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Posted: 11 years ago
wow a great chapter. I was away may take time to comment.
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Originally posted by: Barun_Gf



Main agyi 🤗

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Part 1

Omggg did he really tell her dat wat he thinks abt his cousins monkey gang 🤣

Open complinent to raizada and wat did he doo retorted back wid sarcasm 😒

Seriously khushi should teach him some manners 😆 Like how she does wid payal baby

Did he just say no kids 😲 i mean how cn he decide alone

He lost many thng in lfe bt doesnt mean no kids planning in future also 😳

Akash found it weird bt y and den made d sanka devi entry widout listening spoke in favour of arnav 🤬

I so love dis naughty raizada and d way he flirts and do naughty thng wid khushi ☺️

D little monkey came to rescue to khushi oopss sorry er eloping partner [LoL]

Hayeee i soo loved d whole convo how d boy was saying all d word khushi said him and d way arnav gt teased was hilarious 🤣 🤣 damn u khushi was enjoying d whole scenario

Did she really said it dat she is nt happy wid her husband he is kanjoos 🤣

Lolll nw seriously i wasnt expectng dis he bites her ☺️

For d first tym in life arnav singh raizada was was jealous wid a kid dii is too much to rolf nw

Dii whole part was hilarious arnav uncle and khushi dii just like ipk lavanya aunty and khushi dii 😳

Parents wnt allow to elope lolll

Nt bad raizada nw its ur turn to strt nd tease badla looo 😛

Ice cream nai mili toh shadi cncl ommmggg i m laughing like a maniac nw 😆

Kanjoos ka pata nai par besharam shaitan and yess bites alot to her ☺️

Loved it ❤️

Part 2

Khushi was on dance floor wid d monkey gang who were trying to break dance lolll lolll

The way he gave her attention few hrs back wid his emotinal speech she did d same bt by dancing and giving every thumka to him

He was really somethng a piece damn he is jealous of kids

Seriously raizada 😆

bt i must say d kid was also nt less he was swaying khushi hips and den kissing khushi on her cheeks much to raizada anger and in no tym arnav came on dance floor for khushi


angry khushi nd arnav taking help of akash 😛

Omggg wat a freaky faltu plan of akash to wich arnav agreed nt much to his. safisfaction🤣

Lolll d plan backfired him buahhahahahah poor arnav akash ka plan mein kaisa phas gya

Tummy attack holy moly i m rofling nw badly

Cncr was his last try loll it worked nw arnav way is clr to pacify khushi 👍🏼

Part 3

Poor guys apne hi biwi aur hone wale biwi se mil sakte 😒

Y does arnav only leave khushi giving no other option den to accpet his choice 😡 so not done raizada

Arnav was shamelessly ogling on his wife infrnt of d lady 🤣 🤣

And akash line i m d bride owner omggg wat was dat dii 🤔 🤔

Dis tym poor khushi t

Lolll dis mens are soo ziddi bichari khushi was embarrased so much

Payal outfit was soo pretty di 👍🏼 hayyee it was lovely dii

Romance in bathroom ☺️ ☺️

and widout a chnce he strtd kissing her ufff dat was so tempting ❤️

Wat was dat i mean ommmggg dii how u do get such pretty dresses khushi dress was like a bridal wear for me loll it was damn perfect and d way it revealed her curve perfetly for dose hungry eyes was awesome 😈 😈

She was getting shy infrnt of him and to cover up her loll she showed her bare back to him

And u also have no idea dii how badly we r waiting for dere sr wanna see how and wat way arnav make dis night special memorable for both of dem

Urrrghhh dere moments again gt spoiled 👎🏼 how beautifully dey were enjoying moreover i was loving d effect khushi was having on his every touch ☺️


Ohh la la he came here for soothng d pain he gave her few hrs ago 😳

And khushi remembering d song lyrics was loling one 🤣

Hayyee i loved khushi bold statement of his sorry saying style ☺️

I hate dose ppl who do bitchng at d back and discuss dere private moments publically 🤬 and here poor arnav was facing all dis glad he made dem shut and went on frm dere

Soo many msges frm khushi 🤔 🤔

Soo someone was missing arnav in just few hrs only

I loved d part wen she was trying to talk to him in between d ladies and putting mehendi also ❤️

