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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! Like really ..FIRANG GROOM...FIRANG HUSBAND !! Karan really took the cake !

It was like re-living my own wedding ! All the rituals, the madness before the wedding and well after that too ! Thank god i didnt have to do the rasoi part. Else my cooking is exactly like Arnav was thinking about Khushi's cooking skills..burnt, half cooked, tasteless, excess salt or sugar or spicy ! Except i was in a lehnga and my husband in no way comes even near to Arnav Singh Raizada ! and never will !

Best part was during the wedding. Arnav most uncomfortable in his Sherwani and pagdi with the pin on it. Regal, royal. Khushi looked beautiful in the tradional colors of Raizada bahu in her sari. Imagine what a couple they must have looked like *dreamy sigh* perfect, made n meant for each other !

I was laughing throughout this chapter. It was hilarious. Plight of the mighty ASR sitting infront of the fire, sometimes Khushi nearly fanning him ! :D

Khushi found Arnav looking breath-taking when he changed into his suit after the wedding rituals. Wow khushi noticed for the first time, how breath-taking Arnav looked in a suit !! ...lol... Actually it might be because she was looking at him for the first time as her (firang :D) husband ! Completely Awestruck !

Buaji's logic to Arnav seemed actually wiered ! No sleeping together or in the same wing also on the night of the wedding ! his thinking was correct..before marriage Arnav and Khushi's rooms were just 2 doors away in the same wing and noone else in that wing !

Arnav was actually Amused by the whole thing. They arent children, but husband n wife n dont need permission to be with each other nor did they have to sneak out to meet each other !

Thinking HIS KHUSHI..drifted off to sleep with a smile *smiles*

Curiously waiting for the next part Arnav's reaction expression after tasting the Halwa made by Khushi ! Whom he found looking beautiful in a light pink sari with a red low cut blouse with lots of bangles and hair in a messy bun at the nape of her neck..!

Wow ! Arnav already started noticing minutest details of how khushi was dressed up..pink sari,red blouse that too low cut, messy hair, lots of bangles...lets see what all he notices *clears throat*.

WAITING !!!!!!!!!!!!!...ASAP UPDATE !!!... *grins anticipatingly*...

Sorry cant help the long comment as every bit of the chapter was hilarious. Actually the way you've written it has made it hilarious.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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They are married! Yay! 🥳

I appreciate how you didn't romanticize the wedding and kept it so normal - their behaviors and attitude to the wedding ceremony was so true to their characters.

Loved how Arnav finally took her hand, as her husband, and asked her to cut the cake. While things may not have been romantic, but I guess the significance of the marriage has settled into the both of them. They are conscious of their status as husband and wife now.. and methinks thats a good start. This is perhaps the happiest day in Sumer's life :)

He is thinking about physical intimacy? Two things here - he thinks its will be no trouble resisting her and keeping his hands to himself, but I have a feeling he will be proven wrong; the woman may limp but she is a beauty. And secondly - how come he is not worried about Khushi discovering his problem with the nightmares? Isn't that why he wouldn't allow her to sleep in his room when he was "unwell"?

Oh dear, he will be the guinea pig for her culinary endeavors? 😲 God save him? Or will he need saving? Perhaps she actually made a lovely halwa? Waiting for you to tell me 😃

Also, how many chapters do you think this story will run into? Approximately? You don't have to answer this, I'm just curious 😊

@Bold - exactly yaara, want to know answers for those too..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome..!!!
they got married...!!!!!!!!
n the way u described arnav n khushi in while they were on the mandap...loved it..!!
w8ng for next..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing!

Their wedding was perfect for their part.
Buaji's excitement is so cute. Sumer's emotional thoughts were well placed. She is his daughter now. And all under one roof.

Arnav's dehydration and obvious discomfort was really funny to watch. I mean he was willing to go through. With not much choice though. And he looked his best again when they cut the cake.

This wedding had no biddai and such. So at least they played games. And it had been Arnav's first wedding.
Can't wait to know how's the dish.



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Posted: 12 years ago
It was awesome. .. esp arnav's monologue. ...
He is yet nt into dis relationship. ..his dilemma abt being married. .. everything. .. simply loved it...
Lovd d way buaji took part in marriage... her thoughts revolving arnd our bride and groom's behavior. . It was fun..
Den our pandit ji during wedding ... his experience of firangi dulha n his outrageous behavior during phere vl count in his future... 😉
Finally khushi... she is happy for becuming her bade papa's bahu... she is content...

Im waiting for dem to fall in love... arhi in love.. n esp in dis story d way u vl make dem fall in love is going to be phenomenal. .. im sure abt dat...

Thanks for dis beautiful creation...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yiipppeee

They're married

And gosh what an update...where things were running as fast as buajis wedding preparation with perfection although...from shopping,to catering,managing guests, selecting outfits n jewelry till pre wedding ceremonies...you've missed out on nothing and gave every little significant details about their marriage and still you were able to sum it all up in half an update...
This is something only you can pull of this well with your awesomeee writing abilities giving every aspect your touch

You haven't even missed out on how annoyed n discomforted arnav was,how teasing karan was to khushi and how she tried to comfort arnav while tackling her chachu and what I loved the most was the affection with which sumer was witnessing it all seeing khushi in raizada bride avatar with all ancestoral jewelry and jus how lucky arnav is to have her as she will definitely bring all the sunshine in his life as she had brought in her bade papa n buajis lonely dull life

Sooo many emotions,thought and love you have penned down so beautifully in minimal words...loved it

Hahahaha arnav...relli!!! After getting all he wished,planned and got he is now afraid of eating khushis hand cooked halwa...this shows jus what marriage has done to him...given the much longed for peace and now he is only left for worrying abt such insignificant stuff...lol

Also khushi has now being started to get attracted to arnav...won't take too long fr her to fall in love with arnav

Amazinggg update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update ur too good.. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
New thread congrats

Wow they are married ,loved the sitituation arnav was in during wedding it was very funny arnav's franginess.

Khushi is happy I thought may be she would be sad but no

Another best bit was cake cutting and feeding it to Sumer and saying he her father now

The morning was quite intersting again ,he is already changing for khushi and they will be alright together

It was a brilliant update really enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 12 years ago
I luved it...so wedding is done.completely enjoyed the chapter.the description was fanastastic.firang se shaadi hehe.buaji enthusiasm justified,she really had a tough job to handle.poor arnav was finding difficult to survive big fat indian wedding.really luking forward to the halwa
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Posted: 12 years ago
Man! U r good. Never could imagine description of a wedding ceremony b this fun to read. For a change u made khushi a bad cook. Loved it how each one respond to her cooking. I love reading your story. It always bring smile to my face.

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