ArHi TS : UNEXPECTED ~ Part-2 Pg1 15/10 *COMPLETED* - Page 8

Originally posted by: rashika

I absolutely loved the second part.

A lot happened.

From finding out that Prateek is the son of the late Akash and Payal, to Arnav and Khushi finally admitting that they missed each other.

Loved how the whole Raizada family and Gupta family came together for Prateek to get the love he deserves.

And of course the best part Arnav and Khushi getting married.

Awesome update.

Thank you so much. I'm glad that you liked it.
Thank you so much for your comment.😊
I really can't help myself from getting Arnav-Khushi married. 😛

Originally posted by: Sarunfanatic_Ji

Janu, I was waiting for this TS! Finally read it.

It was beautiful. Payal and Akash's unfinished love was something I was not expecting.

That kiss was bloody beautiful. And well, you wrote it so amazingly.

Finally, Raizada's accepted Prateek. Arnav's confession was really heart touching!

Ohmigod, I'm so happy that you are going to start a new SS! And my favorite genre 'ROMEDY' hehe bring it on ;)

waiting impatiently. You better hurry.

PS : EID MUBARAK!

Yess I know and this was the one I told you about. 😊 Now see how lazy I am!! 😆
For Payal & Akash, me too was quite sad but they must be together in a place where there were no barriers or problems for their love.
Thank you 😳
Hoping that I get down to writing real fast for the SS. 😛

Khair Mubarak!!

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Though the story of your TS is very different from the show, I loved how you incorporated IPK in it. Arnav troubling Khushi while she worked at AR, she breaking the contract and resigning, still being affected and thinking of the other, aapko meetha mana hain, the proximity in the storeroom leading to a rabba ve, acting indifferent after an almost kiss, letting each other go knowing the other is important, and all the nahi manna and manvana.

Man I love IPK and you brought it for me again 👏

Your TS shows how important communication and understanding are to keep love and peace in tact in relationships... otherwise bitterness and hard feelings take its place.

Loved the story!

Thank you so much Saiyyu. 🤗
Arnav-Khushi ko IPK mein se and IPK mein se Arnav-Khushi ko nikaalna bahut hi mushqil hai, at least for me. Can't do without them!!

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

Perfect ending dii

i mean it was awesome

specially d kiss

hayeee 😳😳

so prateek was payal and akash son

both died 😲😲

i hate manoroma bcz of her prateek bcame and orphan lost dere parents

and moreover akash was insulted for dose reason wich he never did

arnav was spying on khushi 😆😆

finally all the truth was out

dey gt engaged wooo

d way arnav asked khushi for marriage was reaally sweet of him

and yesss arnav can be handled only by khushi 😛😛😛

loved it diii ❤️

awesome ending 👍🏼

Thank you. 😊
I'm happy that you loved their kiss. 😳
Akash never told Manorama that Payal was pregnant. Yes she judged Payal as per her status but if she had known then she won't have rejected her.
Thank you so much for your comment on both part-1 & 2. :)

Originally posted by: aquagal

Thank you so much. Me too likes feisty Khushi. A girl ought to be like that.😛
True. Glad that you picked on the uncertainty of life. Two good souls, so much in love and yet lost because of poor communication.
Muhe inke farak padta hai se bahut farak padta hai.
Prateek is a darling in that LG bit. 😊
As told I haven't started on that SS but I'm planning to get down to writing soon. 😛 *Keeping my fingers crossed*

Originally posted by: NidhiNev

AAYAT !!!!!! FINALLY YOU WROTE AGAIN !!!!
I Mean Wow, seriously. Its kindda different.
So Arnav and Khushi meet after years ! That to in Mumbai and turn out to be Boss and P.A ?
A note -

Mr. Mittal,
Thank-you for retiring and letting RC (Raizada Constructions) take over, whose C.E.O happens to be Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada.
Also a big thank-you for making Khushi, ASR's P.A ! The contract you made Khushi sign, that she cannot leave her job atleast for a year is a mark of a good employer.
Mr. Mittal you have no clue whatsoever, how important this whole set up is for ASR to get back his life, Khushi !
Your's Ever Greatful,
An Admirer.

Ok, so Arnav hell bent upon getting back Khushi, by hook or crook, challenging her,only to hear a small boy's voice calling out "Mumma" ! And obviously his whole world came crashing down !

