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Originally posted by: sarahjac

It was beautiful...:)
At one point Khushi was contemplating extending her stay...and now she doesn't feel the need to stay back...heartbreaks are difficult especially the first ones...they stay with u to last a lifetime...within deep recesses for sure...but they never leave u.
Arnav's probably loses more...his.one.shot at peace...did he realize that he has apologized twice in a short span of 1 week? This girl definitely means somethin...and it was again heartbreaking for Arnav to say..."stay away from guys like me"...he is acknowledging a truthful ugly facet of his personality 😔

PS: i am a little confused, i thot shashi booked the train tickets...i guess i missed something

Originally posted by: sk2405

This chapter was an emotional roller-coaster ride.

Khushi's thoughts about the previous night, the pain, rejection, denial and all were well-written. They clearly showed that she was hurt and hurt deeply.

Arnav's comparison of the garden to her presence was perfect. She indeed was the fresh air that he enjoyed but then polluted himself.

The good-bye's are always sad but Akash's presence did lighten up things. Waiting to see Akash-Payal face-off. 😃

Their conversation in the train was heartening. I never expected such a sincere and humble apology from him. His last words were the best. I hope she doesn't change either but does meet him again.

Waiting for the next part. Update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: ssyahoo

And goodbye it is 😭

My heart cries out for Khushi but I know that they are meant to be together and Arnav and Khushi will meet again.

I loved how you had Devyani gift Khushi with pearls. While pearls have many variation of meanings, I remember reading that they are sometimes referred to as "teardrops of the moon" With that in mind and the many meanings it was truly a symbolic gift on such a poignant day. One that symbolized her innocence, her beauty, her past few days among the rich, and her heartbreak.

Loved how Arnav eventually winds up at the train station. He wants her to slap him and hurt him back, but she uses her words effectively which definitely hurts more than actions sometimes. As i said goodbyes are tough but it was so well written and I have full faith that you will reunite Arnav and Khushi in a beautiful way.

Also I have unreserved for last chapter here..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3768094/untitled?pn=72

A very happy Diwali to you and your family Sandy!

Originally posted by: arpitasharma

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Another beautiful, but heart-wrenching update Sandhya Di!

"Weak sunrays fought their way through the gaps in the drawn curtains. Other than those hazy streaks of light, the room remained shrouded in darkness." An apt description to reveal Khushi's state of mind. A mind, hazy and unsure, a heart filled with guilt and covered in darkness, fighting the feelings of her very first crush, Khushi is broken. Everything began and ended in the same evening. What irony!

Khushi is evading Anya yet again! Can a day turn out worse than it was already?

And Shadow is back again! But this time to bid Khushi goodbye. I adored that scene so much. It is true that animals are able to feel what humans are not. A puppy is the only thing on earth that loves you more than he loves himself!

"Big puddles of water, slushy soil and broken branches. The sky was a depressing gray." Another perfect description to highlight the turmoil brimming in Arnav's mind. I sometimes wonder what a person he would've been if anger and ignorance hadn't been his terrible companions. But then again, every man is flawed.

I am glad Khushi is taking along with her bundles of love and good wishes from a bunch full of jolly and affectionate people, and not just a broken heart.

That little line you dropped in about the disparity in railways highlighting the hypocrisy in almost every sphere of life was indeed a brilliant stroke there.

Akash is over the tinge of crush he had for Khushi, and boy am I glad! Though he would've been an awesome man, I believe he's reserved for PalPal, isn't he?

Cadbury dairy milk bar?! I hope it hints to the beautiful beginning of a new phase of life for both Arnav and Khushi, though it halted on a bitter note. I loved that finger-finger serving as the only fibre of thread that bound them to each other. It reminded me of the film "Khushi" for some reason! I am glad Arnav realized what he did, but it is sure to take sometime to mend the broken pieces. And all we are left is with hope - hope that they will meet again. Oh yes! They will meet again!

Sadness flies away with the wings of time. The sun is new each day! I hope this holds true for Khushi and Arnav as well.

"It is our wounds that create in us a desire to reach for miracles. The fulfillment of such miracles depends on whether we let our wounds pull us down or lift us up towards our dreams."

Jocelyn Soriano,

Happy Diwali Di! I hope this Diwali spells happiness and prosperity for you and your family and brings about better opportunities and tremendous joy your way! 🤗

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Look who's here? What kind of a girlfriend ditches her boyfriend (DND) and disappears...we missed you ..DND and I 😆

My Diwali break continues 😆

DND understands. He's very insightful, didn't you know?

Thank you for that beautiful poem ...

Rotten doggerel is what it is.😛

what a song (not a fan of the singer)...a wrecking ball and the wrecker ...indeed.

I don't care about Miley Cyrus but the song! <3

And by the way Arnav the vain guy was 😆🤣

but the most poignant one and perfect here is the "I don't think about you anymore but I don't any less" Stunning. Thank Del for sharing them.

Ooops I forgot ...am not supposed to thank you right...okay here goes 🤗