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mayapvj

@mayapvj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#991

Just came across this ff..will read and then comment

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Destinyhope0305

@Destinyhope0305

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#992

Read all the Chaps within non-stop 2 Hours..Man i need Some Tissues!!!

This masterpiece is a vague replica of someone i knew .
Well They say that Fan Fictions are halfway out of reality .But I beg to differ.
Coz that " Someone I knew Person" really taught people around her, a cruel reality that No matter how much you ignore the Betrayal, it haunts you down and rip you apart .
She was literally ripped, trashed, tussled, and then finally killed by the one person she called "Her life"!

But i hope in your story , khushi doesn't kill herself as my closed one did ..

Ok now jumping to your Story , may I say that this story really had my heart pumping disastrously !!!
I ain't ashamed to say that I cried like for the 5th time till now !
That story really had a profound impact on Me .Because there are 2 Reasons .
--1st because this FF relates to a person i knew who was just like Khushi (in your FF)who loved Her Hubby like there was no Tomorrow.But what her Hubby did ?Accused her of being a wh**e.And yet she never even stood for herself thinking that he might change one day.
Yaa he did changed but only when She was no more.Yes She did suicide for she wasnt able to take it anymore.And now the Guy has literally lost his Mind...

--2nd reason would be an amazing narration of Khushi's character .Wow Hats off to you ..Her naivety has been extremely or shall I say fantabulously carved .I really like how you pour all her emotions silently .
Her never-to-die spirit, Her immense love for a Man rather a maniac were beautifully expressed..She stood out more richer than Arnav because her Pleasures are cheapest ..She believes in having fun in wetting her legs by the seashore for her own amusement rather than wetting herself for someone "Else's" amusement !
She stood out there dying in harness till the end and For what !!!For a scoundrel who doesn't even deserve her !!! She was ready (Can You Believe That!) to eclipse his Torture within seconds !! This shows the depth of her Love for Him!

You wont believe but I have so much to say right now about this Woman you have written about .She is an epitome of utter purity , integrity, decency ,morality ..Her character really touched my heart ..She changed herself for him,Yet she considered herself as an embarrassment !!
I bet if I wasn't running out of Time,I would have surely penned down atleast 10 pages of how much I m in love with this Khushi !!!!

And now to beat the time, I would just say one thing about Arnav-KILL HIM AGAIN THIS TIME WITH FIRE!!
If I was Khushi I would rather choose to die than to spend life with someone this distaste.Someone this low !!He should be punished for torturing that innocent life!

Probably his apology(in future maybe) doesn't even count the despondency that He gave her !!

One Request-Make Him Repent Harder. Much harder !! He should cry and cry and cry till the End !!
I want him to die every day for crushing a naive butterfly ! A delicate flower ..

Khushi did the right thing !!! Totally applauding her for that !!! Finally she realised that If you are on a Track, You will get run over If you just sit there ...

Well I m having speculations that in the near future when Khushi would be pregnant he might go ahead cursing his own child of being someone elses !!

I have re-read each chapter twice, and I will read it again later. That is how good this Story is!

P.S-

Will be waiting for next chapter soon ..

Sent u a Buddy Request ..

Edited by Destinyhope0305 - 11 years ago

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Aishwarya

@muffins2waffles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#993

I AM SO HAPPY THAT YOU GOT A THREAD 2

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I WILL COMMENT SOON

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#994

interesting story. Will comment after reading all chapters till date

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sabz105

@sabz105

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#995

I came across your FF 'Serendipity' Zee, and I must say it's really good!!!!

I love the concept and what you've done with the characters!!!!!

Looking forward to reading it all in one go!!!!!

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anayaraizada

@anayaraizada

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#996

Wow this story was amazing. ...

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#997

wow! Zitni i never knew u were writing this!! am just starting to read! it looks fabulous already!!

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k.s.divya

@divyaks

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#998

u r a fantastic writer!! congratulations on ur story! 😊 n plz dnt let khushi go bk to arnav😕..i knw ppl luv dem as a couple...even i do...bt just nt in dis stry...no matter how much ever he repents his actions...its just a suggestion...i m sure u will bring out a wonderful storyline...