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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

What a powerful kiss! Amazing update. Thanks for the pm.

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

oh it was lovely! what else do i say??

u left me speechless/ breathless!

stay hmm...so what if he stays for one more day? what after that??

thanx for the heavenly reading moment and the pm!

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dsbj

@dsbj

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

whoa! That was surely a mind blowing kiss ..beautiful. Will khushi stay? Waiting for next chapter already.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Wow that was an amazing and mind blowing update,

I absolutely loved the update, a brilliant read from start to finish.

Honestly reading the kiss in the update was just one of they best birthday present I could get today, lol.

The kiss definitely lived up to my expectation and probably surpassed my expectations.

Loved the part of the house Khushi ended up in, it was described so beautifully and perfect location for there first kiss.

Honestly the kiss was just so beautiful, intimate, sensual, amazing, powerful and passionate.

Love the fact Arnav actually asked Khushi indirectly for her permission.

Awww Arnav asking Khushi to stay, can't wait to see what she does and if she agrees.

Loved, loved, loved the update,

Thanks for the PM,

Continue soon, eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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Jenna

@LondonChick

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

I'll be back
Need to comment from my laptop for sound effects

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NikitaM11

@NikitaM11

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Omgg that kiss was so hottt! Loved it!!

I do hope that Khushi doesn't go all the way with Aranv so quick, I hope it is at a later time, so she gets to know him really well before taking that leap of faith. Amazing chapter though! Even though I half- wanted them to go all the way ;) I'm glad Khushi stopped him.

Can't wait to see what her decision will be!!

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yadiyada

@yadiyada

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

AMAZING! Well written. Like the restrained quality of the update. A glimpse into their passion... Looking forward to the next chapter.

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Ahhh they kissed! Now that was a surprise! A very pleasant one indeed. Awww the last part was so sweet and touching. The way he said 'stay'. And she definitely understood what he meant, just like when he asked her if she wants to leave.

Looking forward to her decision now.

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Wow wow wow...what a beautiful kiss...simply breath taking...loved it!!! :)

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

What a mush moment... Though it was naughty of Arnav to try take it next base... Over here Khushi is still a young girl... Though she is older than another Khushi who has done it😉... But that's another time another Khushi...

Who is lavanya if she is not Arnav's girlfriend why did he allow her to be so cosy in front of Khushi...

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