Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1. - Page 98

loved it plz continue! And can't believe that shyam and khushi are married.??????????

What a twist wnat a twist.pls update soon

It is very impressive how you've matched the darkeness of the interior landscapes with that of the exterior.

Again I am so struck by your sense of place and atmosphere, Jen, as also by your ability to bring it to life in the way you sketch it for us. One can see, smell and feel this sordid world where there is so little hope.

There is such unrelenting gloom in this world which has very little colour, Khushi's green dress, the rose being the very few things with colour.

The atmosphere reminds me so much of a gotham like city, inhabited by broken, damaged people, it is as if the extraordinary is the ordinary in this world of betrayal. Even the park in which Arnav meets the other agent seems devoid of colour, hope or anything decent.

Khushi's is the only act of fidelity and love in this world of betrayal and hatred - the one act that comes from her heart in giving herself to Arnav and trusting him with her body and feelings. it is the only act of creation in world of shattered hopes, dreams and trust.

Why does Arnav believe her to be guilty? what evidence does he have, I wonder.

There is something very personal in the way Arnav has been pursuing Shyam through Khushi. I feel Shyam may have something to do with Lavanya and somehow Arnav believes Khushi is involved in this. Which is why it is so easy for him to deny all that has happened between them and view it as part of his duty/goal in getting to Shyam.

Well you will tell us very soon!

But right now all I can think about is your break from IF. It is upon us! All I hope this is not a permanent one and you will come back to it.

My My..
This story is seriously different from ur other one's... ;)
Just read the 1st part..
Arnav's 1st wife betrayed him badly.. Now when he is out of jail, is Khushi caught his eye?!! Need to reead more... And Arnav is... Oh! Sorry was Major. Interesting.

Eeesh!
Khushi's language ia changed here or I can say its whole opposite. It should be Hey Devi Maiya or Hey Lord but she is using F words...! Strange.. Loving the story. Its thrilling in a way tooo...
She don't want Arnav to follow her but she isa dissappointed too after not seeing him.. It shows the change in her feelings. I want to know Arnav's feelings too and that Serial Killer thing is pricking me!!
Going to read 3rd one...

What the?!
You fool Arnav was saving Khushi! Hai naa?? Confused and scared... I don't want Arnav to be tagged as a serial killer. But I think everryone will point on him coz he was in trauma too and huis wife betrayed him. I just hope even if everyone will point on him but may Khushi will support him! Going to read next

I enjoyed reading this chapter. I am glad that Khushi accepted him somewhere...
Going for next! :p