Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#501

Awesome banners...
This is really scary, mysterious and dramatic update...the description of the suspected serial killer could fit Arnav...please don't tell us the stalker is Arnav...I don't want to think the worst but end up doing that only...will wait till you unfold the suspense...Jenny, this is totally different story than your other stories...is there any connection of Khushi with Lavanya or Aditya...too many questions...will wait for the next update.

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#502

All the 3 banners r very good but the 3rd one is so intriguing ...

I m sure Major Raizada is not the killer...

But I wonder what was he doing on that very road where Khushi was being stalked 😕

Khushi's feelings r quite contradictory ..

She's afraid of him...

She resists his forced touch..

Yet,she suffers DISAPPOINTMENT n can't sleep soundly...

O n the other hand...

Major Raizada can't keep his hands off the Lady...

But,he has no love n respect for her but just CONTEMPT

Jenny...

This SS of urs is quite experimental...

Though I feel a little uneasy but curiosity is really killing me...

Jenny,my Jenny..

Tussi Gr8 ho !!!

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metitaliya

@metitaliya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#503

awesome story...different one...is the girl khushi?please pm me?

Edited by metitaliya - 11 years ago

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simran

@crazymg.04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#504

hey i love this story...the tension between them is so intriguing

loved it👏

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#505

Updated my comments here 😊

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kuchnaakahoo

@kuchnaakahoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#506

i couldnt quite understand y arnav's orbs were contemptuous while looking at khushi's photo,,, is he indeed the murderer,,, there is so much suspense,, n i am just hooked on to it,,,

most importantly i m in love with Khushi,,, so practical n intelligent yet desperate n hopeful,,, good going,,,

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

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Posted: 11 years ago

#507

You have me hook, line and sinker Jenny!

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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#508

Amazing update...
What is happening?? Was arnav the one following her??
What is this mystery...
Can't wait for it to unfold...

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daffodils06

@daffodils06

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#509

this story of urs is so intense in so many ways...i just dont know wat to feel...and not to mention the air of mystery surrounding both arnav and khushi and the serial killer...hop i will b able to gather my thots with the coming chapters..