Arnav is jealous of khushi new bf aka monkey gang one of d monkeys 🤣 🤣

Guessing game loll never ends on one side

Arnav was irritated wid d men talks bt he didnt said it to khushi bt showed his irritation to her 😡

Teasing are we mr raizada 🤓 🤓

She was applying mehendi for him for his name and wen he called her she just strtd leaving putting mehendi 😛

Bt he heard it and i m happy he asked her to stay nd come wid full mehendi in her hands and feets also

Loll raizada was awake still pretending to slp u r such a tease raizada 😈

Awww mohabbat durr jaa ne de Iss ptaar ko kya nam doon D way u described d part were she was being emotional for staying away frm was soo sweet 😳
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She accidentally kissed him and den feeling emotional she again leaned to kiss back bt dis tym realized raizada was enjoying dis 😲

Hawww he tored her blouse and dat to her fav one 😲

Wat a devil u r dii u left us at such a crucial point 😡

I want an update dat to soonish 😎


sorry for d late unres dii 😳



I know I know I left it a crucial point...new chapter given...read for the continuation...Buahaaua
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Posted: 11 years ago
Payal preg.now wedding preparations.Arnav going abt his family.so emotional.arshi dance scenes wer good
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Posted: 11 years ago
Emotional, beautiful , very romantc, lovely 😊 .
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Posted: 11 years ago
O di..
I was planning to cmt aftr i finish this thread.. Bt
just aftr finishing chap. 38. I cant resist myself frm cmnging and pouring my emotions out.

I am crying like hell.. Evn i knw its fiction bt still i feel at loss for arnav.
Hw cruel it is that god takes away frm a prsn and evn deztiny let the person survive alone in this cruel world.
He became strong with his losses.. Bt can any how god ... Didnt evn fall a bit mercy .. As in real i hav seen such thing and seen a pprsn with no emotions left as all emotions of his went all along with his loved ones.

God was just good at tym wen he giftd her khushi.. Otherwise he would be a dead soul woth just sme meat wrapped around bones.

It was the mst senti part ... I am crging bitterly ..
U really created a immmebse scene to shw the deep grief formed inside arnav from last 8 yrs .. Which finally gt out .
Nw i hope he can start with a good turn and all chains of bitter past broken.. With just sweet memories.


In prevous threads i always frgt to mntion about the way u shown payash.. Commendable.
They are superb.. I mst say god was with arnav at sme place taht he was giftd with such wndrful frds.

Payash characters here i found totally outstanding.. Living life fully and still rooted with all .

They are just fantastic hw u mended their characters.
Hats off for that

last khushi no words .. She is a angel sply snd by god to take up all pain of arnav.
Arshi romance their understanding for each other .. Is just wat is just all expect in deir relation.
Its really a dream land i am in..

All full of love emotions passion possession ..


i evn frgt wat more i wish to say .. As its totally a treat to read evry line of this ff.
Just a superb dupeb blockbuster ff.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Comp. Thread 8.. And i am like 😛 😛

i am living in dream land since i startd reading this ff.
Its gtng me fall more and more evrytym for arshi.

No doubt we all love dem intensely passionately ..
Bt here i think aftr reading i think like i am feeling it all around as a reality flowing like a river in front of me.
Its only the magic which ur words created.

Hw arnav trying to complete her said and unsaid wishes.. Is really adoring me..

In reality i bet no men exist of this kind..
Bt still all expect to hav a man like arnav.

Hope one day he evn realise the need of childrens in deir life.
Coz.. Itd only the thing which is irking me about arnav .. Bt m sure hee too hav sme readon for that..
Bt i think khushi will gt out of him his fears and will hav a wndrful happy life ..

U jst rock dii...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 34 was sooo full on romantic, beautiful!!! All with milk, water ...ice cream totally hot n enjoyable!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 38 part 2::: can truly understand Arnavs anguish about his past... He let's it out for the first time... N its so unfair...y did they all have to go...really painful..But so glad khushis with him...wonderful update!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
The wedding its venue, the SR bed, the clothes... Everything is so beautiful n breathtaking... Loved the way khushi cold shouldered the event planner to get what she wants...time to thank her dear hubby for all that he did for her...the lines that she said to him...tujh mein rab dikh ta hai...so endearing...plus the dance ..awesome update!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loving it
Wedding and outfits all u described so well

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