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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

Aww They finally become one... Cute upd :)

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Parisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

lovely update
beautifully expressed each and every emotion

cant wait for sum more

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Anisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#433

loved the update 😳

eagerly waiting for the nxt part

thanks for the PM

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luvraj4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#434

loved the update...it was so beautiful..i had tears in my eyes everytime arnav called her "khushu"...i am feeling so touched and overwhelmed by the love and adoration they have for each other...its really sad that they had to live separately for whole 2 years...i just hope that nothing separates them now...

i am so sad that this fic is coming to an end soon...i love this fic so much that i feel that its ending too soon...i love the feel of reading this one...set in the old times this fic gives me immense peace whenever i read it ...

i just hope that i'll get to read many more beautiful fics like this from u...

continue soon

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#435

thank u so much jen, the hut scene from the show was one of my favorite and romantic scene but i always felt it was uncomplete and as i always wished it had a different ending. so thanks to ur superb writing my wish has become a reality and its even much better than my imagination. this was simply explosive!

i loved their coming together. it was just pure and so passionate. they have evolved from the arnab who hated himself to be a part of the society that forced girls to become women before they were ready and the little khushi playing with a little doll, they have become one and truly husband and wife in every sense of the word. they have bonded not only on the physical level but also emotionally. now they might be miles apart but they will be able to feel each other heartbeats. "dol dil bandhe ek dor se"

n the atmosphere in that hut was just perfect, with light coming from the lantern and the raging storm outside but im able to decide where the storm was at its highest intensity outside or inside within them. even the grandeur of the haveli would have made up for the comfort and coziness the hut provided to these 2 lovers!

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#436

another wonderful part dear...

tht was awesome...

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roshaan

@roshaan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#437

tooo gud to be discribe in word i simply loved it plz dont seprate them now other i will cryyy plz plz

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faree

@faree

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#438

awesome update and thanks for the pm

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neevankrish

@neevankrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#439

Just amazing...al thanks to u for creating arnab character n such a lovable matured way...he let her to live her childhood...n he gradually increased his love for her which leads to consummate ther marriage n evry way marking ther love forevr!!!!!

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DhivyaMurali

@dhivyamurali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#440

amazing stuff jenny...the long awaited coming together of Arnav babu and kushi has been written beautifully...waiting for the next update...thanks for the PM.