Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1. - Page 18

Military arnav??...oohhh...love it!!!...can u cont pls???...

When are you updating this one?
Waiting. . :-)

Arnav intoxicated with Kushi seeing her first performance already!!

Jenny ... I am intoxicated... So beautifully written and I really dint expect that kiss there... But that felt correct there... I should not be feeling it correct as it was an act that displayed outright male power but when the man in talk is ASR and the way you had written it made me see things beyond mere male power... He was clearly not like the other men who are regulars at such places.. He stood out and you brought it out well... He has a past and that does justify his state of living now... N Khushi clearly is into it to make a living... N I am waiting to read further...

Was the note stating this is going to be strictly a three-shot kind of self assurance??? I know you have been planning a break for sometime now, but that is not fair to convert an FF idea into a TS... I am sad I was hoping this to be a full fledged fiction when you wrote the prologue and now should I be content with what I get??? This story has the potential to be more than a TS and I understand when you decide not... Awaiting next :)

Wow..

how could you not continue it , it was very good

wow very different and intresting story

Can't wait for the next part ! :D