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Posted: 11 years ago
being a woman, seeing a weak khushi always pains me and this chapter was the heights.. to hell with arnav.. why is people hurt the person they love the most... khushi don't ever ever forgive this bas***d for putting you through this.. when will arnav see sense.. will it ever happaen.. i think khushi should run off with bardley.. if arnav is going to make her feel like a wh**e at least somebody will see her with affection.. i am really sad😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
I really don't know what to say after this chapter

Extremely Pathetic Raizada, along with his extremely down class thoughts😡😡😡

Seriously I can't bear it anymore.Khushi's condition is making me 😭

When will you stop this torture on Khushi???😕
Edited by Hina69 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
shock disbelief is all that comes to mind. I feel like slapping ASR and shaking khushi - I mean get a move on and be a woman of dignity for goodness sake. I really can't take this (sorry!)' weak and pitiful' khushi - really really can't swallow that pill and Arnav - he is an effing monster and there is no way in hell he is going to believe he slept with khushi unless of course there is some video or pictures of him leaving the party with her!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Realy hate arnav hw he abuse his wife lk this n when khushi get rid from al this wish khushi leave arnav cant tolerate more torture for kushi tanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm really wondering how will this Arnav ever face Khushi after he realizes the truth when he realizes that Khushi is innocent and is as much as victim as Anjali if not more just because of him. I'm actually waiting for that day more than anything in this story. Will that day ever come if so how. He doesn't believe in anything he she says. I can't see Khushi tolerating so much of humiliation that now she feels that her husband is right about her and she is nothing more than a s**t

I would have still have forgiven Arnav if he hadn't made any assumptions seeing the hickeys on khushi's collar bones. I would love to see Arnav really falling in love with this wh**e, whom he believes to had strayed him and then realize much later that the girl he fell in love with was never a wh**e, but his hatred not just made her feel like one but literally made her into one. I literally want to see Arnav pining for her whereas she forgives but never forgets the scars he had left behind and never ever gives him the power or right over her to hurt her again. as he had done.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very short dear but nice I hate this arnav this is too much yar he is sach a jerk feel sorry for khushi this is too much dear she suffered a lot have some merciy on her next update soon pls love ur story
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is my second comment after reading the last update...
I just had to read from the beginning again and I did that ..for the first time I realized that it is a dark story, a really dark one...I can not even begin to understand how hard it must be for you to write such characters... Extreme ones.. Although, it is somewhat similar even in the original series, u have managed to invoke , instigate such emotions in us readers .kudos to u for that..u have crossed that margin that the cvs didn't want to and made this story a heart wrenching one ...in detail... In depth... I have always felt that Arnav in the original series didn't really deserve khushi after the torture he put her thru but told myself that love is above everything,love heals, love forgives all, love spreads well love...there was no redemption track even other than that pathetic excuse of a 'sorry'..
Coming to your story, u have managed to write with such clarity , an ASR that is an animal, if I may say so and for now most of us detest... As I have written earlier, this ASR might crawl on his fours repenting but he doesn't deserve her...and this khushi is so broken that she might not even have it in her to believe in herself...she even acknowledges herself as a w****... as he calls her.. Yes, while there r true stories that are like this, may be even more extreme,they don't have a happy ending or let's just say people don't change that easily in real life... Which is why I m glad that this is fiction and u can do whatever u choose to to the story...cos in reality, he belongs in an mental asylum for treatment in general and later in jail , for his inhumane treatment to khushi...what has never ever happened before was that ,having read many many arshi stories and books in general, I have never been so twisted in knots angry at a fictional character as I m with ASR... it is definitely hard to digest this helpless,soulless lifeless khushi ...and it's almost getting hard to imagine that she will ever be able to stand up on her feet, quite literally actually... Years of therapy might bring her out or some real outta this world kinda love would help her...if u wanted to show us a completely broken beyond repair khushi, u did it ...and if u wanted to show us a real live monster in human form, u have done it exceedingly well with ASR...

I can tell u one thing. I don't know how and where you plan to steer this story but I ,for one am waiting with baited breath to see where it goes ..I m a sucker for happy endings but this is a story which is hard to imagine one... How ever, I did try to imagine a very happy ending ...:) ...last but definitely not the least- u write very well...
Edited by Serene77 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so sad
poor khushi
after what will be happen, Arnav is responsible for that
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Posted: 11 years ago
not a good update... Arnav is too bad..
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Posted: 11 years ago
i have been following serendipity for quite sometime, and really in love with it. both arnav n khushi's characters are something which we cud easily pity with. arnav for his major lack of instinct and understanding, and khushi for the terrible state she has landed into, though being so guileless n innocent. i have really loved the updates which showed the times where she had enjoyed in new york. those were the only times where she cud have some respite from all of arnav's accusations, shyam's lecherous ways and the raizada family's annoying and pretentious fancy.

But recently since the last 2 updates, i am having trouble digesting khushi's lack of inner power. arnav, i can understand is too ignorant of the reality due to his one track brain. but i'm having problem with khushi's character. why can't she open up even a little bit?? a girl who had been so full of spunk, friendly n talkative, cheering everyone around her in her good times, can't even express her situations in her worst times. why isn't she not able to counteract arnav, even a little bit, and just quitely accepting everything without a fight or conscience that she is allowing herself to be trampled by everyone??? i'm sorry dear, but i have trouble accepting khushi's character. such innocence is never accepted or recognized in today's world. i can't bring myself to even pity her nowadays. i felt angry on her after she accepted herself as a ''wh**e''. how cud someone?? i can understand this is just a work of fiction, and this may be how u have planned out the story, but i really request u to bring a change in khushi now. i'm really not liking her character as such a pitiable doormat. i'm sorry to say but i don't feel any pity or sympathy for her. i can't even find myself labelling her with phrases such as ''poor girl'' or ''feel sad for her''. i hope u dont mind my opinions.
Edited by poojasidd123 - 11 years ago

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