Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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manali garg

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Posted: 11 years ago

#961

this makes me curious...plz update soon...

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sruthick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#962

Wat...!! Khushi s married...
Shyam s her husbnd..!!
Nd its clear that Arnav s d serial killr...
Then who was it..??
Amazing update...
Cntinue soon

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#963

chapter 4...

the title of the chapter is absolutely perfect..

khushi is falling for him...and also confused too..

awesome part...

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#964

oh jenny that indeed was a real revelation - shyamu is kushi's hus - and he is a SIS agent - that is a real shock for me - didn't she say she is staying alone - is she his ex? what the hell is an agent's wife doing at bars - spying, is it

what is major raizada doing to khushi - trying to get details about shyamu, r we?

hmmm, coming to the scars - does it have anything to do with shyamu? does shyam have something to do with arnav's wife and hence the revenge???? oh God what am I to do with these queries popping out of my mind?

iam very very intrigued jenny - fantastic update dear - will wait for next

sorry for the delayed comments

Edited by Arjuhisis - 11 years ago

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#965

chapter 5...

omg what a twist shayam is khushi husband and he is also SIS agent..

arshi passionate romantic moments were awesome..

hmm arnav is directly suspicion of a serial killer...

but i'm sure he is not a serial killer...

and he is on some kind of mission..

and now khushi's character become has mysterious..

Edited by chandni00 - 11 years ago

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oopppsss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#966

The pace of the story is good but there is too much mystery pls start clearing them atleast one at a time.pls keep the flow of the updates steady too,the suspence is killing

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sakhter90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#967

That was great! Wow just when u think u nw what's going to happen another twist! So Arnav was looking for information about Shaym which means he knows that khushi is his wife. But it was good to see that he ddn just use her but did actually like her and wanted to be with her. Khushi was just hoping for a future with Arnav. Seems like she has been through so much and is holding on to any kind of hope which might lead to a bit of happiness.

Lookin forward to next update.

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sreemeera

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Posted: 11 years ago

#968

Outstanding update.

So Arnav is on a mission and he is not the serial killer.

He wants some information about Shyam..

Khushi is falling for Arnav and she knew that it's only one sided emotion.

Though Shyam is her husband, they are not sharing a good relationship.

This much I understood.. Shyam might be the reason for Khushi's painful past and present. Waiting to read further about her past.

Edited by sreemeera - 11 years ago

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sh.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#969

Full of suspence i tell you! Totally enjoyed it!!

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Anamika100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#970

This story is complicated and it depicts complex people. That is the essence here so far. Arnav apparently knows a lot more about Khushi and her life than the readers do and that information makes him hold her in contempt. In fact, he appears to hold women in contempt mostly. While he loses control in his passion to have her, he recovers he control fairly soon. He is using her to get access to Shyam in a very detached and cold blooded manner. I am not sure I like him.

Khushi on the other hand really feels the attraction, passion and even tenderness for him. She wishes They had met in a different time and place. She is breaking my heart with her aura of sadness and despair.

The circumstances and characters all shrouded in a mystery which is crafted very well!!!!.

Edited by Anamika100 - 11 years ago