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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya


hn???????

u all are dreaming alot of their ahem than themselves and me the writer...dream dream, nothing wrong in dreaming😆

all thanks to u for giving us beautiful dream to dream abt :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh

i am just hoping u ll going to add beautiful dress pics for payal and khushi designed by arnav...:)...u planning ?


Oh absolutely...thats in the plan...OMG I have so much to write..I am planning to give their SR before Nishu wedding

When is the date exactly? I forgot, my mind is constantly in Arshi land and I dont remember anything these days.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya


Oh absolutely...thats in the plan...OMG I have so much to write..I am planning to give their SR before Nishu wedding

When is the date exactly? I forgot, my mind is constantly in Arshi land and I dont remember anything these days.


lol ...see this is wt i told u ...in dream land ...with arshi these days :)...

her wed is on 26th ...few days left ...pls do write kahin aysa na ho nishu oun ko kahay k wait abhi deeps told me how to eat icecream ...yahin tak i learnt...😆...awe missing teasing her here on the thread...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh


lol ...see this is wt i told u ...in dream land ...with arshi these days :)...

her wed is on 26th ...few days left ...pls do write kahin aysa na ho nishu oun ko kahay k wait abhi deeps told me how to eat icecream ...yahin tak i learnt...😆...awe missing teasing her here on the thread...:)


LOL we r nuts...u r portraying as if I am doing some teaching lessons on romance
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya


LOL we r nuts...u r portraying as if I am doing some teaching lessons on romance


hahaha...ya ur ideas r very very unique and innovative...i am dying to see moreee ...:)😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh


hahaha...ya ur ideas r very very unique and innovative...i am dying to see moreee ...:)😉


I hope I meet upto the expectations...chalooo I will leave..time to cook for weekend😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
haha careful in the kitchen ...already told u not to think arnav and khushi there...lol...take care sweety,love u loads,byee
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh

haha careful in the kitchen ...already told u not to think arnav and khushi there...lol...take care sweety,love u loads,byee


LOL I sure will..Bye bye
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 24

Arnav pulling Khushi out of the delicate state & his way coming in handy thereby making Khushi back to her old feisty self but then the new feeling confusing her mind & she angrily blurting out her frustration & she sad that Arnav wasn't able to decode the hidden meaning behind her words was a well written


Arnav's mind swirling in confusion & he unable to decipher what's happening to him was a beautiful scene. The fight at the table where Arnav tries to make it picture clear to her that he isn't the sweet old Arnie but she confidently speaking up that he is still the same & had definite hopes that he will change spoke volumes of Khushi's keen shrewd mind that assimilated his actions & that put two & two together & helped her witness the change that is happening within Arnav 👏


At first he angrily disagreeing to have the food but he leaving aside all his rage on learning that she's have a headache & he worried for her & obediently eating the food from her hands proves that he is still a little kid who longs for love & care. He on being asked about his visit to the hospital he diverting the talk & ordering fruits for her; he lying to her about having food as he was elated by her reason for her fast & his unknowing touch on her belly awakening a weird but a lovely sensation within her was amazingly laid down 😃


Arnav's proximity & his husky voice creating a lovely feeling within Khushi & she lost in it oblivious to his constant queries, he happy at his effect on her & her words attracting him while he also enjoying her flustered face & she on being caught while drooling over his lips she scurrying away from his hold was an marvelous scene 😳


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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 25

Part 1

Khushi assuring Kaka that things would become fine & she surprised & overwhelmed to know the quantum of love that Arnav has for his parents & she also elated to be with him threw light on how she is able to read Arnav's actions


Khushi expectantly & nervously wanting to hear from Payal regarding whether Arnav turned up to the hospital the other day & her heart jumping in joy on learning about Arnav's state & care for her made me feel extremely happy for Khushi ... Deeps this part was marvelous buddy 😃


Khushi following even the dishes prepared by Arnav's mom & not wanting to alter it sounds great & her efforts to prepare the sweet is highly appreciative. Arnav will be deeply happy to know that she follows his moms foot steps

