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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow super so manvi finally told the truth abt their relation and i liked this very much
jeevika got a bit emotion hopefully she understands manvi situation and nt fight with her
excited to knw hw virmans relationship progress and also loved manvi's mom concern for her
do continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Dear

Sorry for late comment dear
😳 ....Amazing update yaar 👏👏👏...loved it...Omg! Manvi is really crazy yaar... her this line was so funny... 😉
"JUST CAN'T DIE! I CAN NOT DIE! ATLEAST NOT AS A VIRGIN MAN!".😆

The way she told about Virat to her parents n the way she consoled them n her parents reaction
😛...loved it!...n Virman phone convo was too nice 😊 ...n Manvi dint pick Jeevs phone intentionally 😲..nnn the most amazing part was Virat's surprise to Manvi☺️😉 ...just superb...n Virat's lines were super funny 😆 ...N finally Jeevika came to meet Manvi... got upset by her words ...excited for next...update soon n thank u so much for the pm...

Love U
Take care
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Edited by nia333 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh...15 to 18th chapters i just read it now...they were tooo good...i kept waiting for your pm or change in title...but niether happened...today only i got to know...😔
It was simply AWESOME!
Too good...a few dialogues acted like the cherry on the cake...
Besharam virmanians ke liye thode aur besharam updates dona...😉😆
Meeting the parents...and gosh virat is preparing...
His past and present is very much dissappointing...his helplessness was beautifully potrayed...
Please keep up the good work...I seriously wait to read your story...
Pleass dont keep us waiting...pleass update soon...please pm me the next update too...take care...
Edited by Viru_Neutrogina - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 19 :
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Part 19:

I look at myself in the mirror and shift my dupatta on my neck a little on the right side as the ends weren't leveled on the bottom. I stare at myself and take a deep breath. "everything will be alright manvi" I lie to myself knowing somehow someway somebody will mess this up and that someone is most probably going to be me. I scuff my kameez just to make sure there are no hair or thread pieces on my kameez. "Exam mera ha or tyaar tum horhi ho?" I hear a manly voice say and turn around with a loud gasp. Virat was sitting on my window still holding the window up with his hand and his one foot dangling from the window. I open my eyes wide! He is in my bedroom?? Omg! This is the first time he is in my room! "What did you see?" is the first thing that pops out of my mouth as I was changing like 5 minutes ago. He giggles and stands up from the window still, walking towards me. "Just about enough" he says with a charming smile. I wanted to blush immediately but I controlled my emotion and forced anger. "WHAT?" I scream and I swear I was ready to punch him." Just kidding, itna kamina nhi ho. I don't peep!" I roll my eyes and fold my arms "then get out!" I say. He giggles and walks towards me and spins me making me face the mirror, he slid his hands around my waist and held me ahead of him. I shivered from the sudden touch. This was the first time a guy touched me like that. As much as I liked it I also wanted it to stop, this wasn't right. "You look beautiful" he says and I blush a little. I look at my baby pink kameez with a baby blue curidar pajama and a light yellow duppata. "Thank you "I say and lower my gaze to the ground while blushing. He smiles looking at me "full on golla ganda lag rahi ho" he says while laughing and I look up at him with my mouth opened in a big o. I push him away from me immediately "get out!" I yell and he runs right away with a mischievous smile and jumps out the window. I run towards the window in curiosity and watch him slide down through the water pipe. He jumps on his landing and straightens up his black coat and tie and rings the doorbell of the main entrance.

"beta virat agaya" I hear my mom scream after a while and I rush downstairs acting as if I haven't seen him yet today. I was hell nervous, my dad was like doing a security scan on him with his eyes. He walked in so elegantly I swear he so wasn't looking like a crazy 20 year old. "This is for you antie" he says while handing my mom a bouquet of flowers and a box of choclates. "ao beta betho" my mom says making virat sit down on the sofa. My dad sits next to him and continues with his Scantron using his eyes. I make a face feeling he is being too rude to virat but virat was all calm and quiet. I had to say he cleaned up nicely and was looking hot! I didn't notice that upstairs I guess I was too caught up thinking about the possibility that virat saw me butt naked. I shrug that thought out of my mind and look at virat who was drinking water from my mom's special wine glasses. What was ironic was that wine and alcohol wasn't allowed in our house. "So uncle how is everything going?" virat finally asked and killed the silence. My dad looked at him "do you smoke?" he asked all of a sudden leaving virat at aghast. "No sir" he replied. "Do you drink, alcohol?" He asked. Virat gulped "umm no sir, never". I drink my glass of water in the fear of this intense conversation. "Are you a v*rgin?" my dad clearly asked him. My eyes opened wide and I started choking on my water. I choked really badly and virat ran towards me rubbing my back. My dad just sat there observing us. As soon as I felt better I pushed virats hand away from my back as I knew my dad was looking at us like a hawk. Virat right away sat back down and took a deep breath. "Yes sir I am a v*rgin". He said emphasizing on the word v*rgin by increasing his tone. I chuckle a little right away and my dad looks at me in anger. "I'll be in the kitchen" I say while stammering and run out of there in the fear of my dad and his intense questions.

