paaani puri a kr and swaron os

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Paaani puri

a kr and swaron os



so here i m back with another os for you

you know kya karu punjab hun is;liye cant help it. khaana peena is my majboori...hehheheh do enjoy the os


this one is for pradeep bhai...
sorrry bhai for forgettting and happy belated birthday once again...
aapka suprprise
special credits:
madhukumari aka madhu aka my jaaan... thanku for forcing me to write the os
kriyaansh _alisha aka alisha di aka aly di ..thanku for helping me in getting those pics/...


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second post kr version
third post swaron version
do enjoy

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Posted: 11 years ago
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KR VERSION




Paani puri ...kriya squealed seeing paani puri in the kitchen

Kriy a was so happy seeing paani puri in the kitchen she was going to eat wen rey said," not so easily dear lets do a chellenge whoevr eats the most no of paaani puri will complete one wish of other"

Kriya," you are challenging me???????? Me the paani puri champion ??????????? Challenge accepted my deary husband. "

Rey and kriya shaked their hands and sat on the dining area and started.


One plate eaten two plate eaten three plate eaten. None of them could eat more but no one wanted to loose.

Rey " bas I cant have more" . kriya ,"wat did I hear right u said u wont be eating more this means..."

Yes, :" this means you won miss kriya reyaansh singhaniya"

Kriya squealed in joy and stood on table with excitement

" aham ahem so my dear hubbby remember the bet you will have to do whatever I say"" yes yes I do remember madam tell me what do I have to do""well for that my dear husband you will have to wait"


"get up mr reyaansh singhaniya hold this broom and get set to work". " wat kriya broom and I wat r u saying ". " saying my dear husband if u remebr you lost yesterday so as the bet you have to complete my wish ." kaamwaali kaaki is not coming today so you will do all her work". Rey had an 0o like expression on his face . he knew he could not do anything and so like an obedient school student he began cleaning the floor. Kriya was chuckling on seeing his condition . Rey was busy mopping the floor when kriya came. " mr singhaniya after completing this work come to the room and help me take out those boxes from the top of the cupboard". Rey reached the room and saw kriya standing on the stool trying to take out the boxes; she was about to fall of the stool when rey went and held her in his arms. " baatcutter u wait and watch what I will do you will have to pay for this he said." " kriya knew what he meant but ignored him.



Whole day rey had spent being the kaamwaali bai of the house. From mopping the floor to cooking to washing clothes everything was done by rey. Kriya laughed heartedly seeing rey like this and rey melted in kriyas laughter. Rey came into the room and saw kriya standing over there. He switched of the lights and then made love whole night...


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2 years later

Kriya was busy feeding their 1 year old son rehaaan food just rey enterd. Rehaan squealed in happiness seeing his father and hugged him tightly. Rey put him in bed and then went to kriya and said," baaatcutter surprise for you and he took out the packet of paani puri. Kriya happiness knew no bounds an she was so happy and excited to eat them .


But before that rey kept his challenge again and this time he won.

" so mrs kriya reyaansh singhaniya my wish is that I want thjat we should ..."we should wat rey" kriya said getting scared of what rey would be asking


Rey came close to her ear and said try for small version of baatcuttter. Kriya had an o0o expression on her face bit due to paaani puri challenge she had no option and ...


After another year

They had small version of baatcutter and linecuuter playing in the garden and rey and kriya eating paaani puri in the kitchen...


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Edited by jas112 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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swaron version





Paani puri ... Sharon squealed seeing paani puri in the kitchen

Sharon was so happy seeing paani puri in the kitchen she was going to eat wen swayam said," not so easily dear lets do a chellenge whoevr eats the most no of paaani puri will complete one wish of other"

Sharon ," you are challenging me???????? Me the paani puri champion ??????????? Challenge accepted my deary husband. "

Swaron shaked their hands and sat on the dining area and started.


One plate eaten two plate eaten three plate eaten. None of them could eat more but no one wanted to loose.

Swayam " bas I cant have more" . Sharon ,"wat did I hear right u said u wont be eating more this means..."

