ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 8 - COMPLETED - Page 38

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb,fabulous,fantastic..etc etc..all adjectves fr ur ff deepthiji...
Lovng it...more n mre...
U r jst a perfect writr...in all areas comedy,intense, nd romance ke toh guru ho...:)

lovd each nd evry bit of the update...
Fr ur Q i thnk he wil leave to get her...:)
thanx fr the pm...
Wil be waitng fr the next...

P.s...nishuji ke toh wah wah hai w-day tak...;) wit deepthiji's dedictns...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav and Khushi missing each other
Their longing for each other tells the depth of their love for each other
Wow now Khushi has equal right in company
Arnav is really very thought full ... loved it
Khushi made Arnav's sketch without looking him
Wish that Arnav should have been seen that sketch made by Khushi

Loved their phone convo...his virtual kiss ...their lunch and their office talk... everything was really awesome
Want to know Arnav's password i'm sure you had hide very something interesting in his password

Loved the way she dismissed his meeting with client
The way Arnav deal with his client not bothering about that loosing deal was amazing
Poor Aman hes to face his worth
And Khushi also get scared to see his this side
He has really very good rules for his works that's why he become successful in such a short time

Loved the way his anger melt to see his wife's cuteness
Loved their encounter in office that was really very beautifully written
And after that "Don't eat anything spice for two days" and Khushi's "I will only eat spice in two days" was really sweet
they love each other too much

Love the way she pleaded to be with him it was really emotional
He actually dropped her to his parents house forgetting his ego
Her hugging him and breaking down and his making her understand ...was very beautiful and heart touching
His realization that he may survived without his parents but he won't without her

Arnav's love bites really embarrassed Khushi .
On top of it her father very well knew what happened to her daughter
But Arnav didn't seems to embarrassed he told that "it proves that our love life is rocking" Loved the teasing Arnav
But one thing is sure that Khushi not want a decent romance

I guess Arnav have to listen first since he wants to know how was her lie before him
Then he will immediately go to pick her up and do more things to feel her special and convey his unconditional love
Waiting for next update very corious to know about farm house and plum tree
Plz continue it soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update..aww both were missing each so badly..
both were trying not to think of each other.. 😊
khushi drawing his sketch n it coming out to b perfect was soo good..
the way arnav felt disturbed wen khushi ws crying..their phonr conversation was soo good..
the msg wala kiss idea was soo romantic..their lunch together.. 😳
arnav telling khushi abt his email n his complicated password 😆 ..i think that fabric was fr khushis outfit..
take good care of my precious wife.i really miss her..
again soo romantic..loved the line 😉
khushi stuck in meeting n trying to convince those ppl..arnav entering n telling them to gt out..
i want ur ass in my cabin..lol..i was like aman tu toh ab gaya.. 😆
khushi getting angry that arnav didnt even hug her after aman left n their kiss after that was soo good..
i m loving their need fr eachother..arnav being a little rough n being sorry fr it..
i m jst loving ur arnav..drooling over him.. 😉
their dinner n dont eat spicy fr two days..the way arnav took away hrr burning of lips with kisses..was soo adorable..
khushi not wanting to leave arnav..arnav explaining her..both getting emotional..both of them care fr each other soo much..
😊 ..arnav again getting naughty..the love bites..khushi going to her parents house..
the chocolate n note was soo sweet..garima asking khushi 100 questions..shashi relaxing her..
n den the love bites..i was like rofl..shashi dragging garima out of room ..leaving khushi embarraced..was lol..
their 4am talk was soo cute..bolo kya baat karni hai meri wife ko..i was like hayee.. 😳
this is jst going amazing..i m loving their rocking romantic life. 😉
i m saying it again bt i m loving every bit of it..
n a request dnt end it soon.:D
eagerly waiting fr ur surprises..i m also loving the deadline arnav give s n khushing getting irritated..the farmhouse story n their childhood secrets..wanting to knw all..i hope arnav find outs whts hurting khushi abt her past..:D
Edited by littlemissstar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it
loneliness kya hota hai koi mujse poochae,
they are indeed made for each other
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nw tht u hv disappeared I'll thnk of only Spicy food 4 d nxt 2 days... 😉

Agar Spicy food ka result ye hai to I'm ready 2 hv Spicy food all my lyf... 😆 ☺️ (D soothing part)

Hayeee... Im ready 2 have dis Shaitaan... Koi mujhe de do isse... ☺️

Following ur 2 days ka rule... I'll dream abt Shaitaan n hv spicy food 4 d nxt 2 days... 😛

Emotional intense update sun k hi I'm sweating... I dnt knw hw I'll cope up... 😕

Enjoy ur weekend n wil wait 4 d updates wid bated breath... 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful chappy..!

i am loving it how u r showing d progress in their rltnship slowly..!

This is d first tym where arnav nd khushi actually worked seperately nd needless to say they missed each other like hell..!

Loved it how khushi was staring at his cabin nd was imagining him nd witout even knwing it she ended up drawing a sketch of him witout even seeing him which actually made her stunned coz while in a rltnship wit NK she tried to draw him but failed miserably..!

Den her realisation abt it nd also getting sure dat she nd arnav r alwaz meant to b together brought tears in her eyes as yet again she felt how much she is in love wit her man..!

