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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

This is one hillarious piece guys. Sharon as a Bio student and Swayam as a Lawyer. Great combo. :D Iska baki part maine AT mein hi pad liya tha. :P But phirbhi Part 2 jaldi update karna. :) Great job guys. Keep writing.

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

OMG wat was that 🤣
i can't stop rofling 🤣
ok so let's start with the banner
A Romantic Couple nd a cockroach in between 🤣
(its an awesome banner isha)
then the story...sharon as a bio student nd swayam as a lawyer...great combination
sharon a bio student scared f dissecting cockroach 😆
"mere liye ek cockroach lao 🤣"
nd swayam bechare ko phasa diya 😆😆
but fir sharon ne nikal bhi diya 😆😆

i really loved this update
continue soon 😈

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veronica

@SwaRon_rocks

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

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edited

k so where do i start from?

the banner..its superb isha😳

The concept of a romantic comedy was nicely executed.

the dialogues added to the charm...:)

loved the romance in between😳..

lawyer se cockroach disect kara rahi hai sharon😆 (creative mind bringing in the insect here😉)

m seriously dying to read what sharon has planned for swayam now.

plz update soon..

n sry for d delay😛

-Veronica

PS-aaj raat ko update mil rhi hai right?😃

Edited by SwaRon_rocks - 11 years ago

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nancynnv

@nancynnv

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Res

Unres...(most waited na ) 😆

Waah kya undha concept hai ...tannu ki language mai

I mean Sachi

Mast tha

I mean cockroach romance kise nai Issa concept nhi socha hoga 🤣

Lawyer dissecting cockroach ...

Masa agaya padh kar 😃

HAYEE voh swaron ka romance 😳

C I did my job

Nw u better update the next part 😈

Edited by nancynnv - 11 years ago

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

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unres

WOW!! that was cute..

loved it..

sharon afraid of cockroaches and swayam catching one for her..😆😆

and the cockroach in the banner 🤣

awesome start

please update soon

and do PM me

Edited by nkss - 11 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Woww 👏
Amazing start 👏
Love ttt;)
Continue soon and pm me plzz 😳
Sharon's afraid of cockroach 😆
And swayam s a lawyer 😆
Can't wait for d next part 😳

Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Hehehe... aisa course chuna hi kyun jisme cockroach se paala pade...😆

Ewww... uske naam se hi itni yucky feeling aati hai ... pata nhi kaise kaata hoga... 🤢

Rofl... poor swayam.. love me kya kya karna padta hai... 😛

Upar se usse concentrate bhi ni karne de raha... 😉

Wierd title... main soch hi rahi thi ki ye kis type ka romance hoga...🤣

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

poor sharon... 😆 and swayam as lawyer... 😉
it was cute and romantic...amazing dear... 😃
waiting for next part..update soon..

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Swathi

@swathi_swaron

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

this OS is a combo of fun and romance...

same like the combo of a lawyer and a phd bio student...😆 😆 😆 😆

nice OS ...

eagerly waiting for the next part 😉