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Posted: 12 years ago
So d chappy started giving some hints to misunderstandings which r deffo going to happen in near future..!

i nevee thought of arnav being so much against having kids,infct wen in d truth nd dare game he said like not having kids i thought dat he said dat coz he was unsure abt khushi's feelings for him but now its clear dat he was serious dat day but d reason he gave for not having kids is lame nd me sure just like akash dat he is hiding sumthng nd there is really a serious reason for him thinking like dis..!

There akash was trying to make him undrstnd d matter nd to make d matter wrose khushi listened his words nd dat too nly a half of it nd she also suppoted him making arnav nd akash go all confused but arnav got happy seeing khushi also thinking in d same way as his but alas its d other way as khushi already listened half of it nd its also clear dat misundrstndings r going to occur soon but i loved it how akash thought of talking to them aftr his marriage..!

Their frndship is really strong nd i alwaz loved to see their bond nd them alwaz thinking abt each other's good..!

Nd den d scene between dat little kid,arnav nd khushi was hilarious..!

Arnav is all getting jelous of dat little boy,oh gosh nly he can b like dis nd d way dat little kid complained to arnav abt not getting close to khushi as he will marry her was cute nd arnav's reaction to dat,oh goddd i was simply laughing like a maniac..!

Nd den finally d little boy revealing why khushi wants to leave her hubby nd marry him made arnav all go amused nd he thought of playing along making khushi go all red in anger as she could see d tables turning against he in seconds nd dat little kid cancelling d marriage wit her 😆

trust Mr.Raizada to mischievously turn d tables making khushi blush nd get angry at d same tym..!

Nd den the way he just repeated those word told by dat little boy nd bite khushi on her neck,ahem passion personified but dat sweet gesture do make khushi all angry nd also hiss in pain nd arnav could not help but smile in amusemnt seeing his beautiful wife all going angry nd avoiding him..!

Though he tried to woo her back nd again tease her she was too much angry to forgive him nd undrstnding this arnav just leaft her but dat did make khushi all d more angry..! 😆

nd den d dance nd yet again arnav getting jelous nd possessive abt khushi seeing her dance wit dat kid,oh god dis Raizada is simply way too adorable..!

D dance steps described in d update wer beautiful nd i can very well imagine arnav's state seeing his beautiful wife all dancing gracefully nd looking way too sexy nd to make d matter worse she danced pointing at him making d whole public turning out their attention to him making him blush nd grin at d same tym..!

Nd den akash nd arnav planning to meet them nd akash's horrible plan abt arnav's tummy ache,oh goddd akash can nly cum out wit these horrible ideas 🤣

nd poor arnav he just got all stuck among d ladies but yet again akash's brilliant idea finally save him nd they could make their way to meet their respective partners 😆

i mean arnav having cancer,oh goddd can anyone say these types of lies nd i loved arnav's reaction knwing akash saying all these things to manage d old ladies 🤣

nd finally they met up nd arnav witout asting any minute took khushi to d bathroom nd seeing her dressed in such a beautiful saree he lost his evey rational thought nd started to kiss her madly nd wildly but khushi's anger was still there nd she forcefully pushed him away but wen he took his sweet tym to check her out,khushi could not feel but went all nervous under his heated gaze..!

Nd den his sweet torture which made khushi go all weak on her knees nd finally wen arnav actually confessed his wild desirs of him dying to make her as his in every way she could not hold back nd hugged him tightly nd arnav just hugged her back securing her in his arms nd den d way he just made her applied d cold cream on her neck to soothe her pain nd kissed dat place was beautiful..!

He again made me fall in love wit him,oh goddd how can he is dat much perfct ❤️

nd den d whole mehendi ceremony nd arnav calling khushi nd asking her to cum to him but knwing dat khushi has not yet completed applying her mehendi made him cahnge his words nd he asked her to cum to him nly wen her hands nd legs will b covered wit mehendi..!

Nd den she came late md ebtering d room she saw her handsome hubby sleeping on his tummy nd she could not helo but admire him nd d way arnav just played wit her making her thnk dat he was asleep nd finally d way she mistakenly kissed him,awww dat was beautiful..!

So he tore away khushi's blouse,oho naughty Raizada 😉

nd khushi crying over he blouse forgetting dat her pallu has already been down lying on d ground revealing her most precious assets nd her sweet crying made arnav also worried dat he also failed to notice abt khushi's pallu..! ☺️

ahem i cant wait for d next chappy now nd u knw why me saying like dis 😉

beautiful chappy

each nd evry word of d chappy is simply way too beautiful ❤️

loved it to bits ❤️
Edited by ara_000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very interestng update .
thnx fr pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
⭐️ congrats yaar 40 chapters ...the journey was,is and will be forsure beautiful...hats off deepu


Edited by lalarukh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb and romantic update
so khushi dance with monkey gang ..lolzz😆
nice song..& the way u write out their dance was awesome
aww arshi scene with kid...i really like this scene,,
akash and arnav scene was totally crazy and hilarious...🤣
loved arshi hot and sizzling romance..☺️
khushi saree was beautiful..nice choice..
really appriciate that u give us lengthy updates..👍🏼
and thanks alot for pm..
Edited by chandni00 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
for ur awesome ,superb,fabulous writing ...and for wt a lovely soul u r :)


Edited by lalarukh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awsum blossum updt..damn hilarious..beautifully written..loved every bit of updt...lovely:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update I always enjoy reading your updates :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update.
Khushi didnt hear fully what
arnav said about baby. Hope this
misunderstanding will clear
soon.
Akash plan ws Hillarious
amazing oh poor arnav
phas gya tha.
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was hilarious... great ASR in middle of the old ladies learning science of farting... I am still laughing... You are too good. I am new to this site and the first FF is of yours I read. Hats off to you... you are great writer no doubt... I am eagerly waiting for next part... till then take care.
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Posted: 12 years ago
glad he opened up to her and they shared his pain

it is getting more and more difficult to stay away from her

I feel they will be the ones using the white room

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