ArHi TS : UNEXPECTED ~ Part-2 Pg1 15/10 *COMPLETED*

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

so he wasnt her son but her jiji
and man that was sad about payash
they never got to see one another
and wow that kiss
that sure was something
guess it all worked out fine for them
and am glad

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Just read both parts! Great job, linking the original story, with your own twist!!! Loved it!

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Roshni

@rashika

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

I absolutely loved the second part.

A lot happened.

From finding out that Prateek is the son of the late Akash and Payal, to Arnav and Khushi finally admitting that they missed each other.

Loved how the whole Raizada family and Gupta family came together for Prateek to get the love he deserves.

And of course the best part Arnav and Khushi getting married.

Awesome update.

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

That was once again really interesting with all the twists and turns.

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

loved the 2nd part..

will b eagerly waiting for the ss.

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Janu, I was waiting for this TS! Finally read it.

It was beautiful. Payal and Akash's unfinished love was something I was not expecting.

That kiss was bloody beautiful. And well, you wrote it so amazingly.

Finally, Raizada's accepted Prateek. Arnav's confession was really heart touching!

Ohmigod, I'm so happy that you are going to start a new SS! And my favorite genre 'ROMEDY' hehe bring it on ;)

waiting impatiently. You better hurry.

PS : EID MUBARAK!