Arnav Singh Raizada's musings #2 -Part 12 Page 73

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arpitasharma

@arpitasharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: Nandz
Arpita this time u r both before and after me!!
Didnt i tell u so!!!

I do not know the mechanism behind our equation,

But it startles me no end, our order of attraction!

I am thoroughly conphused! 😲😕😆

Edited by arpitasharma - 11 years ago

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Is it the Lazy -season going on..? #i wonder!

Because Lazy di is everywhere.. :) kabhi yahaan to kabhi vahaan!

Z di, writes so well, is vaise bhi so good, that i really doubt if i would be able to write enough about her! I don't really know that many adjectives.. :/

but for sure, Payal is Lazy di's many writings has been seen in many different shades! Be it Making decisions, or Late or LI!

In Making Decisions - she was a spit fire, a fiesty being and a force to reckon, who could even scare our mighty ASR!

In Late - she was modern, understanding, passionate and intellectual..

In LI - she is a flirt, she is compassionate, she is a complete package.. Fultu Dhamaka!!

Sometimes i wonder if Payal is di's favourite charecter from iPK, but then listening about her claims on Arnav, i just end up my thinking on a mere fleeting thought.. Or just a doubt.. *inbestigation karega padi*

but di, the way you potrayed Payal in this musing, that she could talk, she actually had vocal chords, the way she could convince mami, i have always wanted to see this way!
Payal's charecter had a lot of potential, like you said, even i think she could become Aakash's spine!

Besides, i wonder if Khushi would actually want to compete with preeto.. :D

z di, dekho aap IPK ke sets par Arnav se milne gaye, now he is 'Googling' you ! ;)..

Nothing i would say, would actually so justice to what i feel, but di, you're writing are contagious.. I baar shuru kiya, to there's no looking back!

Zehra di's writing are a treasure..
To be able to read them, a true pleasure..
Not for once but for times more..
She has left me gaping for sure..
She is humble and nice..
Lovely and wordly wise!! :)

never these 'Love Interruptions' have been so dear..
'Making Decisions' was never so clear...
For love, its never too 'Late'..
'a Wife for free' is not in everyone's fate..
'Hold my hand' and guide me to Love..
Let me Love you and 'Make me love'! :)

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: arpitasharma

I do not know the mechanism behind our equation,
But it startles me no end, our order of attraction!





I am thoroughly conphused!😲😕😆

He he!!
No equation or attraction
Plain karmic connection!!

Sheer timing yaa!! 😆

Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago

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cute_sarun

@cute_sarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

beautiful part..me too a fan of lazyleaves writing..

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aashi12

@aashi12

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Jeevan ke safar main rahi
Milte hain bichand jaane ko
Aur de jaate hain yaadein
Tanhaayi main tadpane ko 😭

(This is an old Hindi movie song, suits aptly...)

i dunno old hindi songs much!, but : Rather than being sad that it ended, i'm happy that i actually happened..

Yaadein yaad aati hein.. Baatein bhul jaate hein..
Ye yaadein kisi dilo jaanam ke , chale jaane ke baad aati hain.. :')

did it suit well??.. I hope it made sense!

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IPK007

@IPK007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Another hilarious installment, Geeta . Loved reading it !

I have only read one story by LL, HMH and had enjoyed reading it. It was different and full of suspense... Won't say more as it might spoil the fun of those who haven't read it :)

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Beautiful_Devil

@Beautiful_Devil

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Fantastic updates memji, absolutely brilliant. Z's current stories are in my to-be read list but I am sure they will move to top now. Have heard so much about these two talented sisters and you hav done an amazing job in both the dedications. I absoluelty love your updates. Great job 👏

And kudos to all these super talented poets on this thread, every poem is beautifully written.

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parveenharry

@parveenharry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Comment edited here ...sorry for the delay!

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#249

Gita I am cracking up like it is no one's business! Honestly I love your humour, the way you dedicate chapters to various writers has always been so unique, funny, witty and mostly very sweet.

To start the whole chapter with MS Sagar's poetry just the same way LL does was just too sweet, Ms Sagar never ceases to amaze me heck she even talks to me in poetry! So much so that even I started responding to her in my own silly attempt at rhyming. She definitely inspired many to rhyme! The second poem by LL was just as beautiful.

Speaking of LL ( Lazy Leaves) I have only just discovered her work and boy am I glad or am I glad! She does wonders with creating perfect Rabba Ve's! Since I caught up with LI very recently and as it is still fresh in my mind, I could totally see where you were coming from when you were describing Payal. LL definitely created quite a different Payal, let's just say a Payal with a voice not only Payal but all her characters are very well developed. Raizada's musings here killed me. I was grinning and laughing at his behaviour. I think you describe our ASR so naturally that one can't help but picture every single expression on his face. The reference to Make Me Love was used rather cleverly too, I couldn't stop lauging at Khushi's outraged expressions. OH even just imagining Arnav and Khushi lying down on the recliner and reading FF's on IF in itself paints a pretty amusing picture!

Absolutely Loved this dedication and looking forward to reading more! :-)

PS. I was at work so didn't read your note in the end properly but now that I've read it properly I am having another crack up session! So much for me thinking your note in the begining of this chapter is completely genuine and not a modified version of LL's notes!😆

Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago