Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 16) - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats on new thread
nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome wedding of a decade
I loved the realistic touch to it
And everones pov
Lovely update dear
Keep up the good work
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Posted: 12 years ago
😃 .. tht is me .. after reading tht the update is here.. n tht is me after the chapter :) :)
too too too gd :) ..
as expected... buaji was happy :) excited... ecstatic :) :) .. both her kids finaly settled.. n her titaliya visibly happy :)
she really must hv hd a hard time naa... :) the obvious reluctance of the firangi groom :) ... n the indulgent-in-mehndi bride :) :) ...

btw.. did the groom notice the mehndi?? did he like it?? i think he might hv been too busy fidgeting with his sherwani :) :) .. bt nw tht he is out of it... he shud notice it... u shud arnav...

n karan.. u r too cute :) gd tht u were teasing.. n glaring khushi, means defending her firangi husband khushi.. haye.. must hv been luking too too cute :) .. fanning him with her hands :) :).. u shud hv teased her fr tht too :) :)

sumer's thots on khushi being the stronger one, his realisation tht arnav needed her more than she needed him, was too gd :) rt frm a father's heart, who knws both his kids well enuf :)
loved his description of arnav.. as a fiercely loyal n responsible to the core person :) :) .. he sure wud tk gd care of khushi :) ..

trust khushi to realise n feel the depth of thgs... even whn she is the bride :) :) n soo much is going arnd her.. i mean, the fact tht it was the first wedding arnav was attending... she does realise the implication, she contemplates if she shud feel bad fr him, which i think means she realises he has lived a lonely life mostly...

rishabh nt attending the wedding was kind of natural... he is human, hw does one get over losing his love in 3 days... its nt possible... feel bad fr him :(
i wonder how lavanya managed... she really must hv been very confused abt his behaviour..

n "cut the cake" to theek hai... arnav, where is tht gift ?? we hd discussed soo much on it.. n u didnt give her anythg?? ok.. atleast give her sthg fr cooking the first dish...
hey... r u saving the gift fr later??? i mean obviously with all the wedding n bday on the same day, u might hv wanted to give the gift later.. ok will give u benefit of doubt here 😉

the hand holding by arnav btw.. :) he must hv felt gd naa... finally hving enuf rt over the one person he wanted to hv arnd him frever :)..

n wht i love the most is.. tht khushi is happy.. genuinely happy in all this :) .. she is happy to belong here nw.. to hv arnav by her side.. to knw tht finally her bade papa is truely her father in every sense nw :)

yes sumer.. destiny wanted it this way :) .. fr her to b with u fr life.. nt just as a daughter u wud wed off to someone else.. bt as a daughter who wud stay with u all ur life :)
n mk sure tht arnav too gets his share of happiness n fun n love.. even the share tht he missed all those years :) :)

btw.. hv these two realised tht they wud b staying in the same room... i m soo waiting to see hw they work it all out :)

the entire mrng scene, told me wht u meant by "cute" in the love story of sadu n laddoo :)
he really was very very cute :) .. his entire self talk.. was definitely cute version of the usually sadu arnav :) :)

does he like her changing her dressing style?? do sumer n buaji prefer it tht way?? though i m sure a changed dressing style wud mk arnav notice her more 😉
on second thots.. sumer didnt seem happy with the saree n all the jewellery.. tht was mking his laddoo sweat :) :)

"death by khushi" seems like a gd name fr the halwa made by khushi.. :) :) .. new name fr the dish :) :) hahahaha :)

arnav must b feeling like test rat after buaji's declaration of him being the privileged one to get the first bite of khushi's dish : "DEATH BY KHUSHI"
i love tht name.. tht is hw i m always going to remember this first dish of halwa made by khushi :) :) 😆

the entire review of khushi's cooking.. the daal.. the learning he expected to come in his family's life out of it.. :) was too cute :)
n it literally supported the pt.. he nw knws its as difficult to survive with his wife as it is to survive without her 😆

tht tombstone has hd me cracking ever since i read it.. :) every few minutes i m reminded of it. .. n i go hysterical :) ..
though i m hoping htt this decision "against his better judgement", giving into "tht smile", turns out opposite to his expectation... buaji hving guided her all along... i m hoping the halwa wud b gd :) .. n arnav shocked tht even khushi can cook at times 😛

btw... r u trying to torture us fr bugging u soo much fr the update??? u stopped the chapter there... seriously...
anyways... it just gives us more reason to want the next one sooner :) :)

PS:: feels like after a long time.. we got a gd share of narration... i m seriously a die-hard fan of ur narration :) .. thx fr tht :) totally loved it like always :)
Edited by tanu3579 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
dude that was seriously THE wedding of the year. poor Arnie boy. gosh when she was actually fanning him through her hands. it seemed sooo damn hilarious. poor guy. 🤣 but khushi ke liye itna to banta he ri8.

n they dint let them sleep even in the same wing. 😲 Aise kaise??? completely agree with him. they never bothered about her Virtue before n now that they're married... Bechare. 😆

n i Lurrrvvved the last sequence where she's cooking. 🤣 🤣 🤣
i wanna read more. n thee tombstone line... 🤣 🤣




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Posted: 12 years ago
A mind blowing update!!! Loved it!! :D

Phew!! So finally da wedding is over! Yay! Loved da way u described da wedding preparations in buaji's pov, Arnav's discomfort during rituals, nd Laddoo fanning groom?? 🤣 this part totally cracked me up!!

Arnav is scared to eat his wife's halwa! Poor boy! U can't escape from dis Mr.Raizada! 😆 can't wait to read more! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
They are married! Yay! 🥳
I appreciate how you didn't romanticize the wedding and kept it so normal - their behaviors and attitude to the wedding ceremony was so true to their characters.

Loved how Arnav finally took her hand, as her husband, and asked her to cut the cake. While things may not have been romantic, but I guess the significance of the marriage has settled into the both of them. They are conscious of their status as husband and wife now.. and methinks thats a good start. This is perhaps the happiest day in Sumer's life :)

He is thinking about physical intimacy? Two things here - he thinks its will be no trouble resisting her and keeping his hands to himself, but I have a feeling he will be proven wrong; the woman may limp but she is a beauty. And secondly - how come he is not worried about Khushi discovering his problem with the nightmares? Isn't that why he wouldn't allow her to sleep in his room when he was "unwell"?

Oh dear, he will be the guinea pig for her culinary endeavors? 😲 God save him? Or will he need saving? Perhaps she actually made a lovely halwa? Waiting for you to tell me 😃

Also, how many chapters do you think this story will run into? Approximately? You don't have to answer this, I'm just curious 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
buaji must be enthusiasm must be off the charts
poor arnav has to be the pig for kushis kitchen experiment

finally arshi married :) seperate the groom and the bride on SR that is bengali custom me thinks its called kal ratri or some such thing

excited to c how kushis halwa turns out

how they spend the first day and esp. the SR talks??:)

oho full excitment :: pls pls pls continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
till now arnav ko khushi se.. n mujhe iss ff se pyaar ho gaya .. n its getting deeper with each chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wah what a chapter
Arnav's discomfrt with Sherwani made me 😆
Arnav n Khushi got married
Firang Husband 🤣
Khushi first rasoi
i'm curious
take this🤗
I'll🥳


Edited by anu2108 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...loved it
poor arnav lets see how kushi's halwas will be

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