ArHi SS: Baby, Hold On *Part 5 TROUBLE, Pg 1* (NEW Thread link, pg132) - Page 76

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Posted: 11 years ago
oh! We get a Mr Sexy's view. Hmmm aag barabar lagi hai. Lol, buaji and her songs was epic!
Hayye lover's park
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh god i was just ROFLing reading d update 🤣

buaji singing "tip tip barsa paani",hahahaha 🤣

truly i can understnd arnav's condition 😆

gosh just imagining d scene of buaji singing that sizzling number nd arnav all stuck up wit khushi,poor guy neither can he enjoy khushi holding his hands nd sleeping nor can he laugh at buaji's singing,oh goddd didu me still laughing 🤣

buaji got dis song to sing nd dat too in d middle of d night wen she got up to drink water,hahahaha 😆

nd arnav,finally his point of view nd d way he is feeling for khushi,lol 😆

so he is already dreaming abt her spending night wit her nd was enjoying her shocked exprssion nd sumwhere he hided his growing desires behind his sexy smirk..!

Loved it how he thought of shyam,hahaha polka dot guy 🤣

truly how can sumone beautiful like khushi get engaged wit dat shyam,ewww i am also feeling terrible thinking d same 😉

nd d way he walked to see whether she has slept or not,hayeee me loving it nd den she slept wit his hands keeping it under her cheeks,awww dats sooo sweet nd he could not hlp but enjoyed it throughly..! ❤️

so buaji interrupted khushi's dream,aha bad bad thing indeed nd she was thinking dat arnav's hands touched her cheek in her dream,ahem that was not dream but reality nd i am waiting wen will she cum to knw abt dis from arnav nd den her shocking xpression,oho dat will b damn funny to see 😆

so they got all stuck up in d park nd Mr.Sexy is all set to save his sushi nd his sushi also just listened to him nd followed his intructions nd finally they pretended to b a couple much in love passionately kissing each other nd d way he winked at her moaning her name,oho dat was simply d best..! 😛

goshhh me loving it how khushi just got all lost in their fake kiss nd aftr finishing d kiss arnav finally said it all claiming dat he has done nothng much as he will take back watever hlp he has done to her from her,aha business minded 😉

nd straight away he demanded a kiss from her,buhahahaha 😉

me just cant wait to read d nxt chappy 😳

sushi to kiss Mr.sexy,aha aha me gonna love it for sure 😛

lovely chappy 👏

loved it to bits ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey!
Thanks for the PM.
I do appreciate it 😃
Well-written.
All smiles here ... 😆 ...
Buaji is hilarious, bless her. If only she'd seen Arnav and erm ... Sushi 😉😳 ... in the sitting room ... I don't think she would be very please - but I'm glad that she didn't see them. Phew!
As for the Lovers Park as Khushi calls it, well trust Arnav to find a way for himself to benefit from helping out Khushi. The question is now ... will Sushi give in to temptation ???
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Posted: 11 years ago
do u even need to ask how we felt abt it. it is one of ur most romantic work. well im kind of partial towards desert heat but this is slowly creeping up
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Posted: 11 years ago
So close and no kiss..
Go and get it frm her raizada!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update. Finally an insight into Arnav's mind and I must say it was worth the wait. Enjoyed reading every bit of the chapter. Arhi were fun yet full of romance and this flirty Arnav is like cherry on top.

If reading about Buaji's singing was fun, Khushi thinking everything to be a dream and buaji's singing a romantic background score was just hilarious.

Loved how Arnav saved Khushi and him to be seen together. *blushing* Arnav just missed hearing his nickname. I would like to read his reaction when he knows Khushi calls him Mr. Sexy.

I know that you update this story more frequently than others. And yet I am going to ask you to update soon. Coz I just can't seem to have any patience.
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Posted: 11 years ago
thats wat i call a fantabulous update! it was awesome and super cute
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow! superb update...😆
arnav also likes khushi...
his thought explained beautifully...
maddy bua tip tip barsa pani...🤣
this update moment of laugh this is...🤣
really this bua n niece falling arnav in trouble...
wow! khushi in sleep kissed arnav's palm...😳
OMG arnav have best way to save khushi...
behind the tree hugging...
arnav wants kiss...😛
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ha ha that was super zabardast update
OH MY GOD!!! Buaji ha ha I just can't imagine her moving to that song, it was hilarious
Wow arhi caught up in lover's park and what a way to hide 😳
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb and hilarious update...something something brewing inbtwn them...especially for Mr.Sexy...So was his first step...'Kiss me'...Sankadevi is drowning...waiting for the next...

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