First of all I am really sorry for not catching up with this story on time and as it is you know how quick I am to post replies😃
Now coming to the story, I am just loving this story. After I wrote a story in first person's narration format, I just started liking this style. And you have effectively used this style to unfold vivacious character of Khushi through her own words.
Two most important point which are working in the favor of story for me are , first one the story takes place in 'APALA PUNE'...So it feels like everything is happening around me somewhere. And second one is Khushi and Arnav seem to be in love already ...😳 So there are less possibilities of heartbreaks , pain or tears...😃 Ohh how much I love this...
Now few words about your story through the eyes of an extremely intelligent critic[It's of course ME 😆] I just loved the characterization of each and every character, mostly Bua and Garima. Loved how you described their nature and styles. Then how you accurately portrayed Khushi's character of a young girl being single, ogling over handsome hunks, trying to flirt with Arnav and all that seem quite natural as any single young girl must be doing something like this in her life.[I said seem, must be etc because I have never tried anything of that. I am a true Santini 😃]
Loved Arnav being handsome(of course no need to mention that), helping (though he has helped Khushi only every time) , not khadoos at all [Well I just Love ARNAV SIGH RAIZADA...khadoos-no khadoos, kind or not nothing matter BAS PERIOD 😊 ]
okay back to criticizing mode again 😎 :
Writer's creativity is prominent through her choices of Madhuri Dixit's songs for title apt to the incidences. Writer seems to have worked as a tour guide in her life as her knowledge about the places is quite appreciable. Even though I rarely use the phrase 'Intelligent' , I wish to use that for the above said writer as she efficiently uses different terms, idioms, adjective in the story. Being a strict critic, I am not allowed to praise anyone more. Hence I stop . I hope BHA. PO.
P.S: This update was too short for my liking 😲
Edited by praj.shrish - 12 years ago
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