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Pooja

@poojasidd123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

that was one brilliant update!!! hated that khushi was snatched away frm bradley's gentle clutches..that man was so much better than arnav for khushi!! wanted khushi with him for sometime. and the endless accusations he hurled at her were beyond horrendous. nothing can be more insulting than that. khushi's outburst came at the right moment. kudos to her! but at the same time i didnt like the sudden intimacy which arnav showed. i just dont want them to end up sleeping together after this. hoping against hope that both arnav n khushi remembers this once they get sober. and i have a feeling that they will, (at least arnav will), as this ff is so much diiferent than any other that i've seen here. just love it!! dont know how i wud wait for the nxt update...

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#542

Well all the furstration is out...an amazing chapter...keep it up

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#543

Oh my god why she wants him
He is going to push her away next day and accuse her of other things and divorce her

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#544

Khushi should not succumb to his desires as he is drunk and the next morning he will be back to his abusive ways. Lovely update

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kamtokdin

@kamtokdin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#545

It's time for arnav to repent

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#546

Oh zee...With all the abuses that he hurls at her and with a few such words o c utmost possessive care our khushi would succumb to him and then when all the alcohol induced emotions are over will he again hate her more...i am not sure if khushi cam overcome that...but a brilliant chapter loved it. . Loved how she hurled questions at mighty ASR. ...

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Kaay

@-.serendipity.-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#547

I can't believe I wasn't reading this earlier!

Thank God I found this!

Read all of the updates in one go

I must say that you are a fantabulous writer 👏

Love this story but I hate Arnav 😡

I really hope that you do have a redemption track planned!

Also, all the best for your exams and keep writing! 😊

Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#548

Just came across this story

It's absolutely amazing

Can't wait to see what happens after the kIss especially in the morning

Arnav's confession was surprising lets see if both of them remember it or not

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#549

amazing update...

arnav now came in the line...

that bradely was scolded by arnav...

khushi's outburst natural...

at least arnav said something...

they kissed ...

relation going next level?

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hilly

@hilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#550

Go Khush for FINALLY turning around and standing up and questioning the mighty ASR.

Loved the second half of the update. Brilliant. Free- Spirited Khush without the worries of her ASR and yet appreciated by that Bradley, satisfied at being watched by Arnav. Great ending.

... I just wish ASR just calms the heck down for God's Sake.. and LISTENS to Khush for once- her thoughts, her truth and believe her innocence and just talks with her .. calmly.

I know he needs to take out his rage .. but for how long and until when? Khush finally burst open and I am so glad she did- which was deff. needed. How long could she hold in the insults? At times like this- silence is not the best match, taken up for granted and guilt and rather speaking did serve Arnav right.

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can't wait for the next update. Love to see angle changing a bit- talking it out with Khush and investigating the case of Shyam.