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pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Awesome OS

Loved it

Poor arnav had an accident even i cried reading it but khushi supported him through all this

And they got married too...lovely

Very beautifully written dear

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Ayesha Farha

@oOChaiBiskutOo

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Ok i know i am horrible p\cos i am extremely late!! But kya karoon exams have kept me actually keeping me busy with the end sem approaching!!Ohk enough of bakwaas!!

Shikha...truly beautiful story!! I donno where to start!!

The fact that Arnav was Khushi's crush at school?? I always keep dreaming about it!! i even have a stuid story in my mind but i dont think i will be able to even write one update let alone post it here!! Anyways...how u depict khushi's feeling when she appraches his ward was sooo real!! I mean u knw how it feels ryt?? to go n stand in front of ur crush??

And i thought arnav was being the brave boy he seems to be...but Khushi's support had helped him...he will obviously be afraid to fall!!

How to be brave..How can I love

When I'm afraid to fall??

Oh i quoted lyrics from "A thousand years" cos thats wat came to my mind when i wrote this comment!!

Just amazing Shikha!! <3

P.S-I donno wat rubbish i filled in there in the form of a coment..i m sorry if u dont understand anything...but u knw i love ur stories ryt?? so..Bhavnaon ko samjho!!😆😉

Edited by ayeshafarhabs - 12 years ago

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darya20

@darya20

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Superb fantastic lovely update

Loved evert bit of it

It was fantastic

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IPKlover

@IPKlover

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Absolutely adorable! Loved every bit of it! You are a gifted writer! You can easily bring a tear to our eyes! 👏👏👏

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

absolutely amazing.

Arnav's confession touched my heart:)

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Khushi stuck by his side through the tough times and never gave up on him.
Finally they got their happiness.

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barbiebala

@barbiebala

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

wow nice story
both had their own fear
but khushi was there when arnav needed the most
they overcame their fear and lead happy married life.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

That was lovely, Shikha!

Loved reading it.

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foesb

@foesb

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Awesome OS! Maybe it wasn't very significant but I really loved the way you have explained Khushi's appearance and her fidgety self when going to meet Arnav in the hospital with her father, it was very beautifully penned down. And the conversation between the duo in the end,Arnav trying to make Khushi see his genuine love for her, both having their own fears bout each other,but only they will be the remedy for each other as well, that was very nicely portrayed!

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chocodilla

@chocodilla

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

It is so beautiful! Awesome..

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