aapka status pdha ... Fir yaad aaya abt this os... So m here finally...:p nd this is w8 v call a perfect os on amazing situation... ;) i loved it ...:) u really did it beautifulllyyy...:) their feelings nd her poem is jst.,,, awstruck...:) it's awsum bloossom os...:) now want to read more os frm u...:) nd thanxxx 4 tag dii...:)

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