This land phone is so heavy, usski Owner ki brain ki tarah. 😃


Arnav feeling good at the way she addresses him in front of people & then his close advances creating havoc in her senses ... hmmm ... who can withstand Hottie's charm 😉

Part 2

Enoyed Arnav's teasing game when he witnessed Khushi being affected by his closeness

I was just thinking of introducing 3D floral prints on the LIPS

Buddy that was cool & superb 😃 😉


Arnav's hearty laugh drawing happiness in Khushi's heart & her sudden hug surprising him making him feel good & he too pulling her close to him was a warm scene. Khushi's doubts regarding the noise & her antics like a child to discover the source of noise embarrassing Arnav & their convo taking a whole new turn when she tricked him to unveil the truth that he fasted for her & her heart contented at it was beautifully portrayed 😊


Part 3

I am sure by the time you started your work, it would be Noon and that would be the time for lunch.

Loved his teasing & Khushi is innocent to not follow it 😃


OMG!!! Khushi really cracked me up with her weird idea of adult diapers 🤣 😆 😆 😆 🤣 Man the astonished look that adorned Arnav's face & he blurting out what crap was a sight to watch. Deeps I enjoyed their convo associated with the diapers ... Khushi's too over dramatic but at the same time cute ... thanks dear for it 😃


Arshi slowly starting to be causal around each other, he happily teaching her his unique signature, Khushi at first excited on learning it but his closeness affecting her; then their talks from their college friends ending up in her doubt as to why he never checked her mails; he not wanting to disappoint her with his honest reply but his reply earning him playful blows from his feisty wife was awesomely narrated


Arnav carrying a slight hope in his heart to see her hands adorned with his initials though he knew it would be otherwise. But on seeing NK's initials he masking his pain & his way of looking at the mehendi & complimenting her was brilliant 👍🏼 ... Arnav wiping of the portions that he doesn't like & taking things positively is so admirable


Part 4

He eagerly waiting for a small hint from her side & his heart beating erratically with zeal at the thought of she accepting him narrated the amount of expectancy he had to be loved by her. Khushi wanting an acknowledgement from his end & she in her chaotic state with the new feeling for him telling out her frustration aloud absent mindedly on knowing that he isn't budging to compliment her while Arnav ignoring it was mind blowing ... both hearts wanting the same but their hesitancy of expressing it & waiting for the other person to come out with it was parallely laid down in a unique & astounding manner


Khushi's soul touching song enthralling his entire soul, mind & body & his feet scuttling to her & he gathering all his courage to perform the aarthi but midway the memories of his family clouding his mind & when he was unable to do it further Khushi holding on to him & performing the rest of the pooja on his behalf was an impeccably framed buddy ... loved the whole of it 👍🏼 ❤️❤️❤️


Khushi's touch relaxing Arnav's perturbed state & to ease up things Kaka's narration of little Arshi's deal was lovely😃 Arnav's manner of following the tradition which they did back then when were kids surprising her as well as bringing a crimson colour to her face was awesome ☺️

Chapter 26

Khushi overwhelmed with his peck & blushing profusely on reminiscing Arnav's words & Arnav happy on knowing that Khushi & he did share a beautiful bond when they were young & he dosing off into a peaceful slumber while holding her mehendi picture were beautiful scenes. Waiting for Garima to narrate some beautiful childhood memories of Arshi like the laddoo incident ... Deeps please give us some more of such lovely memories 😊


Khushi attempting to divert Arnav's mind from the childhood tradition that they followed by our smart pants on finding it teasing her but she unaware & innocent to not decode it; Arnav taking the opportunity & showering her with his kisses making her blush all the more was a cute scene 😃 ... lovely tradition ... Hey Deeps, does Arshi have many more of these traditions??? Would love to know 😉


On learning that Khushi was reluctant to stay alone in the house Arnav teasing her in order to get her over her fear was excellent. Khushi wanting a small hint from his end that there was more than friendship to their relation showed her heart was slowing & deeply falling in love with her Arnav

Arshi's fight over the phone was kind off cute


Thanks for the PMs 😊

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