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soppy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

This was sook good !...the writing was perfect...but please don't make Khushi forgive him ...I want her to be strong and independant .

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

Thank You Zee for making my Khushi spinning like this around this Hard core , thick head .

Who loves her madly but can't stop his special vision to judge her all the time.

But I am glad she bursted out loud at him and demanded her answer and he gave in..👏

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MsDroolKanthan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

You did not stop there. Why?

All I can say is ASR is Petra Polar. Bas

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shah.1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

ohhh what a twist
eagerly waiting what will happen next

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itsme92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

Loved the update and Arnav's speech at the end!

thanks for the pm

looking forward to see what happens next 😉

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None of Anyone's Business Dear Stalker ;)

@.Boss.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Oh my goodness!!! That was fabulous, but i really hate you for stopping where you did. We better get an update soon! 'Cause i can't wait no longer.

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Arnima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

Your writing is flawless...each emotion was described so wonderfully and with such perfection that it was impossible not to tangibly feel their miseries and anger, hurt and anguish.

Beautiful update...and quick too😊 I hope things don't take a turn for worse what with both being inebriated and high on emotions.

Waiting eagerly for more...continue soon...

Thanks for the pm😊

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

Troubled eyes scanned over his features twisted in scorn and revulsion, her grasp around his collar tightening as he brought his large hands to cup around her flushed face, his long fingers curling and pulling around the hair behind her ears. With a jerk, her body slammed completely against his own, her breasts crashing with the hard planes of his chest and his breath, reeking with whisky, mingling with hers.

That paragraph. Oh my god. What perfection- The emotions are so raw, and his confession is so honest. I only hope they both remember it tomorrow, because both of them seem pretty drunk. You writing is flawless.

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Amanram

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Posted: 11 years ago

#529

wow!you are on a roll here. i hope that arnav and khushi are not going to have a night of passion under the influence of alcohol! that would just be too much complication really!!!