Arnav Singh Raizada's musings #2 -Part 12 Page 73 - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
Apology Note here 95359328


Gita, I am sorry for realizing your wittiness this late When you mused on Rasgulla_sp and myself only then I realized how accurately you observe stories and authors and how well you merge them in these musings. Genius!


You perfectly moulded the style I use for my stories. You started with a long note (😛) then you added the poem then acknowledgement then a banner and then the title. But you nailed it with the number of words under the title 😆 (I had to start putting those because no matter how long the update would be, readers tell me it was so short 😛)


Poor Arnav got shocks after shocks that Payal could speak and speak a lot :P And she was being diplomatic with Mami and she didn't even get the hint 😆 (Many readers have asked me why Payal is always a strong character in my works - there are two reasons. First - we had gotten a glimpse of a strong Payal after the guest house scene. That stayed with me. Second - my sisters. Both are very strong individuals and I know they will do anything for me 😊)


laaijy leeve 🤣 Yes, I speak a lot. A LOT *facepalm* I do look back at my previous works and I tell myself 'Meine kitni bakwaas ki hai' 😆 (Thats one of the reasons why I don't want my previous works to be available again because I know its not good enough 😛)


Khushi finding the Khushi of MML besharm 😳 and then Arnav here turned in to besharm ☺️ (Tu na yeh wala portion humesha edit out kar leti hai 😡)


You used the Jab We Met/LI scene very aptly. Perfect!


P.S. We won't mind Khushi taking babies as a means of competition as long as we get to witness the baby making process 😳


P.P.S Thank you so much for considering MML and LI worth musing on!


P.P.P.S Its time for replying to everyone 😃


ATTACK!!!
Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav ji...todays starting note was enough for me to understand who is ur target today...
Another splendid musing...so natural and so real...hamesha ki tarah...
Zehra k baare mein aur kya bataun...no matter how much, words are not enough to appreciate her...she is just Genius...(Zehra, I dont use any of those butter packets of ur previous sigi...so its completely true...sidhe dil se nikle huye baat)
U know while reading each and every update of LI these days, I always wish if only we could get a Payal like her...she is way too admirable...I love her...
And Khushi of MML...yeah she is very BOLD...and full of LOVE in her...
Arnav ji...I wish u read and mused about Making Decisions...I'm crazy for this story...kash iske baare mein aapka thought jaan pati...
Does the shrewd brain Mr. ASR has, can do something about reading her previous works...Kya Zehra ASR ki baat taal sakte hai...I've doubt...u can try Arnavji...baki aapki marzi...
Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
arey wao laeeji leeeve ⭐️ kya baat hai !!😛by the way last update on rasgulla sp kinda gave a clue next victim wd be lazy leaves 😉

ok the thank yu note **rofl ** yu copied and edited it !!😆 nice .. POETRY REVOLUTION OFFICER 😆 poor vs ;P

areey arnav thought the thnk yu note puts to sleep .. lol ..least does he know it keeps so many people awake all night ** rofl again**
preeto vs khushi ..kid-ing competition !! nice thouht .. 👍🏼.. lol .. actually there is so much yu cd have written about her ffs .. arnav can muse over a delicious hot steaming khushi in MD and LI 😳😉.. the clever ever khushi in WIFE FOR FREE😆 there is aloot more .. long list ..lol.. but yu carried really well !! one thing unique about her ..is her TRADEMARK payal ❤️!! talk of the town now-a-days ..and liked the way yu wrote it !! brilliant
⭐️👍🏼i know she writes preetyy good but LI ijj beshht !!
nice update !! 👏⭐️
nice work lazy ji ⭐️.. like yur ffs alot 👏

and yes baner credits , words counts , thnk yu note , poems , AND SPECIAL MENTION ..rofl .. and that "'credits to google "" hhahaah ..
lazy ji tussi great hoo
p.s credit to three idots a bollywood movie
🤣

Edited by AALUSLOLWA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AD sucks but I will always have time for musings and W*F.

I thought you read LITP? Make a dedication to V and don't forget the brilliant stroke!

Unres!!

It had to be lazy next. It was an obvious choice. This time I was sharper, I found out when Payal replied arnav. This Payal can only be Z's. I know I know, I am not that sharp, I should have found out with the opening poem.

I have enjoyed, liked loved many of Z's stories, I am yet to read some, waiting for her to repost. One thing that is strikingly unique is the way she uses classic dialogues and scenes from the show in appropriate places and on totally unexpected characters.

Loved the musing G! Awesome as usual.
Edited by Viji79 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited:

She is not not-so-lazy leaves. She is a total lazy leaves. Ask me. The only area of Baby's life in which she isnt lazy is when she starts talking. Then there is no stopping her. 😕 Sadwala, thaka huwa bas...