"Mom, dad has gone crazy!" I say as I walk inside the kitchen and she was frying samosas. She giggles. I pick up a samosas from the plate and yell as it was too hot and let go. My mom giggles again. I make a face and ignore her laughing. " beta virat has changed a lot, hasn't he? Bera hogaya ha na?" she says. "Mom that's what puberty does!" I say stating the obvious while still trying to pick up that samosa without getting burned. "HA-HA very funny, I mean like he is handsome now, pehla he was scrawny". She says. "I guess so" I say and finally take a bite from that samosa.

Dinner was really quite nobody was saying a word and the only interesting thing was daboo and his weirdness. I swear he was so embarrassing some times. "So virat where were you all these years? Like who you have been living with, manvi told me about your parents accident." Virat looked at her "well I will be totally honest with you. After you guys moved from panchgani exactly after 6 months the accident happened and the court handed me over to my uncle, my dad's brother and he adopted me because he only had one daughter and wanted me to carry his name not my dad's but after adopting me the court find out about that and made it illegal for him to change my last name. So since then mera pass siraf naam ka parents ha . We are stuck with each other but hey im rich so I guess it's not that bad. I joined this college last year after moving back from America. I went there for my music career but failed miserably so my step dad forced me to go to college because I already wasted a year in my bachelors. But last year I failed miserably so this is my second year but it's still the first year of college." He said. My dad looked at him strangely. "Your past is horrible, why should we accept you?" my dad asks and I just yell in my head. virat looks at my dad with intensity "Because we love each other and even people dying from hunger are alive just because they have each other and that is all that matters for me in life, I've made mistakes and I've been told what to do but now it's my way and I promise I will love and cherish her and keep her happy forever and ever or else shall my parents never go to heaven." virat says leaving us all stunned. "This family has way to much drama I'm eating my dinner in my room" daboo says and leaves with his plate full of biryani. He just loves leaving serious situations. There was an awkward silence for a while and I was just dragging my mashed potatoes all around my plate with the shiny silver fork. "Interesting" my dad says. What the hell? This is so weird. "So beta when we can meet your step parents?" my mom asks virat nicely.me and virat glance at each other in agitation knowing that we can't throw a bomb on my parents telling them everything about virats step parents. "I'll be totally honest, the thing is..." he says and I scream "THEY ARE OUT OF TOWN" I yell interrupting virats sentence. He looks at me in shock and mouths a what the f***. I give him a mischievous smile and wink at him. "Oh that's okay" my mom says. My phone beeps and I check it , it was a text from virat: are you out of your mind? Why did you lie?' I look up at him and he was looking at me. I type: trust me on this!' I type and hit send.

After dinner we all were sitting in the living room eating my mom's special chocolate fudge cake. My dad looked at virat and then me and stood up from his seat leaving us all confused. "OKAY" he says. I stand up in excitement and run to him and hug him tight. "Thank you thank you thank yoouuu" I yell and virat stands up with a big smile. "Thank you sir" he says. "But one condition, it will be a final yes only after meeting your parents" he says. I look at virat and give him a look of reassurance and he fakes a smile.

Edited by mebigirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
loved virman part... Though its small
liked how manvi dad is questioning virat ...
concern for daughter
loved it
continue soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by niki795 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..
Love it..
Update it quick plzz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved virat and maanvi's parents convo
Plz cont soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update... finally virat met manvi parents... i didnt expect manvi dad asked virat he is virgin or not... virat handled all smoothly... finally they said ok but with one condn they want to meet virat step parents... what will happen next... update soon... thanks for pm

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