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Posted: 11 years ago
V touchg reunion...love it...
Wonder if arnab gonna leave after this or will he take kushi w him...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh god!
that was powerful! the heightened beautiful raw emotions! :)
the way you write beats 90% of the writers out there!

i really really loved the term "khushu" !! wish they had used it in the show!
i was imagining sarun in all these scenes!
this chapter took my breath away!
woah!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh Jen , it was simply beautiful!
I have read the update umpteen number of times and also a couple of comments over these pages , trust me i am really finding it difficult to actually express my thoughts over this chapter.
To simply say , this being "the" consummation scene , nevertheless barring that fact aside the innocence and purity your writing has managed to capture between Arnav and Khushi is just flawless.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very beautiful and romantic!!
How I wish they could stay like this...but I have a horrible feeling that something is going to happen to Arnab isn't it?
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Posted: 11 years ago
lvd it..!!
seperation nd now bcmn one..!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
got reminded of iss pyaar ko all over again...
thankfully no goons/cops interrupted this time ;-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved this update.
Really made my night! :D

I knew they were pining for each other. And then, they had this emotional reunion.
The farmhouse scene was quite rushed in the show. But their acting compensated for it.

Here, the anticipation was building up. Their emotions are so synced.
Wanna know if Pranab the reason for the murder? Btw, the meal with the fish seemed so tasty. 😆
Edited by SilentShadow - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey jenny superb upd 👏 i m glad arnab n khushi finally united n share their love n feeling with each other expressing it .loved their care n concern for each other , do upd soon u penned down whole upd wonderfully i hv no words to describe 😳👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally,my Arhi meet after two years..

Khushi is 17 now...

Arnav has noticed her physical n emotional changes..
Both r too happy..

Arnav has made it clear that he can't stay there as it's still risky..

Khushi has no other choice but she's ready to spend that night with her husband..
But she's so adorably shy n naive..

I almost laughed when she got excited to see rice n fish..
But poor she...
Her hubby has other plans than the supper..

I was reminded of the hut scene in IPKKND...

Jenny...
U wrote it so artistically ..
u should have been the script writer then...

So...
Buddy..
U r ending it,too..sigh..

I couldn't yet get over The Impenetrable Heart..
N then ALS..sigh..
And the new one is strictly a 3-shot...sigh..

U r too cruel.Sara ki mom !!!

Edited by pakpearl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update... loved it... finally arhi meet after 2 long yrs :)

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