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greshu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

hey nice story, continue with more...

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esha85

@esha85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

A very beautiful and touching story...loved it...you should write more..

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tabzz

@tabzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Excellent And Very Touchy 😊

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Lovely OS...it was really touchy how arnav and khushi supported each other. ...beautiful

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

One word to describe it. BRILLIANT.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

awww that was beautiful
so he did walk again
but would have given up if not for her
wow that was just what they both needed one another right

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

A beautiful, inspirational tale of love. You 're a very gifted writer, Shikha!

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

OMG !! I have no words for this..!

It was simply fabulous..

Very Very beautifully written..

It was so emotional...and heart touching !

Amazing yaar...

Really loved it !

I loved the characters..

And the story was lovely !

It wasn't a one shot , it was a full fledged story , and an extremely marvelous concept !

The Name was superb as well.

You totally nailed it !

Kudos.

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Anon

@infiresmayn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

I honestly just don't know how you do it..

How you come up with the most mind-blowing plots and how you execute each OS/SS/FF so flawlessly is truly a sign of how very gifted you are.

And this.. this was honestly a masterpiece. I'm so sorry that I've spent so long away from your fantastic work, I really am - real life has just kept me far too busy for my liking, but when I saw your email today, I knew I just had to read some of your sheer brilliance.

And I was not disappointed; I loved every bit of it.

I loved that little bit of ambiguity you put in when you talked about her wedding day - the second you mentioned that "that boy was long gone", I had a mini panic attack, fearing the worst! But their interaction after the wedding obviously cleared things up and had my inner fangirl flailing and swooning 😆

But seriously, I think most of all, I loved the amount of emotion in this; be it you describing his dad's guilt, Arnav's almost debilitating fear of losing Khushi or the mention of Khushi's own fears and insecurities.

A job very, very, very, very well done! 👏🤗

And thank you for still sending me all the emails, even though I don't get a lot of time to read them all

I promise I'll get through everything.. eventually 😕