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Sandhyaaa...I feel like calling out loud but I know it wouldn't sound too well so akkkaaa!!!

My my! You articulated the whole scene with excellent choice of words! This was par excellence! Beautiful! Magnificent actually!

A kiss cannot call it a simple kiss even though it was because of the way you depicted it! The penning down was fantastic!!


Be it their thought process! The surroundings that seemed so surreal! The aftermath it was all so good!

It was like walking through a road that's covered with autumn leaves fallen all over and rays of sun peeking through!


Just too good! I have run out of adjectives to describe this update.!


But I guess the push was expected! The kiss just cannot have a nice ending!


But the last part was worth the wait! Stay four letter word conveyed so much more!

Beautiful dammit!


Bliss!


Cheers

thank you for posts! 😊

awesome update!

loved it! 🤗

I wait for the following updating

Loved d update
it was a magical expierience to read it
Thanks a ton for d pm

Enjoyed the chapter. Wow...they kissed. Thank God there was no call from Aman, or in this case he didn't come searching for Arnav ;) Looking forward to the next chapter.

Ohhh sandy dear..wat shud i sae abt u..ur amazinn buss!!
I jus dnt found wrds fr each chp of dis ff..dey r flawless
N d kisss aahhh it was sensous..hot..n beautifull..n full of arshii!!
Waitin fr next update!!
Byee!!
😳 😃

I think I forgot to breath while reading it

Originally posted by: vgedin

Kya 'you too' ? Dhokhebaazi ki naa ? 😒

Omg
...what a wonderful update... I felt like I was really there... it felt so magical..so beautiful... perfect!!

I am back.