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Zee

@aamir18

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Thank you so much, Hina, for your support of this FF 😳 It means a lot to me. I am so very glad you like it. I hope you like the new updates as well and they live up to your expectations! And thank you so much for your honesty. I'll try to speed up the writing a little bit while keeping the story's integrity. Thank you so much, again 🤗

Originally posted by: Hina69
Wow!!👍🏼

That was a power pack update!!👏

Intense and quite interesting!⭐️

I just want to see a strong Khushi which m sure she's gonna be in future for sure(more confident and sophisticated than Meena😉)

I already told you how much I love your writings so need I say again?😳

PS. Congo for getting 100+ likes, I told you in my first comment that this story deserve much more likes which it usually got...And I am happy you are finally getting the response you deserve🤗

PPS. One complain from me(i hope you don't mind) is that, the story is progressing too slow...😔

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Zee

@aamir18

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#532

I'm sorry Kimsy, but I do not understand your question. 😊 What link are you searching for?

Originally posted by: kimsy5
IWhere is link to the next. Hope I m not causing any ofense being intrusive

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#533

it was boom boom update.. jealous arnav is not able to see that bradley having nice time with khushi and he did what he does the best.. he took khushi away from party.. hate all the words arnav told khushi.. but khushi also didn't let him go this easily this time.. she too is all prepared to give her husband what is throwing at her.. do continue soon.. loved the update...

thanks for pm 😊

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imma chek

@imanech

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#534

when will this night end ?

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#535

wonderful update

loved it

plz continue soon

thanks for the pm

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#536

Thanks for the pm. It was nice to see Khushi like that. Continue soon. All the best for your exams.

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smat

@smat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#537

Amazing update
finally she stood up to him, hope she will not forgive him to soon
Loved the update

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#538

very emotional story

Arnav is no less then a beast poor khushi is suffering with no fault of hers

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#539

Thank you so much for updating twice in two days, how lucky are we.

Thank you so much for the extra long update, I appreciate it very much.

Wow the update was mind blowing, phenomenal, outstanding and simply superb.

Love the fact Khushi actually started to enjoy the dance with Bradley even though she knew Arnav was getting angry.

Wow the possessive Arnav had to make an entry when he went up to Khushi and threatened Bradley,

Awww poor Bradley he genuinely was attracted to Khushi, I think you should get these two together as Arnav does not deserve Khushi.

Arnav's insults towards Khushi were so harsh and beyond cruel, I can't believe he called her a sl*t and a wh**e, I personally think this the biggest insult any man can do towards a woman and if I was Khushi I would never forgive him.

Love the way Khushi actually stood up for herself and questioned Arnav which in return were just answered with more insults and cruel remarks.

However I love the fact when Khushi said to Arnav that she is not his wife but a decorative piece, a fabulous statement by Khushi.

Wow Arnav actually confessing his vulnerability and maybe his true feelings but it's a shame he is drunk as I know he will forget in the morning.

Wow the kiss was very unexpected but I hope Khushi does not respond and actually slaps him because I know Arnav will not remember any of what occurred in the elevator.

Why the cliffhanger, you are so evil, lol.

I have to agree with you this has to be the best update I have read so far, I was waiting for this courageous and brave Khushi to emerge and you portrayed her perfectly in this update.

Loved the update, a brilliant read.

Thanks for the PM,

No worries Hun we shall wait for the next update, please concentrate on your exams and maybe you can give us a teaser if you are going to be away for a while, please please please as I know that cliffhanger is going to kill me, lol.