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Originally posted by: Nandz

Sorry for the late unres!

Kahan se shuru karun!!

My heart truly went out to khushi! So much crying khushi?? One could actually feel the extent to which she was hurt. I really felt extremely sad.

Loved how shadow was hovering over her, sitting on her lap. I have seen whether its animals or little kids, they have this sixth sense, they somehow know when u r going to leave and they shower their love best on that day.

M also happy that anjali came and apologised to him, n somehow m feeling so angry with her because she was the one to trigger all this.

N i love u sandhya for two things. First for making khushi travel by first class and not general. And second for making arnav apologise to khushi. Atleast he realised his mistake and came to apologise to her. Or may be he couldnt have let her go without meeting her once. No matter how arrogant he may may but he has his heart at the right place!

The whole compartment scene, arnav's apology, khushi's heartbreak, her turmoil, his regret, their painand finally their separation , it deeply affected me.so much they wanted to say and couldnt. I had a lump formed in my throat by the end of it. I mean i could feel each n every emotion that they were going through and literally could feel khushi's tears prick at the back of my eyes.

This one last poignant scene was just too good. Today i wish i was as good with words or good at expressing my feelings so that i could have properly penned down what i felt.

When their fingers were withdrawing and when they said goodbye, i dont know i was like pls dont go like this. So much pain was there.

I dont know what was i expecting from this chapter but definitely wasnt expecting to get affected to this extent. N trust me its a rarity for me. U r too good with emotions ya!!

So now ek addhayy khatam ho gaya of their love story! Waiting for the second part of their journey to begin!!

Thanks for the chapter!!

Happy diwali!

Originally posted by: kclovearshi

Res 😭 (the tears for are for missing out on your res 😊)

Another on the top, beautiful but sad update!! As I was reading the update huddled under my blanket at 6:30 in the morning, it can be nothing but a coincidence for incessant rains drenching everything outside with not even a single ray of sunlight!! The grey skies and the update left me melancholic throughout my workday!! Not blaming you of course, it's just my way of telling you the effect your writing is having on me and a testament of your authoriy over emotional updates..!! :)

Back to update, I'm just so glad to read both Khushi and Arnav's point of view over the happenings.! And that you were unbiased. Couldn't help but feel sad and connect with Khushi when she recalled, cried, cursed herself over the previous day's events. But I was awed when reading Arnav's thoughts. You simply absolved Arnav of his wrongdoing with one simple revealaion, "He wanted to hold on to her and never let her go. That scared him. He had to leave." This is the reason why he pushed her and left isn't it.! Now atleast he earns some sympathies? :) He is an emotional wreck (*sighs*) and yes the most f**ked up guy in SKD.!

Good byes are hardest, I admit takes the fun of vacationing/visiting family & friends.!!

I had a fleeting feeling he might come to say a personal apology and a good bye. The Raizada boy is not that bad isn't it :) It brought on a mushy feeling and a closure atleast a semi one at that to both of them. There were two more important sentences that revealed a lot about them; "Why is it impossible?" and "You don't want to know."

That is it, he is gone and just like that dawn is over..!!

Wish you and your family a very joyous & prosperous Diwali Sandhya!! 🤗

Cheers

K

Originally posted by: aarrsshhii

how are u doing this with every chapter...leaving me spellbound... the pain and hurt ws too much to take... both of them were dying inside with their desperation... i am feeling so much heavy hearted now... ;(
his apology was heartfelt and her stance was understandable but this separation is tearing everyone apart... u really gave me tears dear...

the way u r surpassing urself with each chapter i ws gonna req u to update more thn once a week mayb...alas...11th november? sigh!!!
well... happy celebrations ahead :)

Originally posted by: dreamymaya

An emotional chapter, but necessary one. As you mentioned its the closing bit of a phase. An end of a part, transition follows and lot of changes happen. You can't be the same after going through an experience. It was truly a heartbreaking farewell the Raizada family gave Khushi, especially Nani, mami, Akash, Shadow and Anya. I did expect a small dialogue from Anjali too. But I guess she was more distraught by her brother's decision and more pressing matters regarding his future.

