Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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leena

@aleena.1884

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#521

sooo finally she's gonna give in to what her heart says. but but but dude, he's lying...🥺
but just a guess again... maybe he's using her just as a bait to reach the actual killer that's y he's lying to her... maybe...🤔

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#522

Like the title a lot ...
It's a supar exciting and suspending as Khushi's thought are saying that she will do something unexpected... Waiting for the Update!!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#523

she is getting sucked in this intoxication
guess she will give in
or will she
only time shall tell

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#524

interesting teaser

so will khushi, let her feeling live!?

cant wait to read :)

update soon

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ragaya

@ragaya

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#525

very intriguing mystery story! please continue soon :)

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Deepthi

@Beauceant

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Interesting story. I'd read some other stories of yours, impenetrable heart and bride with the doll. This one seems very different, more like its happening in a western world setting.. And much bolder characters..

Frankly, the arnav in this kind of spookes me a bit.. But i guess that was intentional right.. And khushi has demons of her own.. Total M&B mixed with crime drama effect.. Liking it..

The different kind of happy ending worries me though.. Waiting for the story to unfold..

Edited by Msfrootie - 11 years ago

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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#527

Thursday Evening I am waiting for you...

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penrith

@penrith

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#528

after reading all 3 chapters in one ago. I see the story is very capturing. It is only after reading the teaser that I actually paid attension to the author. Till now I hadn't look at the profile name but as soon as I saw Jenny. Then I told myself, of course its a capturing story, its by Jenny.So Jenny ... thanks for such an exciting new suspense thriller.. looking forward to more

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bkamber

@bkamber

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#529

Euphoric teaser. 😊
Waiting for tomorrow.

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#530

superb n fantastic update..scary night was this..coz kushi walking in a lonely street at nyt n somebody following her n arnav caught her..telling or warning indirectly abt her nature of job..and however he was trying to seduce n charm her he cudnt win her so easily..i lykd kushi's thoughts n flat refusal..arnav was having some plan to strike..omg my guess was seeming to be ryt i suppose..he wud stoop so low,flirt n sleep with hookers..i hope he wud see her in different light..but was he the one following her?and why was he having her picture?and police wud soon get the info that arnav was stalking kushi..whatelse..such a suspense thriller..waiting eagerly for the next update..