Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1. - Page 2

Very interesting... Loved it. Please do continue...

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Jen! 🤗 This is brilliant. Too bad for us that it will be a short journey but knowing you as a writer, it wont be a surprise when you 'd give us an awesome tale spanning a lifetime in these 3 chapters and the effect on us would be as good as ever!

Major Raizada is such that even if you wouldnt exchange words with him, you cant help but be affected by him. His limp seems to be some result of being in a war. There are too many questions. The first being his instant fancy which he seems to have developed for Khushi. I wanted to hit him for manhandling her. Dont know what he meant by asking him nicely to leave her.
And the very next instant my heart saddened for him as a glimpse of his past was known.
And obviously I wont believe that he did that. Lets wait.

I loved Khushi..Strong. Who is this he she is thinking of? I already dont like him from whatever Khushi was thinking.
Great one Jen!

This story reminds me of the (in)famous Nanavati case of the 1960s? No, I wasn't around then 😊 but this was a sensational court case that was widely reported...

Loved it...also curious as well

Awesome plot as usual👏

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wow Jenn...its superb...exams yaar!!!nxt one..a full fldgd long cmnt..