Originally posted by: bhoomigowda
Opening of the update was theatrical. Khushi's pain, her grief,were painted beautifully and I could imagine her lying on the bed & crying to her heart content. But I loved her ethos, instead of sitting & crying over the split milk unlike others, she picked up herself and I am really glad that she boosted herself by reminding it wasn't time for self pity. I loved the way you have put up her emotions, referencing it to a storm, going round & round, consuming anything & everything during its course of action.Its never easy to hide things from your best buddies, specially if they are too close too your heart and I can definitely empathy khushi's state of mind. Poor soul, neither she is in a state to share her pain nor she can get away with it and I just wish payal was with her at the moment. Did I ever tell you how much I love your shadow, he is too good for his own. It was really heart warming to see shadow memorizing khushi's scent so that he could hold on to it and however have said that dogs are more loyal than human beings, couldn't have been more correct. Anya going on & on about her future plans took me back to my own school days, we used to end up talking & planning our future for hours just few months before our departure from boarding school and me & my friends never ended up in same college as planned. So I would advice anya to not jump into conclusions but again anything can happen depending on my author's take 😉😉 I have always loved the way you portray a person's emotions and arnav's was no exception. Arnav's & khushi's relationship is no different from the previous night's thunderstorm and in reality there was a hope but am not very sure if the same is applicable to arnav, if there is some hope left to do rectify his wrong doings. I truly hate it when "male pride" dominates everything, making no sense & pushing the person to think irrationally and our hero definitely belongs to that category, pushing himself too hard just because he was loosing control over a girl. I believe no punishment is greater than self- realization, albeit arnav did realize his mistake I hope he does something to rectify it before its too late. It was really very sweet of nani to gift her a beautiful pearl set and loving someone whole heartedly is something which runs in whole raizada clan. No matter what at the end you always make me fall in love with your arnav not because his sexiness but for the person he his. Your characterization of both arnav & khushi, is commendable, especially arnav's character has so many layers to it and you never fail to impress me. When I thought it will be too long before they actually meet with arnav apologizing her, you made it happen in the very same update and I am truly glad that he took the initiative of peace making, again there khushi was super impressive. Khushi can never get over his grief because even in that despair state all she could think was helping him over come his constant companion, his pain. His parting words to her to stay away from guys like him, blew me off completely. Thanks for such a wonderful, intense & a lengthy update. Fingers crossed for the next one.
Wishing you and your family a very happy and safe Diwali, sandhya.