However, it was the coupe scene between Arnav and Khushi which touched me..He came, I thought he was going to run away but no he came and finished whatever he started. He didn't give her illusions but frankly presented that there is no future and doesnt want to drag her into his darkness...and she is not yet ready even if she wants too, to take a plunge into his darkness. I loved his parting shot - Don't change and to stay away from guys like him...aha! There is an melancholy in me which your story left, which I can't explain. May be because I am also a masochist like Khushi...

Some of my favorite lines ----"The thought hit her like a tornado, ran through her like a typhoon and spat out a crushed version of her just as a twister would".---- beautiful phrasing and wonderful way to explain the extend of pain and misery caused.

"She curled into ball as if holding herself together physically would ensure her emotional stability. She was not ready to fall to pieces".---- a natural gesture which we do when our heart breaks into pieces and we are not ready to fall apart..but will be breaking apart.

"It is impossible to glue something broken without cracks, however indiscernible they may be." ---words of wisdom..nothing will be same again..the castle of illusions won't be same again..and you will be destroyed to a great extend which takes away your courage to built even a hut of illusion again..

"The battle between the heart and mind is rather common and constant too. The pragmatic lot may succeed in accepting the path chalked out by the mind but the emotional ones invariably give in to the heart's desires."---again, I am touched by this line of truth...yes, the emotional ones invariably give into their heart's desires, its a constant battle to keep the heart in check and not become a fool again..yet, sometimes you behave like a drug addict wanting to cave in once more just for one puff of smoke..but it would only break you again...better is to listen to the mind..

Originally posted by: ramyarn

This must be the most memorable vacation for Khushi. She had few remarkable moments with her first crush, both good and bad. I guess if Arnav took some initiative in continuing the relationship, then Khushi would have grabbed that opportunity.

The thoughts of Khushi , the farewell part at the Raizada mansion and the dilemma of Arnav are narrated so beautifully. However, I don't have words to express how splendid the last part was.

The way he apologizes , Khushi's reaction to his unexpected arrival, and finally, their parting words , mind blowing.

The title of this story , Is it about the relation of Arnav Khushi ? I am just curious to know . However, I am eager to know how and when will they meet again .

Originally posted by: Kishmish

Yuho ... Pre Diwali gift ... 🤗

HAPPY DIWALI

Am so heart broken seeing Khushi so sad ... just hate farewells ...

Shadow sensed that someone was leaving when he saw the suitcase

coming down ... these darling pets are so perceptive they can sense

any kind of change ... loved the way he got into her suitcase as though

ready to go along with her ... so hungry for love ...

The whole Raizada clan gave Khushi a very loving and tearful farewell but

Arnav's absence was so conspicuous ... 😲 he tried his best to stay away

from Khushi but ...

"What the heart loves, the will chooses and the mind justifies."

However much he tried staying away from her he landed right there at

the station to bid adieu to the damsel who has stolen his heart with a

slab of Cadbury's Chocolate to ask for forgiveness for behaving like a

complete boor with her ... 😆

Just loved the way Khushi handled herself with dignity and self respect ...

I am just wondering ... will he follow her to Lucknow 😲 ...

but that only you will tell us by the 11th of November ... 😳 which is so far ... 😭

Thanks Sandhya ...

Originally posted by: Cute6

Sandhya dii take a bow...you have rendered me speechless and m still reeling in the after effects of reading such a emotionally draining update..

