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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww. that was a beautiful kiss 😳

The interplay of their emotions leading up to the kiss, the ambience of star lit sky with a soft Moonlight, the sparkling blue waters, soft yellow flowers, truly beuatiful, a prince in blue and a princess in white, made for an enchanting kiss 😉

Love, Love, Loved it 😛

Exceeding our expectations, you scored a ten out of ten, Sandy 😉

Hmm, Khushi is jealous of Lavanya and that showed up when she inadvertantly addressed her as his Girlfriend...did I hear a chuckle..he must have inwardly 😛 An angry, jealous Khushi = a passionate kiss 😉

He is a gentleman in making sure she wanted it as much as him by asking her if she wants to leave and a smart one at that too..!! But shouldn't he have apologized for going too far in the end? Of course he got carried away but a sorry would have amended it?

He wants her to Stay.!! Hmm let's see what Khushi does now 😛

Thank you for listening to your readers 😃

Cheers
K

Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago
BlueBloodQueen thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome up date.
They shared their first kiss
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was magical!loved it! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was magical...their first kiss...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow - so beautifully written and the way you described Arnav & Khushi's emotions & the kiss was amazing.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arpitasharma

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How do I love thee?! Beautiful update Sandhya Di! Call it a stroke of luck or an attempt at stalking, your sudden surprise update surely took me off guard! I loved it nevertheless!

The chapter was as beautiful as it could be and even more! Continuing from the last chapter which left us yearning for more, this cliffhanger isn't something bearable either! But that's what is called keeping the suspense alive, I believe. Just like you've been doing since the beginning of the story! I am up for it! At least, I hope I do!

The ambiance and imagery you create, the emotions you evoke within us readers,I have told you before, and I am telling it to you now, you are awesome! And I mean every nook and cranny of it!

I've always held a thing for Laburnum trees ever since I read a poem on it a long time back and its liveliness always strikes me at its mere thought! Funny why I am discussing about the tree!

And I love Khushi's thought processes. Period. Her thoughts hop from one to the another and then it reaches somewhere it doesn't want to and it starts all over again. So realistic and yet amusing!

Khushi is aware of what she is doing and she wanted it as much as Arnav did. And so under the moonlight, beneath the stars, they kiss. A kiss that was as beautiful and romantic as it could be. And I am not lingering on the kiss as much! You know how beautiful it was! 😳

I loved Khushi's stance when she knew they had taken it a bit far from her liking. But she wasn't scared of facing him when he spoke the only words that strummed her heart strings (along with ours, of course!) "Stay!"

Perhaps this 'stay' was for her not to leave them so soon, I assume!

I hope what happened doesn't change their equation although there seems to be not quite an equilibrium!

And I loved the kiss, (again!)

It was all magical, indeed! ❤️



You assumed right. The 'Stay' was to tell her to not leave for Lucknow the next day :)

Thank you for that generous praise.

You call this a cliff hanger...😆 Then I'll have to write the whole novel out before posting 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Absolutely mind-blowing update and for many reasons besides the most obvious one!!

I love the fact that you've made both Arnav and Khushi so smartly cognizant of their wants. They are experiencing this undeniable, almost magnetic attraction towards each other and bypassing the cliched denial phase they have already accepted it at the conscious level. This is so mature, so relatable, so contemporary and I really love it.

The whole ambience that you had set for their first kiss was stunningly beautiful and your choice of words brought it to life right in front of our eyes.

The pool, the floating yellow petals, the star spangled sky, the breeze, the alluring shadows that the rippling waves cast on Khushi's face. You have an artist's eye for details that automatically zooms in on all things beautiful..

And the kiss!!! Ah, Sandy...all I'm going to say is that you captured the essence, the soul of a first kiss in a way that can only be described as brilliant.

Beautiful... ❤️



That was my intention...to make this story contemporary and you captured the essence of what I was trying to show so aptly.

Jen Jen! Thank you! 🤗
Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm wondering about your choice of colors for A & K's outfits, and if you chose them purposely, Mid-night Blue for Mid-night Sky and White for Moonlight 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kclovearshi

I'm wondering about your choice of colors for A & K's outfits, and if you chose them purposely, Mid-night Blue for Mid-night Sky and White for Moonlight 😉


K, I just didn't want Khushi in red. Too early for red hotness. Period.

And if you notice, Arnav is in white shirt...I seriously believe in co-ordinating outfits... 😆. So midnight bluw jacket it was.

But now that you mention it...I am going to make that my reasoning in future...that sounds so much more poignant 🤣
Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yep! It did live up to the expectation and was so refreshing!
Both made their views, intentions and feelings clear. Khushi drew the line how far she was ready to go. Well Arnav has accepted it. But will Khuhsi be able to stay is the question!
Loved the update Sandya.

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