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Originally posted by: arpitasharma

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How do I love thee?! Beautiful update Sandhya Di! Call it a stroke of luck or an attempt at stalking, your sudden surprise update surely took me off guard! I loved it nevertheless!

The chapter was as beautiful as it could be and even more! Continuing from the last chapter which left us yearning for more, this cliffhanger isn't something bearable either! But that's what is called keeping the suspense alive, I believe. Just like you've been doing since the beginning of the story! I am up for it! At least, I hope I do!

The ambiance and imagery you create, the emotions you evoke within us readers,I have told you before, and I am telling it to you now, you are awesome! And I mean every nook and cranny of it!

I've always held a thing for Laburnum trees ever since I read a poem on it a long time back and its liveliness always strikes me at its mere thought! Funny why I am discussing about the tree!

And I love Khushi's thought processes. Period. Her thoughts hop from one to the another and then it reaches somewhere it doesn't want to and it starts all over again. So realistic and yet amusing!

Khushi is aware of what she is doing and she wanted it as much as Arnav did. And so under the moonlight, beneath the stars, they kiss. A kiss that was as beautiful and romantic as it could be. And I am not lingering on the kiss as much! You know how beautiful it was! 😳

I loved Khushi's stance when she knew they had taken it a bit far from her liking. But she wasn't scared of facing him when he spoke the only words that strummed her heart strings (along with ours, of course!) "Stay!"

Perhaps this 'stay' was for her not to leave them so soon, I assume!

I hope what happened doesn't change their equation although there seems to be not quite an equilibrium!

And I loved the kiss, (again!)

It was all magical, indeed! ❤️

Originally posted by: IPK007

Absolutely mind-blowing update and for many reasons besides the most obvious one!!

I love the fact that you've made both Arnav and Khushi so smartly cognizant of their wants. They are experiencing this undeniable, almost magnetic attraction towards each other and bypassing the cliched denial phase they have already accepted it at the conscious level. This is so mature, so relatable, so contemporary and I really love it.

The whole ambience that you had set for their first kiss was stunningly beautiful and your choice of words brought it to life right in front of our eyes.

The pool, the floating yellow petals, the star spangled sky, the breeze, the alluring shadows that the rippling waves cast on Khushi's face. You have an artist's eye for details that automatically zooms in on all things beautiful..

And the kiss!!! Ah, Sandy...all I'm going to say is that you captured the essence, the soul of a first kiss in a way that can only be described as brilliant.

Beautiful... ❤️

Originally posted by: kclovearshi

I'm wondering about your choice of colors for A & K's outfits, and if you chose them purposely, Mid-night Blue for Mid-night Sky and White for Moonlight 😉