Yes, :" this means you won miss Sharon swayam shikhawat "

Sharon squealed in joy and stood on table with excitement

" aham ahem so my dear hubbby remember the bet you will have to do whatever I say"" yes yes I do remember madam tell me what do I have to do""well for that my dear husband you will have to wait"



"get up swayam shikhawat hold this broom and get set to work". " wat Sharon broom and I wat r u saying ". " saying my dear husband if u remeber you lost yesterday so as the bet you have to complete my wish ." kaamwaali kaaki is not coming today so you will do all her work". Swayam had an 0o like expression on his face . he knew he could not do anything and so like an obedient school student he began cleaning the floor. Sharon was chuckling on seeing his condition . Swayam was busy mopping the floor when sharon came. " mr shekhawat after completing this work come to the room and help me take out those boxes from the top of the cupboard". Swayam reached the room and saw Sharon standing on the stool trying to take out the boxes; she was about to fall of the stool when swayam went and held her in his arms. " sirensharon u wait and watch what I will do you will have to pay for this he said." Sharon knew what he meant but ignored him.




Whole day swayam had spent being the kaamwaali bai of the house. From mopping the floor to cooking to washing clothes everything was done by him. She laughed heartedly seeing him like this and he melted in her laughter. He came into the room and saw her standing over there. He switched of the lights and then made love whole night...


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2 years later

She was busy feeding their 1 year old son rehaaan food just swayam enterd. Rehaan squealed in happiness seeing his father and hugged him tightly. He put him in bed and then went to her and said," siren sharonr surprise for you and he took out the packet of paani puri. Her happiness knew no bounds an she was so happy and excited to eat them .


But before that he kept his challenge again and this time he won.

" so mrs Sharon swayam shikhawat my wish is that I want that we should ..."we should wat swayam" she said getting scared of what he would be asking

He came close to her ear and said try for small version of siren sharon. Sharon had an o0o expression on her face bit due to paaani puri challenge she had no option and ...


After another year

They had small version of siren sharon and philosipical swayam playing in the garden and Sharon and swayam eating paaani puri in the kitchen...

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Edited by jas112 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😃

kya kahu cuti mere pass word nahi hai meri feeling ko describe karne ke liye
this is the best gift ever
i loved that most
i love u cuti for the special gift
🤗
Hug u tight more cuti
update ka kya kahu
naam hi read karke muh mai pani aa gaya
PANI PURI
yeh tho meri life jab tak din mai ek baar kha na lu complete nahi hota mera day
so mai tho roj khata hu
hahahahahahahaha 😊
😊
😊
and pani puri with kriyansh tho ye tho sone par suhaga ho gaya
pani puri ki bet aishe crezy bet lagane mai mazza aata hai
kriya is the champion of pani puri hahahahaha
aur jeet bhi gai
wow bechara rey har ki tho punishment mili
bai ban ke kaam karna pada hahahahaha
and
another round of pani puri
first mai tho rehaan and 2nd mai dekho kya hota hai hahahahahahahahahaha loved it
Fully rocked update
Loved it totaly
Bottom of my heart
Thanx cuti this is the best
Edited by pradeep_maurya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by pradeep_maurya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res...
unres...
jas it was so so sweet os yar😳...too adorable...
loved it like anything.⭐️...
kriyansh bet on panni puri😉...rey kaamwalli bai🤣...
rehaan cute name😳...
small version of linecutter n baatcutter...aww...
missing kriyansh so much.😭...
update next os soon😛...
love u...🤗.

Edited by kriyansh_Alisha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing os
this was mindblowing
rey lost d bet nd kria made him do all d household work
poor rey!
nd he took d revenge at night
nd then 2 years leap
rehaan...hmmm...nyc name
nd dis tym rey won
nd asked kriya for small version of baatcutter
that was too cute
loved it very much
thnx for dis amazing os
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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super amazing
it was a really cute OS
i loved it lot

short and simply
thanks for the PM
do write more 😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow nice update👏
amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was ok ok os
I liked the naughty side swayam
thanks for writing

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