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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: massu91
cheating cheating...not fair u sed tuesday...me araaam karae thee na bcz tuesday ko ye thread stalk karna tha...ab me itnaa dooor hu updaye se...no problm though...

ahem...i knew it i knew it...wen i read d chapter heading...my heart started beating fastt..lol...y does ur every chp makes my heart beat faster?? n ye chapter k to heading ONE STARRY night ne hee mere hosh uda diye...

ahem ahem...nw now dis is wrongg... bigaaad diya mujhe...lol...itni romaaantic n cuteee kisss 💔

loveeedd itt...n enjoyed it ahem...ahem...arnav n khushi 😳

i want dis story to remain dis wayy only romaaantic n cute...

nw wat vl happen after dey seperate?? ...i dont want heartbreak...of any of dem n misunderstanding

pls plsss

wat abt d prologue...wenever m enjoyng d chp...d prologue sits at d bak of my mind...god..

cont sooonnn

waiting fr d aftermath of kiss...

atleast m glad u dint end d chp wit khushi going witout looking bak at arnav...u made arnav say stay n she stayed...yaaayyy yes yes yes

I'm really really sorry...I thought it'll be a nice surprise to update early...didn't think of my lovely stalkers🤗

next time, I'll pukka update on the day and time I promise...

And Thank you for your wonderful comment. Oh! The prologue...what can I say...my lips are sealed there 😆

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

This the most sweetest and magical kiss I ever read in IF..
The way Arnav say 'Stay', was awesome...
Waiting for next..
A big Hug for You for this MAGICAL CHAPTER...

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: vgedin

Charu Sandhya did dhokhebaazi with me too She resed over an hour earlier than she said she would. I wasn't even around to stalk! It was a stroke of luck that I made it on Pg 1 ..

Twiggy, you too 😲

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Twiggy, you too 😲

Kya 'you too' ? Dhokhebaazi ki naa ? 😒

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: vgedin

Kya 'you too' ? Dhokhebaazi ki naa ? 😒

Okay, updated an hour early...that's coz I couldn't write - was absolutely blocked. So thought let me upload ...next time time and date pukka fixing okay😆

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bhoomigowda

@bhoomigowda

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Amazing update and I absolutely loved it. Seeing the title of the chapter I had guessed what was about to come and I was not at all disappointed. It was truly a enchanting update. I love the way you always describe a particular environment making it to look so surreal and it really makes the update even more beautiful. I guess this was by far the best "first kiss" I have read so far not because only because of the way you have penned it but also for the ambiance you created . It was simply prefect & magical and you have portrayed each of the emotions beautifully, there was passion, desire, concern, shyness. For a moment I had thought that khushi might back out when arnav asked her if she wanted to go back but alas nothing of that sort happened. It was truly surprising to see her give in to his wish without retorting and be an equal participant. Even though both were so much into the kiss its good to see them realize their limits, she stopped him when it went a bit over board & he compelled without any clams. Its going to be interesting to see how you plan to take it forward from here.

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Okay, updated an hour early...that's coz I couldn't write - was absolutely blocked. So thought let me upload ...next time time and date pukka fixing okay😆

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