The Bride With A Doll Thread#4/ NOTE ON PAGE 145 - Page 85

Awsom blossom cmz lyk khushi wrote lettr 2 thammi & aparna...updatesooon!!!

Loved d teaser
waiting for d epilogue eagerly

Awww ...Khushi has written a letter to her Thammi... Wow...
She was her first friend come companion in that house...

Lovely Jenny... Waiting eagerly to read the full part...
Im feeling sooo sad that this beautiful and pure love story is coming to an end... :(

Hi,

I was wondering whether to start with a thank you or to write about story.Than I thought I should tell my story first before yours.. hehehe

So writerji thank you for writing this master piece and also saving me from sleeping. Not well, "aur bahot neend aa rai thi but padhna was important so I spent some here on IF"

In starting the age-gap was not acceptable for me. I usually think there should be at max only 4 years gap between a husband and wife.

But then I reminded myself this is not about today's generation. My grandmother was also married at very small age 11 or 12. I am not a fan of Ghandhiji and for me India got independence because of people's like Bhagat Singh, Raj Guru, Sukhdev etc. So it was pleasure to read this story and I really loved your arnav. It takes a lot of guts to do things where you know you can die anytime.

In this story you cannot judge anyone. Everyone has their own reasons to react the way they did. If we talk about arnav's dad than he was not wrong. He was only protecting his son as he knew where his son was moving to. And asking arnav to leave the house was his last stroke, to save him though he failed.

Arnav, a true gentleman, who in start knew the importance of childhood as he has missed that part. {*sigh* why you writers make arnav so cute, adorable, sweet, loving etc etc etc that readers fell in love with him} I loved the fact that he kept himself away from khushi so that she can live her childhood to the fullest. J and khushi being khushi keeping no stone unturned to get her husband's attention, poor girl she was too nave. And that part where she asked for her own baby that was a fun to read.

I din understand the two years gap and mishap. Smajh nai aaya. I guess everyone thought that arnav died right?

And the last part after two year leap, hell that took me back to IPK.. That was magical. *sigh* I still remember it. Oh you have so perfectly added it in your story that was a master stroke baby... well done hahaha but I prefer pink over white hehehe..

We will get to read an epilogue right? I am looking forward to it.. And about the title, that was apt and perfect for your story..

I wish I could write more but I have to leave... is story ki kasar intoxication pe nikalungi..

Love Shruti

and yes ignore the typos..:)

Jen, it is like you read my mind and give me all the things that I love...A single red rose in intoxication, a song I absolutely cherish, and a letter that expresses Khushi's longing, regret and sadness at being separated...Thank you. Waiting

OMG! Jen, such a touching epilogue!

I hope she could send the letter secretly and not get caught!

Waiting.. not so patiently..

Woh woah woah!!!! Such beautiful and mature story...so so adorable!!!! It touched my heart jenny!!
Arnab and his khushu...rheir journey towards love...love of man to a child to a girl to her ward to the love of a man and his wife ...just too beautiful!!!

And the setup?? The freedom movement...the way arnab is torn between supporting the armed revolutionaries and Mahatma??
The ancestral home..the orchads... what not????

*bows* *claps*

touching touching touching

It's a very good story!!