Life changes just in matter of minutes

these lines were given perfect defination and detailed meaning thru these two updates

my heartaches seeing the plight of a teenage girl who has just witnesed the most beautiful and dreadful day of her life..whose most beautiful dream just shattered..she will never even dare to dream anything on this lines once again and it showed thru khushis thots, her turmoil, her turbulance and everything..overall she has restricted herself from dreaming as well..this will be biggest punishment/suffering that a person can undergo and m devastated just by thinking about it😭

the ana khushi moments warm the cockels of my heart..it is just so pure and more importantly trustworthy and you can always depend on it..this is the main USP of your story and i really hope this will have large role to play in the future..im always pertifed thinking wat would happen wen ana will get to know about everything that has transpired between her brother and her best friend...everything is just turning out into shambles😔

and arnav..

i love him more now!

and he has fallen for khushi it is visible and he has fallen hard..it would be next to impossible for him to bear this seperation and m vaiting to see how will he cope up with all these now..now he will hurt his family with his decisions and in turn will get shatterd more i dont know where it will take him now...it feels good to see him regreting the second kiss but seeing the damage he has done due to his uncontrollable temper the contition seems to be futile..

the only smiling factor was nani..i always tell and again m telling i love her and she is a darling❤️

shadow aww he is the only saviour of the whole update who made me smile with his antics..i do really agree with you that pets are more attached than any human being and m in love with your shadow as well..lol i said khushi nani arnav shadow anya everybody and the only one left is you i guess so sandhya dii love you as well🤗 but more than love i admire the way you rite everything so perfectly and entertain us and i have become your fan so add me to your uncountable list of fans😊

the train convo between arnav khushi i dont wish to speak anything about it..i knew seperation would come anytym but the circumstances under which it happened it left me heratbroken💔

and next update on 11th il die of anticipation i guess😆

sandhya dee atleast give a teaser...

P.S: giving dairymilk is the most beautiful way of apologising and it reminded me of my bro who must have given me atleat 50 till date..thanq for making me relive that moments again😊

Originally posted by: jas0308

it's very touching chapter, really!!!

i was feeling like i can feel their emotions.. and can imagine every scene

from khushi's misery at first, her pain of her heartache.. coz somewhere she know what she did she shouldn't or maybe it was right time yet!!

loved ana and shadow.. loved it how shadow was upset over khushi leaving as ana is!!! hope they will get in same college

you very beautifully wrote arnav's battle with his own self.. and he very well understood, that khushi have that place in his life which nobody can take, and he wont let any body take that place ever!!! but still he is unknown to this feeling as khushi is!!

khushi bidding bye to raizada's was touching!!! nani is so sweet!!! love her!!!

arnav come to railway station to meet her!!! i was kind of expecting that!!! but still am shocked!! their convo's and their everything was so emotional.. really.. oh god why are they parting!!! hope they will see each other soon!! it must be very heartbreaking for both of them, but i guess.. it's kinda necessary too!!

i can very well imagine that scene going on in front of my very own eyes.. and i can feel their pain and understand their expression

very very beautifully written

please so continue soon

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sincereme

Sad and emotional...
Love has the power to change a person overnight... And change was quiet visible in khushi... But how strongly she pull herself together was comendable...
The love all the Raizada's has for khushi overwhelmed me... Even shadow was sad for her depature...
Arnav came to appologize... I m glad for that... But even after that they can't be same now...
Why is it impossible? This question showed how helpless she was feeling... Despite her resolves she couldn't control her heart to utter those words...
Continue soon...

Originally posted by: Monalisaa

What an update Sandhya. I will start with Shadow, did I mentioned that I love dogs I grew up with 4 dogs back home and the feeling of going back home to them from school n see them running towards you is just out of this world n so is the feeling wen u leave in the morning their sad faces, shadow just reminds me of those days. I love you shadow.

Will start with Arnav, why am not suprised first he does mistakes and comes back to apologise, though I was melting with his apology but am glad Khushi stood her ground, did I say I love this Khushi Sandhya? Head strong, I girl who can ignore the battle btw her heart and mind. Well she is gonna be one he'll of a strong head woman n I can't wait for that to happen.


Thanks for the pm Sandhya n have a good weekend.