Aayat some answers wanted :- (1) how long is it since Arnav and Khushi seperated ? (2) how old is the small boy ?

Answers wanted for these two questions ASAP !

Tk..cr..keep writing..waiting for your answers ...

*Muahs* its going to be a roller coaster, this story !
Ek bada sa Dhamaka, pehle hi Chapter mein !? Lets see what lies ahead ..dhak, dhak, dhak, dhak...Dil shor kar raha hai, saansein ruk ruk ke chal rahi hain, marna nahin hai par, thats y update fast ... :D

Originally posted by: NidhiNev

Part 2 is better than part 1 ( chapter )
Arnav had already fallen for her when she was in AR itself ! Un bloody believeable ! The store room..damn the security !

Kehte hain ..Ishq chupaye nahin chupti..yeh aisi baat hai jo hoonthon pe aa hi jaati hai ! ...well i may have written some words Here n there, but my intension of writing it fitted the situation after they met in Mittal's office !...

The love, longing for each other had not vanished just dimmed. Only to be brightened. Lightened up several lights, switched on the ovens, microwaves etc...by the single brush of their skin against each others, the touch, the soft peck ...all the years of sadness of staying apart vanished..just like that ! Arnav and Khushi surely loved each other. Else the slightest of touch or hot breath or a peck wouldnt have turned into an emotional breakdown of sorts, only to part for the little oxygen they needed. *runs to get oxygen for myself**butterflies in my stomach fly away pls*

Realisation why did it come in the middle !*frowns*

Khushi started apologizing and Arnav shouted at her...dont demean it by apologizing ... Coz i am not at all sorry for it ! Damn Arnav knew the chemistry they shared was immense, their love was pure. But Khushi was on another trip altogether !

Prateek was Khushi's sister's and Arnav's brother's son !!!???!!!?! Haye bhagwan and here i was thinking the kid was Arnav and Khushi's son ! What a twist Aayat ! Also that they had expired and families were not on talking terms ! Arnav befriended Prateek only to be told that some 'Laad Governor' had been irritating Khushi, to which Arnav laughed and admitted that he was that 'Laad Governor' so sweet ! *smiles*

So cool. ...!! Mami accepted Prateek as her grandson and the misunderstandings between the families were solved *happy*

Back to the the two love birds..inka kuch nahin ho sakta !
Khushi wanting to say no because whenever both were together they fought !
Arnav said he wanted to marry her coz he missed their fights :0 ... The reason Khushi was going to say no to get married .lol..

Touching..Arnav cleared her doubts by telling Khushi that he loved her and missed her and missed only her and wanted to marry her. Khushi blushed kya ?!

Yippeee!! They got married and the whole family was extra happy ! Nazar toh utarna hi tha !

Hope my comment, if i may call it, makes sense !

Aayat write more yaar.. This can also continue..after marriage things etc. the fighting, the dramatic anger, all to be solved by a look or touch or just plain wooing.. Red Roses n all you know!
Prateek being adopted by them and also Khushi some weight on her stomach/waist (if u know what i mean) Making up for all the years lost in every way possible *wink*

too good totally UNEXPECTED a story !
not too long also i hope for ur liking ?!

First of all A Big Thank You and a bear hug for you Nidhi. 🤗
Mr. Mittal is crucial for Arnav-Khushi. 😉 He always does the right thing in my stories at least as Khushi's boss. 😆
I hope all your questions got answered in the second part. 😃
Thank you so much and I'm so happy that you loved the second part more than first. 😊
Rabba Veys always gets interrupted but after six years few deeds needs to be completed. 😳
I was pretty insecure, mainly because I haven't written much serious stuff and this twist was both sad and serious.
I'll write another SS. I'm not good with marriage and all stuff.
And yes I completely understood your clue about the waist gain. 😉😳

Originally posted by: aquagal

Thank you. 😊
I'm happy that you loved their kiss. 😳
Akash never told Manorama that Payal was pregnant. Yes she judged Payal as per her status but if she had known then she won't have rejected her.
Thank you so much for your comment on both part-1 & 2. :)

Originally posted by: Nexus_13

Ah! Don't we all have a bit of Khushi in us? Ab bas ASR ka intezaar hai...😉

Pratheek ke baare mein aur likho na koi OS ya SS ya FF mein...?

My fingers are crossed too...😊

Yes. Aur ab intehaa ho gayi intezaar ki.. 😉
May be some day... 😛

Res..

Awesome os.