ArHi TS : UNEXPECTED ~ Part-2 Pg1 15/10 *COMPLETED* - Page 7

Very nicely written. Thanks Nexus_13 for informing!

Though the story of your TS is very different from the show, I loved how you incorporated IPK in it. Arnav troubling Khushi while she worked at AR, she breaking the contract and resigning, still being affected and thinking of the other, aapko meetha mana hain, the proximity in the storeroom leading to a rabba ve, acting indifferent after an almost kiss, letting each other go knowing the other is important, and all the nahi manna and manvana.

Man I love IPK and you brought it for me again 👏

Your TS shows how important communication and understanding are to keep love and peace in tact in relationships... otherwise bitterness and hard feelings take its place.

Loved the story!

perfect ending..'

Part 2 is better than part 1 ( chapter )
Arnav had already fallen for her when she was in AR itself ! Un bloody believeable ! The store room..damn the security !

Kehte hain ..Ishq chupaye nahin chupti..yeh aisi baat hai jo hoonthon pe aa hi jaati hai ! ...well i may have written some words Here n there, but my intension of writing it fitted the situation after they met in Mittal's office !...

The love, longing for each other had not vanished just dimmed. Only to be brightened. Lightened up several lights, switched on the ovens, microwaves etc...by the single brush of their skin against each others, the touch, the soft peck ...all the years of sadness of staying apart vanished..just like that ! Arnav and Khushi surely loved each other. Else the slightest of touch or hot breath or a peck wouldnt have turned into an emotional breakdown of sorts, only to part for the little oxygen they needed. *runs to get oxygen for myself**butterflies in my stomach fly away pls*

Realisation why did it come in the middle !*frowns*

Khushi started apologizing and Arnav shouted at her...dont demean it by apologizing ... Coz i am not at all sorry for it ! Damn Arnav knew the chemistry they shared was immense, their love was pure. But Khushi was on another trip altogether !

Prateek was Khushi's sister's and Arnav's brother's son !!!???!!!?! Haye bhagwan and here i was thinking the kid was Arnav and Khushi's son ! What a twist Aayat ! Also that they had expired and families were not on talking terms ! Arnav befriended Prateek only to be told that some 'Laad Governor' had been irritating Khushi, to which Arnav laughed and admitted that he was that 'Laad Governor' so sweet ! *smiles*

So cool. ...!! Mami accepted Prateek as her grandson and the misunderstandings between the families were solved *happy*

Back to the the two love birds..inka kuch nahin ho sakta !
Khushi wanting to say no because whenever both were together they fought !
Arnav said he wanted to marry her coz he missed their fights :0 ... The reason Khushi was going to say no to get married .lol..

Touching..Arnav cleared her doubts by telling Khushi that he loved her and missed her and missed only her and wanted to marry her. Khushi blushed kya ?!

Yippeee!! They got married and the whole family was extra happy ! Nazar toh utarna hi tha !

Hope my comment, if i may call it, makes sense !

Aayat write more yaar.. This can also continue..after marriage things etc. the fighting, the dramatic anger, all to be solved by a look or touch or just plain wooing.. Red Roses n all you know!
Prateek being adopted by them and also Khushi some weight on her stomach/waist (if u know what i mean) Making up for all the years lost in every way possible *wink*

too good totally UNEXPECTED a story !
not too long also i hope for ur liking ?!

So it was Payal nd Akash's son...
Poor kid...He lost his parents...
Nd dnt evn kno bout his real parents...
Finally Arshi decided 2 gt married...:)
Awesome...Loved it

This was a great story. The Payal-Aakash saga was so sad, but at least their son had a happy ending.
I enjoyed every bit of the story.

Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: chulbuli94

Beautifully written~~

it touched my heart~~~

so,this's for u'''

&all these jalebies !!!

Thank you sooo much. *hugs* 😊

Originally posted by: Nexus_13

I am a sucker for office romances. The first few lines put a smile on my face. Thank you, A!

Love love love this feisty Khushi who gave back as good as she got!

I am happy that I didn't read the first part only and read both together. I would have been restless with all the anticipation for the second one!

It is so sad that fate played its cards on Payal and Akash and ruined what could have been a beautiful family. Reaffirms the belief that 'live your life now; in this moment''.

Both the families lost a member each at an age they were supposed to live life to the fullest. Heart- breaking!

I love how Arnav and Khushi's story shaped up. Arnav realizing that he will not let Khushi go away this time around ensured that they both are destined to be together.

Loved how here Khushi was the one to say farkh padta hai kyunki... and Arnav was the one demanding answers from Khushi.

How can I forget the sweet- heart Pratheek? So cute! He wants his mumma's troubling Laad Governor to go away! But he doesn't know LG is in Khushi's life for good!

Please post that SS soon!

Thank you so much. Me too likes feisty Khushi. A girl ought to be like that.😛
True. Glad that you picked on the uncertainty of life. Two good souls, so much in love and yet lost because of poor communication.
Muhe inke farak padta hai se bahut farak padta hai.
Prateek is a darling in that LG bit. 😊
As told I haven't started on that SS but I'm planning to get down to writing soon. 😛 *Keeping my fingers crossed*

Originally posted by: chavvi16

so he wasnt her son but her jiji
and man that was sad about payash
they never got to see one another
and wow that kiss
that sure was something
guess it all worked out fine for them
and am glad

Love, life everything is so uncertain these days.
It did work out good for them and this time for forever. 😛