Den their phn call nd d convo nd her occassional blushing nd arnav undrstnding dat she is also missing him as much as he misses her was beautifully written..!

Them having lunch together by remaining in touch through phn was heart touching..!

Nd finally d way arnav shouted at Mr.LEE for troubling khushi nd trying to get over d rules of AR was perfct..!

I mean i was imagining d whole scene where he was shouting nd damn he is way too hot wen he was shouting sujpporting his khushi claiming her as his wife nd she knws perfectly wat r d rules nd regulations..!

Aman,i pity him but truth is he is truly d best employee one can ever get nd he knws his boss way too well to leave him for shouting..!

Khushi's sweet anger nd arnav's trying to melt her gussa was cute..!

Nd d way he kissed her hard on her lips nd wit his evry touch she was melting but to prove her anger she was not at all responding to d kiss but one touch of arnav on her belly nd on d hook of her blouse she melted nd hugged him tightly pleading him not to do anythng in the office nd i loved arnav's reply to her pleading..!

Nd den wen he saw her cut on her lips he actually said her sorry nd restricted her from eating up spicy food but her xcitement to eat street food made him allow her to eat pawbhaji which actually made her hiss in pain for d cut but trust her hubby to soothe her pain nd its all gone wit his kisses..!

Loved it how he kissed her on her lips witout carimg abt d public around nd d way he asked her not to eat any spicy food nd her rplh wit a naughtiness in her eyes saying dat she will eat nly spicy food for two days was simply adorable..!

Nd finally wen he broke d news of him getting back to d factory nd khushi breaking down into tears pleading him to take her wit him was simply beautiful..!

But arnav seeing her all tried nd pale in weakness made her agree dat she should stay at payal's place nd sleep well as she needed a good sleep to stay healthy nd d way he promised her dat dis is d only night where he is keeping her away from him was awsum..!

Their love is sumthng which is beautiful nd eternal..!

Its pure nd its like while reading d story i can feel d depth of their love nd trust me its one hell beautiful feeling..!

I loved it how khushi said how much she has missed him d whole day nd finally ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA could feel dat he is complete nd he has sumone in his life who waits for him nd who cares for him nd den his tears nd kissing khushi back nd saying dat she is d best thng in his life,awww dat momnt was beautiful nd emotional..!

Loved it how khushi asked her to drop her at her parents' house but wen he was insisting her to drop at payal's place she undrstd abt his ego stopping him from going there nd she yet again argued wit him which yet again went unheard by him..! 😆

nd den wen he stopped d car nd khushi got down nd started to walk away witout even realising where she is nd arnav's silent pleading to her not to go away like dat nd she listening to his plea did turn up nd came running to him crashing herslf in his arms nd sobbing trying to convey how much she will miss him..!

Nd den seeing her crying like dat tore his heart into millions of pieces nd den his tears finally made its way nd dat momnt was beautiful..!

Loved it how he kissed her nd gave her love bites on either side of her neck as if dat mark will make her remember abt him throughout d night,awww dat was cute..!

Wat i love most was shashi witnessing d whole scene nd he could not feel more happy nd content seeing his daughter's life back on track..!

Wat more can a father want..! 😊

nd den her going into d house nd him sending d cadbury nd paper chit nd her kissing d note nd her tears made its way saying how much she is missing him was beautiful..!

Nd den her whole convo wit her family nd shashi asking her whether she is missing or not nd her saying YES to it was adorable..!

I have alwaz loved d bond shared by shashi nd khushi..!

Garima's panic seeing khushi's neck nd her getting embarassed nd den shashi cuming to save his daughter making his wife undrstmd abt rocking romqnce was simply perfct 😉

nd den finally d phn convo between khushi nd arnav nd their discussion aby their romantic life,awww its simply way too awsum..!

Want to knw more abt their past nd ofcrs abt d guest house..!

Beautiful chappy

loved it totally ❤️

cant wait for d nxt chappy now 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
love your chapter 35 part 1 and 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely superb full of emotions update...!!!!!!!!
arnav and kushi missing each other.. he is not able to concentrate on his work and she is drawing his sketches without even seeing him..!!!!!! is arnav get to see those sketches..?????
he sensed something is wrong and call her immediately and know she is crying..!!!!!!! thery know each other so well...😊 😊
loced arnav in ASR mode when he see clients not understanding her point of view..!!!!!
poor aman has to suffer...!! loved their lovey dovey moments..!!!!!!
they have their dinner at roadside stalls..!!!!!
both don't want to stay away from each other but still had to for one night..!!!!!
loved that part..!!!!! simply superb..!!!!!!!!
their late night calls are too awesome..!!!!!!! he realized she has not spend much time with her parents in childhood..!!!!! pls continue soon..!!!!
pls patch up arnav and khushi's parents soon..!!!!!!! can't wait for it..!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav and Khushi are adorable together... It seems like all the love that they could have shared while growing up and the missed out on, they are making up for it now...😊 I just hope nothing goes wrong from here on...!
The part with the love bites was hilarious...😆 I kinda felt bad for Khushi being stuck in such an awkward situation but then again like she said I doubt she would have it any other way...

Fabulous update😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
my unres...94179414

dii loking forwork to precape...come soon,...
waiting for u...

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