Baby writes really well. That all of you know. So, I will tell you guys something else. Baby had made her 1st post on India Forums, after we had visited the sets of IPK, to clear the air of how exactly the sets looked.

She started spending more time on the Forum since then. Then over a series of days:

Me- Pehla post bhi bana liya. Ab toh tu OSes likhegi
Baby- No. Never!

😆

Me- OS bhi likh liya. Ab next kya? SS?
Baby- Aisa kuch nahi hone wala

😆

Me- SS bhi likhna shuru. Ab FF likh kar hi dum legi?
Baby- FF mujhse nahi likha jaayega.

😆

Then smart lady, just so that I couldnt laugh at her anymore did the unthinkable. One day she handed over the laptop to me

Baby- Ab toh bhara pura index hain tere paas. Ab meko kya bolegi??? 😆

Main chup rahi, seh li 😳... (Baby which movie's dialogue is this?)

_____

I too love LI's Payal... The dialogue I ❤️ the most of Payal is when she tells Aakash (in my words) "Zyada machh macch ki hain toh shadi nnahi karoogi" 😆

_____

mem1 your Payal is highly inspired by LI ki Payal. Chalo kuchh toh bhala huwa...

I found Arnav not wanting Khushi to consider Preeto's pregnancy as competition, very funny 😃

"Dont worry... hum woh nahi kar rahe the" Jab We Met... hain na mem1????

I love it when Arnav gives Khushi a suitable response ☺️. mem1 I could do with a few details of what exactly that suitable response entailed 😉

Btw, on the show I always wanted Arnav and Payal to have a stronger older brother- simple younger sister bond and Khushi and Aakash to be more like friends. Show main toh nahi, at least through this musing of yours I got a glimpse of the former (where Arnav takes an active interest in knowing the mystery behind a changed Payal)

Also, gotta agree with you. Freaking EVERYONE knows Baby on both the IPK and the FF Forum

You can love LL, you can hate LL but you canNOT ignore LL 😛

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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UnRes

Payal teasing Akash and winking at Arnav is a
shocker afterall. The note and the poem say it
all about who the musing is. Loved it Gita 😊

The not-so-lazyleaves is an awesome writer and
an amazing person. She not only writes notes to
thank her readers in the thread but also personally
scraps to most of them about their comments on
the story. Now her crazy readers opened a CC
for their writer lazy which she visits to speak
regularly. She is an honest and a down-to-earth person...love you lazy :D

P.S. I was a silent reader once but came out
of the shell because of her.
Edited by Skiran - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'll be BACK!!! 😳

Comment on Page 39!!!
Edited by arpitasharma - 12 years ago
Nandz thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
"laaijy leeve" 🤣 🤣 🤣
Oh geeta i love u for this! I couldnt stop laughing after this! Loved the musing geeta specially the way u have paid tribute to our super cool laaijy!! Though u took a dig her for writing long notes , and i know it was all in jest, but it really takes time and its actually very sweet of her to do this and make all of us feel special!
But it was as usual so hilarious mami!!

The moment i started reading the update and read Payal' s name i was 99% sure that it was Zehra's turn today! God her payal of LI is the best , coolest and the most revolutionary payal that i have come across in any of the stories in this forum!!
Coming to lazy , there is not a single Os, SS, FF , TS of hers that can ever leave u not wanting for more or can ever fail to entertain you. During my exam times her os used to be my stress busters.
And every story had something new to offer, and every story had such unique twists and turns. M so happy i got to read most of her works. Her stories are always light, fun, stress busters and like a puzzle! You keep guessing what will happen next but you wont be able too. So its best to "keep calm n stop guessing"!!

N two of her best works were unconditional and conversations, for me!!

Unconditional was simply a class apart! Bas i love it immensely!!

God conversation was sheer brilliance, my fav short story/ series of ss of all times. That was the best manifestation of her creativity!!
People who have not read her these two works have definitely missed out on something!!

Her jalibified tales, late, making decisions were also too good! As i said i was lucky to read these stories before she removed them

My sorry zehra i started commenting on your works late but you know it was not due to lack of want!!

N offlate her gutter poems have become a rage! Got she is so spontaneous and writes at the speed of the lightening!! They are just so much fun!!

Love all your works!!
But from now onwards i would call you laaijy! This is too good a name to let go off!!😆

Edited by Nandz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Thankfully not sent me anywhere this time...


Do not worry! Your number will come in soon! Really s o o o o o n!

Edited by arpitasharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arpita this time u r both before and after me!!
Didnt i tell u so!!!

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