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amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#441

Oh..Jen..that was sheer..bliss!

loved it...

What an update...so beautiful!

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loveandluck

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Posted: 11 years ago

#442

Aww, can he stay a while? They're so happy together!

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sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#443

Ahh... The most awaited moment... The are together now in every sense... Surely after the gap of two years they couldn't keep their hands with themselves...

Beautifully written... 👏

But what about the food that hariji kept for them.😆... Their hunger for each other overcome the hunger for food...☺️

Loved it...

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tparvaiz

@tparvaiz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#444

👏Awesome update👏

Arnav can feel that khushi is women

He was 😡 on her because she is waiting for him in rain

He told her to in mandir

I really love their kiss n than too first ☺️

Arnav is shirtless and khushi shy

And arnav to notices her shyness😆

"What happened to your voice?

"Nnothing..",

"When did my Khushu learn to be so shy?

I really love their conversation n scene too

From when both couple left long😳

Khushi saree scene was fantastic n the way she were one side n even

She tried sheet n change the her wet cloth he can can see

I love you line😳

I really love poor arnie couldn't control 😆

Arshi consummation 😊

Was too fantastic 😳

😭😭Next update will be last. ?... no please

Atleast give to 15 update😊

Please if you can I can only request

Please continue

Thank you for MP me.

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crazy-ash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#445

no u did not make it too mushy! it was perfect! exactly what was needed!

and i loved it!

thanx for the happy reading moment!

wonder what happpend to pranab and his wife...an what will this new level of relationship take arnav and khushi?

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Abyan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#446

Another awesome chapter...loved from first till end... Such beautiful moments between Arnab and his khushu..And finally they come together. And not just physically but took their relationship in the next level also equally aware of their emotions as well as the physical pull. That it culminates in something so beautiful was only natural so cute... u really took me the epic moment in hut scene IPPKND Arnav carrying Khushi in his arms was awesomely so romantic and still give me goosebumps...

So well done my dear Jenny for giving us this breathtaking and heartwarming update⭐️ plz continue soon.. and cheers for the pm🤗

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SS88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#447

Ab main kya boloon. You write passionate scenes beautifully , Jenny. It's an art, and not many writers can do that. Lovely.

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#448

Unreserved here

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93930735

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#449

they are together after so long

and they consummated their marriage

I am hoping that he takes her along with him
when he leaves

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sakhter90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#450

That was awsome! Finally they are together after 2 long years of seperation. And they have consummated their marriage! That was utterly beautifully written!