Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#491

I jus hope Arnav isn't the serial killer😆😆

Khushi is awesome

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montyk

@montyk

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

Great banners!!

I don't think Arnav is the stalker

Very interesting !!

Thanks for the update Jenny:)

Waiting for the next update..

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#493

I know I have been beating this to death but I have to repeat myself. Words fail me to express how the setting adds to the suspense in this story. I personally am enjoying it thoroughly.

I got these points from the story:

1. Khushi is being stalked.

2. Arnav is right there to save her...too close to be accidental

3. Arnav had PTSS and he was acquitted of a murder

4. Arnav hates Khushi for some reason

5. The police informer has pointed towards Arnav as the murderer.

Despite Arnav's hatred for Khushi, despite him trying to scare her...his attraction to her is something he is unable to control. Despite Khushi's fear for her life, instead of running, she is turning to him. She wants him as does he. Well, Life is a bitch indeed. But we do end up finding love amidst the chaos. Then all the pain becomes worthwhile.

As for the suspicion pointing towards Arnav...well, it is too simple and no murder mystery is that simple. So, I'm waiting fro more to unfold. I for one do not buy that Arnav killed Lavanya even though he had faced the worst kind of betrayal where the wife and best friend cheat him of dignity.

But Arnav being Arnav would walk away with his head held high rather than give them the satisfaction of knowing that they matter to him when he didn't matter to them.

Waiting, waiting, waiting, impatiently jen😃

BTW,

Lovely Banners Jen...

Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

I know I have been beating this to death but I have to repeat myself. Words fail me to express how the setting adds to the suspense in this story. I personally am enjoying it thoroughly.


I got these points from the story:


1. Khushi is being stalked.


2. Arnav is right there to save her...too close to be accidental


3. Arnav had PTSS and he wasacquitted of a murder

4. Arnav hates Khushi for some reason


5. The police informer has pointed towards Arnav as the murderer.


Despite Arnav's hatred for Khushi, despite him trying to scare her...his attraction to her is something he is unable to control. Despite Khushi's fear for her life, instead of running, she is turning to him. She wants him as does he. Well, Life is a bitch indeed. But we do end up finding love amidst the chaos. Then all the pain becomes worthwhile.


As for the suspicion pointing towards Arnav...well, it is too simple and no murder mystery is that simple. So, I'm waiting fro more to unfold. I for one do not buy that Arnav killed Lavanya even though he had faced the worst kind of betrayal where the wife and best friend cheat him of dignity.


But Arnav being Arnav would walk away with his head held high rather than give them the satisfaction of knowing that they matter to him when hedidn't matter to them.


Waiting, waiting, waiting,impatiently jen😃


BTW,


Lovely Banners Jen...

Wow Sandy, you are thinking like Hercule Poirot and James Bond rolled into one!! I'm impressed and I guess I'll need to think harder with readers like you!!

😃 😆

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deepthi laxmi

@deelax18

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

OHOOO...ACP is gonna think Arnav may be the stalking guy...but how can he know that he was stalking his heart!!!...

nice update...waiting for nxt chap

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Jay

@Sharaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

Hi Jen...

Intoxication is truly intoxicating us...

This Arnav is so hot... He is having diff but smoky aura makes us hazy...

Khushi, she is no more bubbly, lively...

She seems to hav some scarred past jus lyk Arnav...

I love their all encounters... Single rose & moolite...Aww...

Who the hell is in Khushi's past...

I super love Stalking Major Raizada...

Cant wait for next update Jen...

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#497

this ff is just leaving me intrigued aftr every update. arnav's persona is a whole new mystery aftr all. somehow i dont think arnav has murdered either lavanya or is the new jack the ripper. why does he get contemptuous whenevr he sees khushi's photo? why he hates her? also the jack the ripper thing has stirred n brought a distant memory in me, when i first got to learn abt him wen i was a kid. his story is really intriguing. i'm guessing something here. just as jack the ripper was in fact the queen's physician cum psycho killer, is arnav also suffering from some kind of a split personality disorder? i really hope this doesnt turn out true..😲

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namita11

@namita11

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#498

Great update...
I hope arnav doesn't have limp. Why is he following her?? Itz like he has an ulterior motive

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#499

It was saddening as well as mysterious. Saddening at the prospect of Arnav lying to her. Coz clearly Khushi feels something for him. Coz of those comtemptuous eyes.
And the mysterious aura was awesomely written. You rock Jen! The narration keeps me hooked like nothing else.

My heart had been beating wildly at those last lines. Its implying that Arnav had been following her, scared her and then came to save.
Il hold onto the fact that there is more than meets the eye.