Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1. - Page 16

interesting...very!

Jenny,

That was brilliant. This story is another feather in your cap. This is so different from what I read by you, a different genre and even the writing style is different. It just says so much about your versatility and the wide reach of your intellect.

I like this dark ex Major Raizada probably with very dark memories, pushy, arrogant and aggressive. Even Khushi's characterization is so different, a bar dancer. Now, it's clear she is doing it for some grave reason. I am curious to know who is that asked her to be back by 11:30?

And he kissed her already. As much as Khushi pushed him away she seems to be occupied by thoughts of Major Raizada. I am sure he will be back again, he is definitely drawn to her. I am really thrilled to see how their paths will cross or merge and take them on a journey.

Very well written, Jenny. And I want to commend you for giving us such wonderful stories in parallel and not letting us feel the emptiness of a concluding story. Thank you so much.

Interesting concept! Very different!

Yes definitely continue. It's a shame that it's only a three shot but I'm not going to complain!

Interesting! Looking forward to the next part...

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This is so interesting! A new story from you! Please continue...

Oh ho...arnav has a past n a very terrible one...

very interesting cht soo khushi is bar danceer n asr is ex major who kill his wife n best frnd for cheating him cant wait to read more

part 1
nice...
whoa poor Arnav...
cont soon dear...

Hey..