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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

rey lost d bet nd

haye bechara rey..kaamwali bai banadiya use kriya ne..

poor rey!
nd he took d revenge at night

nt bad rey 😆

2 yrs leap

rehaan...hmmm..

first rey losing bet then rey winning it nd asking kriya for her smaller version! then baatcutter

that was too cute
loved it very much
thnx for dis amazing os
thnx for pm

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Supab
i too love pani puri
par mujhe koi jyada khane hi nahi deta
love both versoin

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Woah Sweet but the grt leaps :P

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Shanae

@..Shanae..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

awesome OS dear :)
Loved KR version... It was extremely adorable!

Keep shining ⭐️

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Soha

@-Soha-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Hey...Before going on to the OS...I will have a wishing round...Obviously for my dear Buddy Pradeep...

Happy Birthday to you...👏

Happy Birthday dear buddy...🤗

Happy Birthday to you...👏

May you have Many More...😊

I'm sorry maine tumhari bday per kuch nahi kiya😭...I'm really very sorry..But mujhe ussi din pata chala naa...Uss se pehle pata hota tou zaroor karti..But apni Jas..Tumhari Cutie ne kar diya naa...

Chalo here is an edit for you from me...Sorry acha nahi bana as I'm not good in editing field...😒

But I hope you like it...😳

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Now coming up to the OS...

Pehle tou Jas I'm so happy that you are back to writing..I missed you a lot..🤗

Haye OS kaa title sun kar hee mun mai paani aata hai..."Paani Puri"😆

Main bhi Punjabi hoon naa...So you know😉

Phir KR kaa romance alag hota hai..Paani Puri mai bhi romance..wah wah..🤣

Awesome Work dear..I loved it...

Rey bechara...haar gaya tou sub kaam karna para per Rey bhi kuch kam nahi hai...Next time kia badla liya...😎

It was a great one...👏

Fabulous Job!👍🏼

Regards,

Soha!

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

AWWW That asss a short n cutee... one

n as I said.. we punjabi... oblt think abt foood...

Um YUM... main to oadte oadte paaani puri N KR+swaron ke baare main thinking

hayee hww cutee Thanxxx fr pm.

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veronica

@SwaRon_rocks

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

reswa

Remind me to edit later jassy😆

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Dakshayini

@dhaakshu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

chota tha, lekin just like pani puri's taste.

sone se pehle kuch aur meetha ho gaya.

my favorite line was

"They had small version of baatcutter and linecuuter playing in the garden and rey and kriya eating paaani puri in the kitchen..."

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Such a pani puri OS...
Small version of baatcutter...hahahaha
loved it

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Just ask

@-Elysian-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Omfg!!
This was the sweetest and cutest OS I have ever read! :O
Jas di, you are just awesome!
Both KR & SS version tho <3
Awh i loved hows in KR,
Kriya is the champion <3
lol its always the girls 😳😆
Im so proud to be a girl :')
I myself love Pani puri <3
And haww, little baatcutter and linecutter <3
and for swaron!!
little siren and phillosopher 😆
wow what a thought 😆
In all I loved it <3
keep writing more
and please don't forget to pm me okay? 😭

-XOXO-
~You Know You Love Me~
S a n a y a ~

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