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@flowers4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#701

at the start of the chapter i though looks like eveythings going to work out ...in the middle i thought kushi is being to hasty in her decision and at the end i was thinking go kushi ...hope she doesn't come back to him for a while and hopefully she had signed the papers...a very interesting chapter...looking forward to reading more...

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#702

So he don't remember anything
And here I thought she wouldn't remember anything because it was her first time consuming alcohol ... I'm really worried for Khushi ... I hope she decides to not go back to India with him ...

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#703

I hope she had signed the papers and left them on the table for him and disappear from there ... He don't deserve to see her face or talk to her anymore

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#704

Khushi's pain is killing me...
arnav if can't treat her in the way she deserves the least he can do is to stop badmouthing her ,his words has ripped her apart so much so that after going through such a betrayal of being kept in dark about the divorce is still worried about his accusations his thoughts...not about her dignity, the thing which should have been her best moment turned out to be a nightmare...arnav is so inhuman, plz if possible can u increase the pace of the track...i really feel bad watching khushi suffer so much, even if that means the divorce thing to happen.

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#705

Sad... Talaak?? Seriously..??
He doesn't even remember anything..??
Wat will happen nxt.?

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Deepthi

@deepz_SI.BS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#706

ok i quite unsure what to comment

heartbreaking update .. feeling so so bad for khushi and i hate arnav more now -___________-

how could he not remember that!! well maybe it was not his mistake still i hate him for that 😳 ..

and divorce seriously?? 🤔 , i wanted to kick arnav b**ls -________________-

and wait omg mohit (i forgot his character name if you mentioned beffore 😳)is gonna enter?? woah!!bring it on zeewa i would love to see that .. i so want to see jealous arnav and actually i freaking want to see SUFFERING arnav YESSS 😵 , (woah how did i become so sadistic 😳 ,how can i think my arnav to suffer 😳 , THANKS TO YOU MERI SAUT 😡😆 )

btw thanks for keeping up the updatesregular zeewa 🤗 <333 love you <333

P.S banner looking so frwaking hot with two freaking handsome men ☺️

Edited by deepz_SI.BS - 11 years ago

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#707

So basically Arnav will be "Arnav" and Khushi will pretend as though last night never happened ! How terrible !

Waiting for the new entrant now !

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#708

Read a few chapters a couple of weeks ago and caught up with the rest just now. Really liking it so far. And your writing is just beautiful. To very honest, more than the storyline, it's your writing that I truly enjoyed while reading. Eagerly waiting for the next part!

Aah it's so much like IPK. I miss it.

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msmarple

@msmarple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#709

I am not sure I like this Arnav but I did enjoy reading the story this far. You write well.

Edited by msmarple - 11 years ago

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#710

You write well and its such a pleasure to read what you write, but do pardon me when I say what I am going to.

I can't understand why the bulk of writers on Arnav Khushi portray Khushi as unable to say no to physical intimacy even when Arnav is downright beastly to her. Its quite frustrating to see Khushi being so desperate and starved for affection that she is willing to let a man who behaves inhumanly to her, take her. She is willing to forgive every insult, every hurt, every indignity for a few words of love thrown at her?

I guess it kind of upsets me to see a woman being portrayed thus - to be desperate for her tormentor. Esp when the character Khushi was never so. She may have hung round and taken crap from Arnav for her sister's sake but in all of that she never let go her self respect.

Having got that rant out of the way :-) poor Khushi and stupid Arnav. I do hope she doesn't forgive him ever! That by the way is a tribute to your writing to get me so worked up!

My apology if my comment upsets you.

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